Study— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is clear but a bit long and slightly redundant. Try to make your response more natural and concise by directly answering and then adding one supporting detail. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Example: I am a student. I recently completed my +2 in biology, and I plan to continue my studies in the future.

Suggestion: Your answer has some grammar and clarity issues. Try to use correct prepositions and clearer sentence structures. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'like 3 to four months' and use linking words to connect ideas.

Example: I am currently preparing for my CEE exam at an institute called PPM. I have been attending it for about three to four months, and I find it a great place to study.

Suggestion: Your answer is incomplete and has some grammatical errors. Try to complete your thoughts and use linking words like 'because' or 'and' to connect ideas. Also, avoid redundancy by not repeating 'great' multiple times.

Example: Yes, it is a good place to study because it offers excellent facilities and many books related to biology and engineering.

Suggestion: Your answer is too long and incomplete at the end. Try to be concise and complete your sentences. Use linking words like 'however' and 'also' to organize your ideas clearly.

Example: It is a great place for medical and engineering students; however, it would be better if the fees were lower. Also, adding proper cooling and internet facilities would improve the environment.

Suggestion: Your answer is good but has some repetition and minor grammar issues. Avoid repeating words like 'nurse nursing' and use linking words like 'because' to explain reasons clearly.

Example: I recently finished my +2 in Biology, and I want to become a nurse. I plan to study in Australia because it offers excellent training and stable job opportunities for nurses.

× I am a student, I have recently finished my +2 examination in the biology major and I plan to be studying in the future also.

✓ I am a student. I have recently finished my +2 examination in the biology major, and I also plan to study in the future.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'plan to be studying' which is awkward and incorrect in this context. The correct form is 'plan to study' because 'plan to' is followed by the base form of the verb. Also, the sentence should be split for clarity and proper punctuation.

× Currently I am preparing for my CEE examination and I have chosen institute named PPM for this.

✓ Currently, I am preparing for my CEE examination and I have chosen an institute named PPM for this.

The sentence is missing the article 'an' before 'institute' which is necessary because 'institute' is a singular countable noun. Also, a comma after 'Currently' improves readability.

× I have been going there for like 3 to four months.

✓ I have been going there for about three to four months.

The phrase 'like 3 to four months' is informal and inconsistent. 'About three to four months' is more appropriate and grammatically correct. Also, numbers should be spelled out in formal speech.

× It's a great place to study and prefer for your examination.

✓ It's a great place to study and is preferable for your examination.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'prefer' which is a verb, but here an adjective or passive form is needed. 'Is preferable' correctly expresses that the place is better suited for examination preparation.

× Moreover, there are lots of various books related to biology and engineering field and there is also.

✓ Moreover, there are lots of various books related to the biology and engineering fields as well.

The original sentence is incomplete and ends abruptly with 'and there is also.' It needs to be completed properly. Also, 'biology and engineering field' should be pluralized to 'fields' and preceded by 'the' for specificity.

× It is a great place for students who want to pursue their career in medical and engineering fields, but it would be better if the cost were lower since students cannot afford it and other facilities like proper cooling system and Internet facilities would be.

✓ It is a great place for students who want to pursue their careers in medical and engineering fields, but it would be better if the cost were lower since students cannot afford it. Other facilities like a proper cooling system and Internet facilities would be appreciated.

The sentence is a run-on and incomplete at the end. 'Career' should be plural 'careers' because it refers to multiple students. Also, 'proper cooling system' needs an article 'a'. The sentence is split for clarity and completeness.

× As I have recently finished my +2 examination in Biology major, I want to pursue my career in medical field as a nurse, specially in Australia because Australia provides excellent training opportunities and stable jobs for nurse nursing.

✓ As I have recently finished my +2 examination in the Biology major, I want to pursue my career in the medical field as a nurse, especially in Australia because Australia provides excellent training opportunities and stable jobs for nurses.

The word 'specially' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'especially' to indicate emphasis. 'Medical field' needs the definite article 'the'. 'Nurse nursing' is incorrect; it should be 'nurses' to refer to the profession or plural noun. Also, 'Biology major' should be preceded by 'the'.