Study— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến người nghe khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, rõ ràng và đầy đủ hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và phát âm không chính xác.

Example: I am a high school student in Vietnam.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn có lỗi ngữ pháp và phát âm, câu chưa hoàn chỉnh và thiếu sự liên kết. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, rõ ràng và thêm chi tiết cụ thể để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

Example: I study at CCA High School, which is located on a mountain.

Suggestion: Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng hơn, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc. Ngoài ra, hãy cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể và chính xác hơn về ưu và nhược điểm của nơi học.

Example: It's a good place to study because it's quiet and surrounded by nature. However, it's not very convenient since there are no shops nearby to buy food or school supplies.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi dài và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời ngắn gọn, rõ ràng, sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp.

Example: I don't want any changes because, although it's not very convenient, I have many good memories there and I really enjoy studying in this beautiful place.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trình bày kế hoạch học tập tương lai một cách rõ ràng, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và từ vựng phù hợp.

Example: I plan to attend CCA University to study science because I want to become a scientist in the future.

× I am a student in a high school on a. Blades of Vietnam.

✓ I am a student at a high school in Blades of Vietnam.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect when referring to attending a school; 'at' is the correct preposition. Also, 'on a. Blades' seems to be a typo; it should be 'in Blades'. Use 'at' for schools and 'in' for locations.

× I'm studying CCA High school is located on a a mountain.

✓ I'm studying at CCA High School, which is located on a mountain.

The sentence lacks proper article usage and punctuation. 'a a mountain' is a repetition error. Also, 'High school' should be capitalized as part of the proper noun. Adding 'at' before the school name is necessary.

× Maybe it's a good day, but it's surrounded by trees and tree is not very convenient to have something to eat or something to buy if we need to buy something like pants or umm, something to study.

✓ Maybe it's a good place, but it's surrounded by trees and it is not very convenient to have somewhere to eat or buy things if we need to buy something like pants or something to study.

The word 'tree' should be plural 'trees' to match the context. Also, 'good day' is incorrect; 'good place' fits better. The sentence structure is awkward; 'somewhere' is better than 'something' for places.

× No, I'll also like my school at the moment because maybe it's not very convenient, but it also has all my memory in this beautiful place, so I really enjoy this since instead of it is not perfect.

✓ No, I also like my school at the moment because maybe it's not very convenient, but it holds all my memories in this beautiful place, so I really enjoy it even though it is not perfect.

'I'll also like' is incorrect; it should be 'I also like'. 'All my memory' should be 'all my memories'. 'I really enjoy this since instead of it is not perfect' is awkward; 'I really enjoy it even though it is not perfect' is clearer.

× Maybe I got my future study plans but I don't think I can do it.

✓ Maybe I have my future study plans but I don't think I can do it.

'Got' is past tense and informal; 'have' is correct here. The modal verb 'can' is used correctly, but the sentence is awkward; 'Maybe I have future study plans but I don't think I can achieve them' would be better.

× But I want to go to the CCA, UMM University and UMM learning sign in this and become a scientist.

✓ But I want to go to CCA, UMM University, and enroll there to become a scientist.

'UMM learning sign in this' is incorrect and unclear. The correct phrase is 'enroll there' or 'sign up there'. Also, unnecessary commas and articles are removed for clarity.