Study— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答时应避免句子中断和语法错误，保持句子完整自然。可以简洁明了地表达专业信息。

Example: I am a student at Shandong Agricultural University, majoring in Environmental Engineering.

Suggestion: 回答时应注意语法准确，如介词使用，且句子应更自然流畅。

Example: I study at Shandong Agricultural University, but I originally come from Mumbai.

Suggestion: 回答内容不完整且表达不清晰，应直接回答问题并提供具体理由，避免语句不连贯。

Example: Yes, it is a good place to study because the people in Shandong are very hardworking and the environment is supportive for students.

Suggestion: 回答中有很多语法和表达错误，内容不完整。应清晰表达想法，使用连贯句子描述具体想改进的地方。

Example: Yes, I would like the dormitory to be renovated because it is old, and the roads on campus need repair as they are not safe for walking.

Suggestion: 回答不连贯且重复，应简洁明了地表达未来计划，避免语句中断和重复。

Example: I plan to pursue a Master's degree, and after completing it, I want to start working as soon as possible.

× I'm a student in Shandong Agricultural University and I'm majoring in. Environmental Engineering.

✓ I'm a student at Shandong Agricultural University, and I'm majoring in Environmental Engineering.

句子结构不完整，'majoring in.'后面不应有句号，应与专业名称连写。'in'后面应直接接专业名称，且大学名称前应使用介词'at'。

× I'm studying Shandong Agriculture University, although I come from Mumbai.

✓ I'm studying at Shandong Agricultural University, although I come from Mumbai.

动词'study'后面应接介词'at'表示在某地学习，且大学名称应为' Agricultural'而非'Agriculture'。

× Of course, you know Shandong is a preference in all cities of China. It is one of the most hardworking and people in Shandong like to.

✓ Of course, you know Shandong is a preferred place among all cities in China. The people in Shandong are very hardworking and like to work hard.

句子结构混乱，'preference'用错，应为'preferred place'。第二句不完整，缺少谓语和宾语，需补充完整表达。

× Of course, our dominati is so old and we want to exchange for a new one and our. The road in the school, it's so and it is not good for us. Working or.

✓ Of course, our dormitory is very old and we want to replace it with a new one. The roads in the school are in poor condition, and it is not good for us to work or move around.

句子中'dominati'拼写错误，应为'dormitory'。句子断裂，缺少必要成分，需补充完整。

× I want to have a. Master's degree and when I finish it, I want to go to work as far as I as as as quick as as I as I'm possible. I don't like. I don't like to do.

✓ I want to have a Master's degree, and when I finish it, I want to start working as soon as possible. I don't like to be idle.

句子中断裂，重复词语，表达不清晰。'as far as I as as as quick as as I as I'm possible'应改为'as soon as possible'。最后一句不完整，需补充完整表达。