Study— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: คำตอบของคุณควรชัดเจนและเป็นธรรมชาติมากขึ้น ควรตอบตรงคำถามโดยเริ่มด้วยประโยคหลักที่ชัดเจน และหลีกเลี่ยงการใช้คำที่ไม่ถูกต้องหรือสับสน เช่น "grade 19" ซึ่งไม่เหมาะสม ควรใช้คำง่าย ๆ และประโยคที่สั้นกระชับเพื่อความเข้าใจที่ดีขึ้น

Example: I am a student at PH UWT Universal School, studying in the Digital Innovation class. Next year, I plan to apply to university, so I am preparing for this English test to help with my application.

Suggestion: คำตอบนี้สั้นเกินไปและไม่ชัดเจน ควรให้รายละเอียดเพิ่มเติมเกี่ยวกับสถานที่เรียนเพื่อทำให้คำตอบสมบูรณ์และน่าสนใจมากขึ้น รวมถึงใช้คำที่ถูกต้องและเหมาะสม

Example: I study at Piaggio with the Elephant School located in Saint Clair. It is a well-known school in my area that offers good facilities for students.

Suggestion: คำตอบนี้มีความไม่ชัดเจนและมีข้อผิดพลาดทางไวยากรณ์ รวมถึงคำที่ไม่เหมาะสม ควรใช้ประโยคที่ชัดเจนและเชื่อมโยงความคิดด้วยคำเชื่อมเพื่อให้คำตอบสมบูรณ์และเข้าใจง่าย

Example: In my opinion, it is a very good place to study because the teachers always support students' interests and activities. They encourage us to enjoy learning and participate in various school events.

Suggestion: คำตอบนี้ไม่ชัดเจนและมีข้อผิดพลาดทางไวยากรณ์ รวมถึงการใช้คำที่ไม่เหมาะสม ควรอธิบายความคิดเห็นของตนเองอย่างชัดเจนและใช้ประโยคที่สมบูรณ์ พร้อมคำเชื่อมเพื่อความลื่นไหล

Example: I would like the school to change the policy about bags. Currently, we can only use the school bag, but I find it uncomfortable and it hurts my back. Allowing other types of bags would be better for students' comfort.

Suggestion: คำตอบนี้ควรชัดเจนและใช้คำที่ถูกต้อง เช่น "hidden university" ควรเป็น "my chosen university" หรือชื่อมหาวิทยาลัยจริง และควรขยายความเพิ่มเติมเกี่ยวกับแผนการศึกษาในอนาคต

Example: I plan to study medical technology at my chosen university. Currently, I am preparing myself by studying hard and taking relevant courses to achieve this goal.

× I'm a student clearly study at pH UWT Universal school in grade 19 digital innovation classroom.

✓ I'm a student clearly studying at pH UWT Universal School in grade 19 digital innovation classroom.

The verb 'study' should be in the present participle form 'studying' to correctly follow 'I'm' (I am) indicating an ongoing action. This is a verb + -ing form issue.

× I'm a student clearly study at pH UWT Universal school in grade 19 digital innovation classroom.

✓ I'm a student clearly studying at pH UWT Universal School in the grade 19 digital innovation classroom.

The preposition 'in' is correct for 'grade 19 digital innovation classroom', but the article 'the' is needed before 'grade 19 digital innovation classroom' to specify the particular classroom.

× I'm a student clearly study at pH UWT Universal school in grade 19 digital innovation classroom.

✓ I'm a student clearly studying at pH UWT Universal School in the grade 19 digital innovation classroom.

The definite article 'the' is required before 'grade 19 digital innovation classroom' to specify the particular classroom.

× I'm studying at Piaggio with the Elephant School in Saint Clair.

✓ I'm studying at Piaggio with the Elephant School in Saint Clair.

The sentence is correct; no article error detected here.

× Well, in my point of view from my experience, I think it's worth a very good place to study.

✓ Well, in my point of view and from my experience, I think it's a very good place to study.

The phrase 'worth a very good place' is incorrect. It should be 'a very good place' without 'worth'. Also, 'in my point of view from my experience' needs conjunction 'and' to connect the two phrases properly.

× All of the T-shirt. There will always support whatever you enjoy.

✓ All of the teachers will always support whatever you enjoy.

'T-shirt' is incorrect here; likely meant 'teachers'. Also, 'There will always support' is incorrect; it should be 'They will always support' to correctly use the pronoun referring to people.

× Should should to study to they also support your activity your.

✓ They also support your activities.

The sentence is unclear and contains repeated words and incorrect pronouns. Corrected to a clear sentence with proper pronoun 'They' and plural 'activities'.

× Well, some of the school policy definition example like you cannot use any other bag instead of your school bag.

✓ Well, some of the school policies, for example, say you cannot use any bag other than your school bag.

'Instead of' is less appropriate here; 'other than' is better for prohibiting alternatives. Also, 'policy definition example' is awkward; 'policies, for example,' is clearer.

× Well, I think it was really unnecessary to you.

✓ Well, I think it is really unnecessary for you.

The pronoun 'to you' is incorrect; 'for you' is the correct preposition to express something being unnecessary for someone.

× I've go back every day because it can hurt my back.

✓ I have to go back every day because it can hurt my back.

'I've go back' is incorrect; it should be 'I have to go back' to express obligation. Also, 'because it can hurt my back' is correct.

× So I recommend day to live at.

✓ So I recommend not carrying it every day.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. The intended meaning seems to be a recommendation to avoid carrying the bag daily to prevent back pain.

× Well, I have a plan to study in a medical technology in my hidden university, so right now I'm preparing myself.

✓ Well, I have a plan to study medical technology at my chosen university, so right now I'm preparing myself.

'In a medical technology' should be 'study medical technology' (no 'in'). 'My hidden university' is unclear; likely 'my chosen university'. The present continuous 'I'm preparing' is correct.