Study— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 답변이 명확하지 않고 문법적 오류가 많아 의사 전달이 어렵습니다. 간결하고 명확한 문장으로 현재 상황과 목표를 분명히 표현하는 연습이 필요합니다.

Example: I was a student until last year, but now I am preparing for the IELTS test to enter the University of Sunderland. I want to improve my English skills for university study.

Suggestion: 답변이 비교적 이해되지만, 문법 오류와 어색한 표현이 있습니다. 자연스러운 영어 표현과 연결어 사용을 연습하세요.

Example: I usually study at the library because it has a focused atmosphere and fewer distractions. Therefore, I can concentrate better and improve my productivity.

Suggestion: 중복된 단어와 불필요한 말버릇이 많아 답변이 자연스럽지 않습니다. 명확한 주제문과 구체적인 이유를 간결하게 표현하는 연습이 필요합니다.

Example: Yes, definitely. The library is a good place to study because most people there are focused on studying, so it is quiet and free from distractions.

Suggestion: 의미 전달이 불명확하고 반복이 많습니다. 간결하고 명확한 문장으로 자신의 생각을 표현하는 연습이 필요합니다.

Example: Not really. I prefer to study in the same place because changing locations can make it harder for me to concentrate.

Suggestion: 답변이 완성되지 않았고 문법과 어휘 사용이 부적절합니다. 명확한 목표와 계획을 간결하게 표현하는 연습이 필요합니다.

Example: My future study plan is to achieve an IELTS score of over 7.0. After that, I want to attend a university to further my education.

× I was the student until last year, but now I am studying poor IELTS test to UMM to enter this University of Sunderland.

✓ I was a student until last year, but now I am studying for the IELTS test at UMM to enter the University of Sunderland.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'the student' instead of 'a student' and 'studying poor IELTS test to UMM' which is grammatically incorrect. 'Was a student' is the correct past tense form with an indefinite article. 'Studying for the IELTS test at UMM' correctly uses the preposition 'for' with 'studying' and specifies the location. Also, 'the University of Sunderland' requires the definite article 'the'.

× I want to improve my UH English skill to be.

✓ I want to improve my English skills at UH.

The phrase 'to be' is unnecessary and incorrect here. 'Improve my English skills at UH' correctly expresses the intention. Also, 'skill' should be pluralized to 'skills' to reflect general ability improvement.

× I usually study at the library because there is focused atmosphere, fewer distraction around me.

✓ I usually study at the library because there is a focused atmosphere and fewer distractions around me.

The sentence lacks the article 'a' before 'focused atmosphere' and 'distraction' should be plural 'distractions' to match 'fewer'. Also, 'and' is needed to connect the two clauses properly.

× I usually hit the book there to enhance productivity.

✓ I usually hit the books there to enhance productivity.

The idiomatic expression is 'hit the books' meaning to study hard. Using 'book' singular is incorrect in this context.

× there are only a people uh who want to study, so there is no noisy and distractions.

✓ there are only a few people who want to study, so there is no noise or distractions.

'A people' is incorrect; 'a few people' is correct. 'Noisy' is an adjective, but 'noise' (noun) is needed here. Also, 'and' should be 'or' to correctly connect 'noise' and 'distractions'.

× changing, changing study place sometimes makes me umm, makes me lonely in concentration that I I study at until this time.

✓ Changing my study place sometimes makes me feel lonely and affects my concentration, so I have studied at the same place until now.

The original sentence is unclear and grammatically incorrect. 'Changing study place' should be 'changing my study place'. 'Lonely in concentration' is incorrect; 'feel lonely and affects my concentration' is clearer. The phrase 'that I I study at until this time' is awkward and corrected to 'so I have studied at the same place until now'.

× My, my pioneers study plan is that achieving IELTS over or 7.0 Uh, it's my partner, it's my pioneer, umm, purpose of my study.

✓ My main study plan is to achieve an IELTS score of over 7.0. It is my primary purpose for studying.

The original sentence misuses 'pioneers' and 'partner' and has awkward phrasing. 'Main study plan' and 'to achieve' correctly express intention. 'Primary purpose' is the correct phrase.