Study— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn khá đầy đủ nhưng cần tránh các câu ngắn rời rạc và nên kết nối các ý lại với nhau để câu trả lời tự nhiên và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên sử dụng các liên từ để nối các ý và mở rộng thêm một chút chi tiết cụ thể hơn.

Example: I am currently a student studying Chinese at Open University, but I also work part-time as a freelance content creator. I make videos where I share tips about healthy cooking, maintaining a positive mindset, and beauty advice with other women.

Suggestion: Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và câu trả lời nên rõ ràng, mạch lạc hơn. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để kết nối các ý và thêm chi tiết cụ thể về cách học để câu trả lời sinh động hơn.

Example: I study entirely online through the e-learning platform of Open University. I usually watch instructional videos and complete assignments on the website.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt nhưng nên tránh lặp từ và sử dụng các từ đồng nghĩa để làm phong phú câu trả lời. Bạn cũng nên sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Example: Yes, I find the website very user-friendly and studying entirely online is very convenient for me because I can learn anytime and anywhere I want.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn còn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên diễn đạt lại câu trả lời cho mạch lạc, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và giải thích rõ hơn về vấn đề bạn gặp phải.

Example: Yes, I would like the website to be accessible at all times because sometimes when I start studying late at night, I cannot log in due to time restrictions.

Suggestion: Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu chính xác hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và thêm chi tiết cụ thể để làm rõ kế hoạch học tập của bạn.

Example: In the future, I plan to continue studying at Open University. Additionally, I want to study nutrition because I run a TikTok channel about healthy cooking and I want to gain more knowledge to share with my audience.

× I make video and share with other women about healthy cooking, healthy mindset and beauty tips.

✓ I make videos and share with other women about healthy cooking, healthy mindset and beauty tips.

The noun 'video' should be plural 'videos' because the speaker is referring to multiple instances of making videos. This is a singular and plural issue, but since the problem is with the noun form, it is categorized under pluralization which relates to the noun form rather than verb form. However, as per the provided list, the closest applicable type is 'Verb + -ing form' due to the verb phrase context. To improve, always check if the noun should be singular or plural based on the context.

× I study in e-learning platform of Open University.

✓ I study on the e-learning platform of Open University.

The correct preposition to use with 'platform' in this context is 'on' rather than 'in'. Also, the definite article 'the' is needed before 'e-learning platform' because it refers to a specific platform. To improve, learn common prepositions used with nouns and remember to use articles appropriately.

× I just joined the website, watching video and doing homework.

✓ I just joined the website, watch videos and do homework.

After 'I just joined the website,' the verbs should be in the base form to indicate habitual actions or activities done after joining. Using 'watching' and 'doing' here is incorrect because it creates a sentence fragment. To improve, use base verbs after conjunctions or commas when listing activities.

× when I study in a learning platform 100% it's really convenient to me.

✓ when I study on a learning platform 100%, it's really convenient for me.

The preposition 'on' is correct with 'learning platform' to indicate the medium of study. Also, 'convenient for me' is the correct phrase rather than 'convenient to me'. To improve, learn correct preposition usage and common collocations.

× I can study every time, everywhere I want.

✓ I can study anytime, anywhere I want.

The phrase 'every time, everywhere' is awkward. The correct expressions are 'anytime' and 'anywhere' to indicate any time or place. To improve, use appropriate pronouns and adverbs for time and place.

× I like to play where I'm studying because I have a problem is when I started too late at night I can't join in the website.

✓ I like the place where I'm studying because I have a problem: when I start too late at night, I can't join the website.

The word 'play' is incorrect here; it should be 'like the place'. Also, 'join in the website' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'join the website'. The verb tense 'started' should be 'start' to match the present habitual action. To improve, use correct verbs and prepositions, and maintain consistent verb tenses.

× I think the website has time limited and this only thing I want to change.

✓ I think the website has time limits and this is the only thing I want to change.

The phrase 'time limited' is incorrect; it should be 'time limits'. Also, 'this only thing' should be 'this is the only thing'. To improve, use correct noun forms and sentence structure.

× My study plans in the future is keep studying in Open University.

✓ My study plans in the future are to keep studying at Open University.

The subject 'plans' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' not 'is'. Also, 'keep studying' should be preceded by 'to' to form the infinitive. The preposition 'at' is more appropriate for institutions. To improve, ensure subject-verb agreement and correct verb forms.

× Besides that, I also want to study about nutritionists because to be honest, I have a Tiktok channel about healthy cooking and I want to have more knowledge to share with my audience.

✓ Besides that, I also want to study nutrition because, to be honest, I have a TikTok channel about healthy cooking and I want to have more knowledge to share with my audience.

The verb 'study' is not followed by 'about'; it should be directly followed by the object, e.g., 'study nutrition'. Also, 'nutritionists' refers to people, but the intended meaning is likely the subject 'nutrition'. To improve, use correct verb-object structures and choose appropriate nouns.