Study— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答应更流利并避免填充词（如“uh”）。先直接回答，然后用简短补充说明专业和年级。注意发音“robot”和“engineering”。建议在一句话内完成主干信息，不超过5句。

Example: I'm a first-year student studying robotic engineering. I'm focusing on introductory courses and practical labs this year.

Suggestion: 句子结构需要更自然，使用正确的介词和主谓一致。可以先给出学校名称，再说明专业。保持句子简洁并注意冠词和动词形式。

Example: I study at Northeast University, where I'm majoring in robotic engineering.

Suggestion: 回答内容不错，但句子略长且有语法错误（如冠词、单复数）。使用连接词使逻辑更清晰，并提供一两点具体例子（例如哪些设施、什么比赛）。

Example: Yes, it's a great place to study because the campus is very scenic and we have modern labs and workshops. For example, the university provides a robotics lab with 3D printers and testing equipment, which helps students participate in national competitions.

Suggestion: 回答语句混乱且词汇使用错误（如把“canteen/cafeteria”误说为“cartoon”）。需要先明确想改变的具体方面，用简单句表达原因并提供建议。避免重复与支吾。

Example: Yes, I would like them to improve the cafeteria. The food quality is not very good, so I hope the university can offer more varied and tasty meal options.

Suggestion: 回答含混且时态不一致（应使用将来时或计划表述），并且最后一句与问题不太相关。应先明确未来计划（如继续深造、参加比赛、实习），并给出具体步骤或时间框架。

Example: In the future, I plan to achieve high grades in my major and take part in major robotics competitions next year. I also intend to apply for internships at tech companies to gain practical experience.

× I study in Northeast University and major is robot engineering.

✓ I study at Northeast University and my major is robot engineering.

这个句子存在主谓结构和介词使用问题（主语 'I' 后的谓语和第二部分缺少主语）。首先，表示读某所大学通常用介词 'at' 而不是 'in'。其次，'major is robot engineering' 缺少主语，应改为 'my major is...' 以保持主谓一致和句子完整。建议把句子拆成两部分或用连词连接，并为第二部分提供明确主语。

× Yeah, it's really good place because our university has the beautiful scenery and some advanced facility for students to study and have more opportunities to attend the competition.

✓ Yeah, it's a really good place because our university has beautiful scenery and some advanced facilities for students to study and have more opportunities to attend competitions.

句中有多个介词/冠词和可数名词使用错误。'good place' 前需不定冠词 'a'；'the beautiful scenery' 中 scenery 是不可数，通常不用 'the'；'some advanced facility' 中 facility 应为复数 'facilities'；'attend the competition' 若泛指多场比赛，应使用复数 'competitions' 或去掉 'the'。建议注意可数/不可数名词和冠词的一致性。

× Yeah, I really like them to have make some change because make some change because in our university the cartoon is not really well and I like to I want to university to have another cartoon which is very delicious.

✓ Yeah, I'd really like them to make some changes because the food on campus isn't very good, and I want the university to have other dishes that are delicious.

原句结构混乱，存在句子结构错误（重复短语、代词不明确、词序错误）。'like them to have make' 是不正确的动词结构，应为 'I'd like them to make' 或 'I want them to make'。'make some change' 中 'change' 应为复数 'changes'。句中 'cartoon' 显然是错误词（可能想说 'canteen/food/dishes'），应替换为合适名词。'not really well' 也是错误用法，形容食物质量应使用形容词短语如 'isn't very good'。建议重构句子，明确主语，使用正确动词短语并选择合适名词。

× Oh well, I started to get a great mark in my major and attend some important competitions in robot engineering.

✓ Oh well, I want to get great marks in my major and attend some important competitions in robot engineering.

句子时态与语境不匹配。考官问的是未来学习计划，学生应使用现在或将来时表达意图。原句 'I started to get' 用过去时且意义不清，建议改为表示计划的现在时或将来时，如 'I want to get' 或 'I plan to get'。同时 'a great mark' 通常用复数 'great marks'（多个课程/总体成绩）。

× You know, that is really important to me and also I want to have a friend.

✓ You know, that is really important to me and I also want to make friends.

代词/短语使用不准确。'I want to have a friend' 在语境中显得不自然，通常表达交朋友的愿望用 'make friends'。此外，'also' 更自然放在 'I also want' 中。建议使用习惯用法 'make friends' 来表达希望结交朋友。