Study— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be clearer, grammatically correct and concise. Begin with a direct topic sentence, correct course name, and give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid filler words and sentence fragments.

Example: I am an economics student, specialising in international economics. I chose this major because I enjoy solving social problems and using mathematics to analyse economic issues. For example, I like using statistical models to study poverty trends.

Suggestion: Provide a clear complete sentence naming the university and its location, then add one specific supporting detail using linking words. Correct grammar (articles, prepositions) and avoid repetition.

Example: I study at Thammasat University in Bangkok, the capital of Thailand. It’s near a busy road and tourist areas, so the campus is lively and there are many cafes and shops nearby.

Suggestion: Give a direct yes/no answer followed by a clear, positive reason with correct vocabulary. Avoid unclear or incorrect adjectives (e.g. 'pitiless'); use precise descriptors like 'reputable' or 'well-regarded'. Support with a specific example.

Example: Yes, it is a good place to study because my faculty is well-regarded for its strong academic staff and research. For instance, many professors publish international papers and offer helpful seminars for students.

Suggestion: Answer directly about desired changes, with one specific, coherent suggestion. Use linking words to explain the effect of the change. Fix grammar and avoid sentence fragments.

Example: Yes, I would like the university to provide more spacious study areas. If there were larger libraries and study lounges, students could work comfortably and collaborate on group projects.

Suggestion: State your plan clearly and briefly. If you have no further study plans, say so and explain why with a specific reason and timeline. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repetition.

Example: I don't have further study plans at the moment because I intend to start working after I complete my four-year degree. I hope to gain practical experience in an economic research role and consider postgraduate study later if needed.

× I am an economics student measuring in international economic.

✓ I am an economics student majoring in international economics.

The student used 'measuring' incorrectly; the correct verb is 'majoring' to indicate field of study. 'International economic' should be the noun phrase 'international economics'. Use 'majoring in' + subject and plural 'economics' for the discipline. Suggestion: say 'I am an economics student majoring in international economics.'

× I took this major because I always love the social problem solving and mathematics that also combine and go on with this subject or.

✓ I chose this major because I have always loved solving social problems and mathematics, which combine in this subject.

The original is ungrammatical and uses awkward phrasing ('took this major', 'social problem solving', 'go on with this subject or'). Use 'chose this major' for selecting a field. Use 'have always loved' for a continuing preference. Use the gerund 'solving' after 'love' and pluralize 'problems'. 'Which combine in this subject' clearly links the two elements. Remove extraneous 'or'. Suggestion: keep sentences concise and use correct verb patterns: 'I chose this major because I have always loved solving social problems and mathematics, which combine in this subject.'

× I study at Thammasat University located in capital city of Thailand.

✓ I study at Thammasat University, which is located in the capital city of Thailand.

Missing article 'the' before 'capital city' and missing relative clause structure. Use 'which is located in the capital city of Thailand' or 'located in the capital of Thailand'. Also add a comma before the clause. Suggestion: 'I study at Thammasat University, which is located in the capital city of Thailand.'

× Is quite contested Rd. Here because there are many tourists around the area because.

✓ It is quite crowded here because there are many tourists in the area.

Sentence lacks a subject ('Is' should be 'It is') and uses 'contested Rd.' which seems wrong; 'crowded' fits context. Remove repeated 'because' and use 'in the area' rather than 'around the area'. Suggestion: 'It is quite crowded here because there are many tourists in the area.'

× Yes, because my faculty at this university already one of the most pitiless faculty in my countries, my university have uh, popular.

✓ Yes, because my faculty at this university is already one of the most prestigious faculties in my country; my university is very popular.

Missing verb 'is' for third person singular ('faculty... is'). 'Pitiless' is incorrect word choice; likely 'prestigious'. 'Countries' should be singular 'country'. 'University have' is incorrect: singular 'university has' or 'is' with 'popular'. Use proper punctuation to separate clauses. Suggestion: 'Yes, because my faculty at this university is already one of the most prestigious faculties in my country; my university is very popular.'

× The only complaint about my university is that it's have the not spacious area for student.

✓ The only complaint about my university is that it doesn't have a spacious area for students.

'It's have' is ungrammatical; use 'it doesn't have'. 'The not spacious' incorrect word order; use 'a spacious area' or 'not a spacious area'. 'Student' should be plural 'students'. Suggestion: 'The only complaint about my university is that it doesn't have a spacious area for students.'

× If I finish from my study.

✓ If I finish my studies,

Fragment: 'finish from my study' is incorrect; use 'finish my studies' or 'finish my degree'. Also this dependent clause needs continuation; as a standalone sentence it is incomplete. Suggestion: combine with following sentence or complete the thought: 'If I finish my studies, I won't know what to do at the university.'

× I don't know what to do in our university because.

✓ I don't know what to do at my university after graduating.

Sentence ends with 'because' and is incomplete. Use correct preposition 'at' for university location and clarify time 'after graduating'. Replace 'our university' with 'my university' to match earlier reference. Suggestion: 'I don't know what to do at my university after graduating.'

× I don't have any study plan yet because when I finish my four year study I will enter the workforce right away because I already informed that and I couldn't wait for the.

✓ I don't have any study plans yet because when I finish my four-year studies I will enter the workforce right away; I have already decided that and I can't wait.

Several tense and form errors: 'study plan' plural is better 'study plans'. 'four year study' should be 'four-year studies' with hyphenated compound adjective. 'I already informed that' is incorrect phrase; use 'I have already decided that'. 'I couldn't wait for the' is wrong tense and incomplete; use 'I can't wait.' Ensure consistency: present simple for current state and future 'will enter'. Suggestion: 'I don't have any study plans yet because when I finish my four-year studies I will enter the workforce right away; I have already decided that and I can't wait.'