Study— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答は直接的で良いですが、学校名の発音や表現が少し不自然です。より自然な英語表現にするために、学校名の正確な発音や「I'm in the third grade」の代わりに「I'm in my third year」などの表現を使うと良いでしょう。

Example: I am a high school student at Shijo Nowaday High School, and I am currently in my third year.

Suggestion: 文法と語順が不自然で意味が伝わりにくいです。現在形で話し、学校で毎日勉強していることを明確に述べる必要があります。

Example: I study at Shijo Nowaday High School, and I go there every day.

Suggestion: 文法ミス（冠詞の欠如、複数形の誤り）や繰り返し表現があります。より具体的に、なぜ良い場所かを説明し、文を簡潔にまとめましょう。

Example: Yes, it is a good place to study because there are many great teachers, and students can concentrate well to improve their grades.

Suggestion: 同じ内容が繰り返されており、文法的にも不自然です。理由を明確にし、繰り返しを避けて簡潔に述べましょう。

Example: I would like to have a clock installed in the classroom because currently there isn't one, and it would help students manage their time better.

Suggestion: 文法的に「study more hard」は誤りです。「study harder」が正しい表現です。また、理由をもう少し具体的に述べると良いでしょう。

Example: I believe history and mathematics are very important subjects, so I plan to study them harder to improve my understanding and skills.

× I always studied at the show, now at the high school and I when I go to school every day.

✓ I always study at the show, now at the high school, and I go to school every day.

The sentence incorrectly uses the past tense 'studied' when describing a habitual action. Since the student is currently attending school, the present tense 'study' should be used to indicate a regular activity.

× Yes, it is good place to study because there are a lot of great teacher and student can study study and concentrate on increasing study score.

✓ Yes, it is a good place to study because there are a lot of great teachers and students can study and concentrate on increasing their study scores.

The sentence has singular/plural mismatches: 'teacher' should be plural 'teachers' to match 'a lot of', and 'student' should be plural 'students' to agree with the plural subject. Also, 'study score' should be pluralized to 'study scores' to reflect multiple students' scores.

× I think that I want to install the clock because there are no clock in the classroom.

✓ I think that I want to install a clock because there is no clock in the classroom.

The phrase 'the clock' is incorrect here because the clock is not previously specified. The indefinite article 'a' should be used. Also, 'there are no clock' is incorrect; it should be 'there is no clock' because 'clock' is singular.

× So I want to install clock in the classroom.

✓ So I want to install a clock in the classroom.

The noun 'clock' requires an article. Since it is not specified, the indefinite article 'a' should be used before 'clock'.

× I think that history and mathematics is so important, so I think I will study more hard in history and mathematics.

✓ I think that history and mathematics are so important, so I think I will study harder in history and mathematics.

When two subjects are joined by 'and', the verb should be plural 'are' instead of 'is'. Also, 'more hard' is incorrect; the correct comparative adverb is 'harder'.