Study— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is clear and provides relevant information, but it could be more concise and natural by avoiding redundancy and informal contractions. Try to use a more straightforward structure and avoid repeating the same idea.

Example: I am currently a student. I just graduated from high school and am preparing to start university as a freshman this year.

Suggestion: Your answer provides good details but could be improved by using linking words to connect ideas smoothly and by correcting minor errors in place names and phrasing. Also, avoid repeating 'I'm' at the beginning of sentences.

Example: I will be studying at the American University of Kurdistan, which is located in Doha. Therefore, I will be moving from Suleimani to Doha to start a new chapter in my life. I'm really excited and preparing myself for university life.

Suggestion: Your answer has good content but is somewhat repetitive and could be more concise. Also, some sentences are unclear or grammatically incorrect. Use linking words to organize your points and avoid redundancy.

Example: Yes, I believe the American University of Kurdistan is the best in my country because it offers many opportunities. For example, it helps graduates find jobs quickly. Additionally, the professors are very knowledgeable and polite.

Suggestion: Your answer is positive and detailed but could be improved by using more precise vocabulary and linking words to make it more coherent. Avoid repeating similar ideas and use varied sentence structures.

Example: I like the university just the way it is because it meets all my expectations. The campus is spacious, clean, and safe, which makes me feel comfortable. Therefore, I wouldn't want any changes.

Suggestion: Your answer is honest but a bit unclear and contains some grammatical errors. Try to organize your ideas clearly, avoid incomplete sentences, and use linking words to improve coherence.

Example: I haven't started university yet, so I don't have a study plan at the moment. However, once I begin, I will create a detailed plan to manage my time effectively, pass my exams, and complete my homework on time.

× Well, I never worked in my entire life 'cause I was always a student and I'm still a student.

✓ Well, I have never worked in my entire life because I have always been a student and I'm still a student.

The sentence incorrectly uses simple past tense 'worked' and 'was' to describe an experience continuing up to the present. Present perfect tense 'have never worked' and 'have always been' should be used to indicate actions or states that started in the past and continue to the present.

× I'll be moving to Dohaq to start my new life in there.

✓ I'll be moving to Doha to start my new life there.

The preposition 'in' before 'there' is unnecessary and incorrect. 'There' already indicates location, so 'in there' is redundant. Also, 'Dohaq' seems to be a typo and should be 'Doha'.

× Theirs are amazing.

✓ Theirs are amazing professors.

The pronoun 'Theirs' is incorrectly used here. It should be 'They are' or 'Their professors are' to correctly refer to the professors. The sentence is incomplete without a noun after 'Theirs'.

× Their campuses are pretty big and it's pretty clean, safe, and I just love everything about that university.

✓ The campus is pretty big and it's pretty clean, safe, and I just love everything about that university.

The pronoun 'Their' incorrectly refers to 'campuses' in plural, but the university likely has a single campus. Also, 'campus' is usually singular unless multiple campuses exist. Consistency in number is important.

× I don't want anything about that university to change.

✓ I don't want anything at that university to change.

The preposition 'about' is incorrectly used here. The correct preposition to indicate location or context is 'at' when referring to changes within the university.

× I don't think I have a study plan yet because I am.

✓ I don't think I have a study plan yet because I haven't started studying yet.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks clarity. The phrase 'because I am' is incomplete and does not explain the reason. It should be completed to explain why the study plan does not exist yet.