Study— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答时语法和表达需更自然流畅，避免语法错误，如“major in”应为“majoring in”，并且句子结构应更简洁。

Example: I'm currently a student majoring in International Economy and Trade because I'm interested in global marketing and business. I plan to pursue a master's degree in International Tourism and Hospitality Management in the future.

Suggestion: 回答应更自然，避免使用不准确的时态和表达，如“I'm starting at”应改为“I study at”。

Example: I study at Chucheng College of Fuzhou University, which is located in Fujian Province.

Suggestion: 回答不够连贯，表达混乱，需使用连词使句子更流畅，并且避免语法错误和不清晰的词汇。

Example: I don't think it's a good place to study because the college is located in the city center near a large shopping mall. The area is always crowded and noisy, which makes it hard to concentrate.

Suggestion: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，如“adding more quotes”应为“adding more quiet areas”，并且句子结构需更完整。

Example: Yes, I would like the study place to have more quiet areas and comfortable seats to help students focus better. Also, upgrading technology like faster Wi-Fi and modern computers would greatly enhance the learning experience.

Suggestion: 回答中断断续续且语法错误较多，应使用完整句子并避免口语填充词，使表达更清晰自然。

Example: In the future, I plan to pursue a master's degree in International Tourism and Hospitality Management. I am particularly interested in hotel development and learning how to provide better and more comfortable service experiences for guests.

× I'm currently a student major in International Economy and Trade because I'm interested in global marketing and business.

✓ I'm currently a student majoring in International Economy and Trade because I'm interested in global marketing and business.

动词major后面应使用动名词形式majoring，表示正在进行的动作。

× At the moment I'm planning to pursue Master of degree in International Tourism and Hospitality Management.

✓ At the moment I'm planning to pursue a Master's degree in International Tourism and Hospitality Management.

在表示学位时，前面需要加不定冠词a，且Master's degree应加所有格's。

× I'm starting at the Chucheng College of Fuzhou University, which is located in Fujian Province.

✓ I am studying at the Chucheng College of Fuzhou University, which is located in Fujian Province.

动词start通常表示开始某事，表达学习状态时应使用现在进行时或一般现在时的study。

× Maybe now I can think because I Will Come Back is located in the city center and the surrounding by Maxim Do.

✓ Maybe now I can think because I will come back. It is located in the city center and surrounded by Maxim Do.

句子结构混乱，surrounding应改为被动形式surrounded by，且句子应拆分为两句。

× The Maxi is a large shopping mall. The crowd is bustling and the traffic is noisy so I don't think it's good place to start it.

✓ The Maxi is a large shopping mall. The crowd is bustling and the traffic is noisy, so I don't think it's a good place to study.

缺少冠词a，且短语good place后应接动词不定式或名词，这里用study更合适。

× For example, adding more quotes and comfortable seats would help students concentrate better.

✓ For example, adding more quiet areas and comfortable seats would help students concentrate better.

quotes（报价）用词不当，应为quiet areas（安静的区域）以符合语境。

× Additionally, upgrading the technology and resources available, such as faster Wi-Fi and more modern computer was greatly enhanced learning experience.

✓ Additionally, upgrading the technology and resources available, such as faster Wi-Fi and more modern computers, greatly enhanced the learning experience.

computer应为复数computers，且句子结构调整使其更通顺。

× In the future and plan to pursue a master's degree in international tourism and hospitality management.

✓ In the future, I plan to pursue a master's degree in international tourism and hospitality management.

句子缺少主语I，导致结构不完整。

× I'm a particularly interested in starting hotel development.

✓ I'm particularly interested in starting hotel development.

a不应与particularly连用，particularly是副词，修饰interested即可。

× And how can I better to help people get, uh, comfortable service experience?

✓ And how can I better help people get a comfortable service experience?

动词help后不需要to，且service experience前应加冠词a。