Study— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 语法和句子结构需要更准确，避免重复和语音犹豫。回答应开门见山（主题句），然后用一到两句补充细节并使用连接词。注意动词时态和冠词（如“I am learning”，“a printing major/major in printing”, “an artist”）。

Example: I am a student at Xiamen University, majoring in printing. I enjoy printing as both my major and hobby, and I hope to become an artist because creating prints makes me very happy.

Suggestion: 回答需要更简洁和有条理，避免重复和犹豫。先给出明确地点，然后用连接词补充频率或原因。用词要自然（例如“in my dorm”或“in the library”）。

Example: I usually study in my dormitory at the university, but I occasionally study in the library on weekends because the library is quieter and helps me focus.

Suggestion: 表达要更连贯，使用连接词并解释原因。避免模糊短语（如“concentrate change”）。可以说清楚安静如何帮助学习并给出具体例子。

Example: Yes, it is a good place to study because it is very quiet, which helps me concentrate better. For example, I can read and finish assignments faster there without distractions.

Suggestion: 回答需更具体并纠正用词（如“comfortable chairs”而不是 “dead chairs”）。先直接回答是否希望改变，再列举具体改进项并解释原因。避免含糊和犹豫词。

Example: Yes, I would like some changes. For instance, better lighting and comfortable chairs would make long study sessions easier, and having more computers or charging points would help students use digital resources.

Suggestion: 回答需更清晰、语法正确并具体说明计划。先陈述目标（比如读研），然后解释原因及具体打算（如研究领域、时间或技能提升）。避免重复和不完整句子。

Example: In the future I plan to pursue a master's degree in printing or visual arts because I want to improve my technical skills and academic writing. I hope to focus on printmaking techniques and develop a stronger portfolio for my career.

× I'm a student and I learning in Xiamen University and my major is printing.

✓ I'm a student and I study at Xiamen University; my major is Printing.

句子中使用现在进行时“I learning”不正确。此处描述习惯性或持续的状态，应使用一般现在时“study”。另外，介词搭配为“study at a university”。建议使用分号或连词分开两个独立分句。

× Uh, you know the print is my favorite hobby so I'm I want to be a artist so it make me so happy in the lesson.

✓ Uh, you know printing is my favorite hobby, so I want to be an artist; it makes me very happy in lessons.

“the print”用法不当，表示爱好时应为动名词或抽象名词“printing”。“a artist”中不定冠词与以元音音素开头的名词不匹配，应为“an artist”。另外主语和谓语配合错误，“it make”应为“三单”形式“it makes”。建议将句子拆分为更清晰的句子，并使用一般现在时描述常态。

× Well, I usually study in my accommodation in our school, umm, occasionally I usually I occasionally I will choose learning in library, uh, on the weekend, uh, which I have a leisure time.

✓ Well, I usually study in my accommodation at our school. Occasionally I choose to study in the library on weekends when I have free time.

英语中一般说“accommodation at the school”或“on campus”，不说“in my accommodation in our school”。“learning in library”应为“study in the library”或“choose to study in the library”。“on the weekend”常用复数形式“on weekends”或“at the weekend（英）”。句子过于重复，应简化并用一般现在时描述习惯性动作。

× So, umm, because they.

✓ So, umm, because it's quiet there, I can concentrate better.

原句不完整，只有连词“because”但缺少主句或从句的完整内容。需要补全原因和结果，构成完整句子。建议写出完整的主谓结构并说明具体原因。

× Yeah. And the first advantage is uh, very quiet.

✓ Yeah. The first advantage is that it is very quiet.

“the first advantage is very quiet”缺少连接结构，应使用“is that it is”或将“very quiet”作表语，但需明确指代“it”。建议补全从句或使用完整的系表结构。

× You know, the quiet can help you can uh, into the concentrate change uh, repeatedly.

✓ You know, the quiet can help you concentrate and focus repeatedly.

原句有重复助动词“can help you can”，且“into the concentrate change”错误且不通顺，应改为“help you concentrate”或“help you focus”。建议使用动词原形跟在“help”之后（help + do）。

× So I think so I think it is good place for.

✓ So I think it is a good place to study.

原句冗余且不完整，“good place for”后面缺少动名词或名词短语。应补全“to study”或“for studying”。同时删除重复“so I think”。

× To be honest, I want to have a better environment, workplace, umm and and a dead chairs umm, if I can trace I will have more, uh, some technology to help people.

✓ To be honest, I would like a better environment and workplace, and better chairs. If possible, I would like more technology to help people.

原句中“a dead chairs”语法与语义均错误，复数名词应与冠词一致且“dead”不合适描述椅子，改为“better chairs”。“if I can trace”不明，应改为条件从句“If possible”或“If I can afford it/If available”。动词时态和礼貌表达建议使用“would like”。

× Well to be honest in future I want to get high level degrees such as master such as.

✓ Well, to be honest, in the future I want to obtain higher-level degrees, such as a master's degree.

原句“high level degrees such as master such as”表达重复且不规范。应使用“higher-level degrees”并具体说“a master's degree”。“in future”更常见为“in the future”。

× Because improve my skills and such as reading or writing.

✓ Because they will improve my skills, such as reading and writing.

原句缺少主语和完整谓语，使用不定式或从句更合适。应添加主语“they”（指学位）和将动词变为将来时“will improve”以匹配前句的未来计划。并且列举项用“and”连接“reading and writing”。