Study— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 你的回答表达了基本信息，但语法有误，应该说“I am majoring in animal science”。建议使用正确的时态和结构，使表达更自然。

Example: I am a university student majoring in animal science.

Suggestion: 回答中地理信息有误，上海不在河南省，也不属于北方。建议准确描述地点，并用连词使句子更连贯。

Example: I study in Shanghai, which is a modern city with many cars and tall buildings, and the traffic system is very developed.

Suggestion: 回答中有语法错误，如“teachers here is”应为“teachers here are”。建议使用更正式的表达，避免口语化缩写，且注意主谓一致。

Example: Yes, it is a good place to study because my university has excellent resources. Moreover, my parents support me, and the teachers are very knowledgeable.

Suggestion: 回答中有语法错误，如“there have many delicious food”应为“there is a lot of delicious food”。建议用连接词使句子更流畅，并注意名词单复数。

Example: I would like the environment to improve because the air is polluted and the traffic is busy. However, there is a lot of delicious food here.

Suggestion: 回答表达清晰，但重复“abroad”显得冗余。建议使用连接词使句子更连贯，避免重复。

Example: I plan to continue studying English because I want to pass the IELTS exam and then work and live abroad.

× I am major in animal science.

✓ I am majoring in animal science.

The verb 'major' should be in the present participle form 'majoring' after 'am' to indicate the ongoing action or state of studying a subject.

× I study in Shanghai city, Henan province, a north place.

✓ I study in Shanghai city, Henan province, a northern place.

The adjective 'north' should be changed to 'northern' to correctly describe the location as an adjective modifying 'place'.

× the teachers here is so intelligent.

✓ the teachers here are so intelligent.

The subject 'teachers' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is' to agree in number.

× but there have many delicious food.

✓ but there is much delicious food.

'Food' is an uncountable noun, so 'much' is used instead of 'many', and 'there is' is correct for singular uncountable nouns.