Study— Part 1 Report
Conversation
Part 1
Examiner
Do you work or are you a student?
Candidate
Oh, right now I am a student and sorry I am a student at a high school and I, I, I am in 12th grade.
Examiner
Where do you study?
Candidate
I usually go to school to study some subjects and but actually I mostly have style study at home.
Examiner
Is it a good place to study?
Candidate
Yeah, I think studying at home is, you know, helps me focus 100% on my homeworks or my assignments. And I also, you know, learn more effectively.
Examiner
Would you like the place where you study to make any changes?
Candidate
No, I don't want to make any changes because my room has enough learning materials or study tools which helps me, which supports my study well. So yeah, I don't want to make, I don't want to change anything.
Examiner
What are your future study plans?
Candidate
My future study plans is focusing on my favorite subject which is English. Besides that, I want I also want to get out my comfort zone so I will study diverse subjects like Japanese sign languages and playing guitar.
Evaluation
Overall
Part 1
Do you work or are you a student?
Score: 65.0Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn có vẻ lặp lại và không tự nhiên do việc sử dụng nhiều từ "I am a student" và các từ thừa như "sorry" không cần thiết. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.
Example: I am currently a high school student in the 12th grade.
Where do you study?
Score: 60.0Suggestion: Câu trả lời thiếu sự rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp, ví dụ như "have style study" không đúng. Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để câu trả lời tự nhiên và dễ hiểu hơn.
Example: I usually attend school to study some subjects, but I mostly study at home.
Is it a good place to study?
Score: 70.0Suggestion: Bạn sử dụng nhiều từ ngữ không cần thiết như "you know" và câu trả lời hơi dài dòng. Hãy cố gắng trả lời ngắn gọn, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp hơn để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả.
Example: Yes, studying at home helps me concentrate fully on my homework and assignments, so I learn more effectively.
Would you like the place where you study to make any changes?
Score: 65.0Suggestion: Câu trả lời có sự lặp lại và dài dòng, bạn nên tránh lặp từ và sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.
Example: No, I wouldn't change anything because my room has all the study materials and tools I need, which support my learning well.
What are your future study plans?
Score: 70.0Suggestion: Câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ và cấu trúc chưa mạch lạc. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, tránh lặp từ và dùng liên từ phù hợp để câu trả lời rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn.
Example: My future study plans include focusing on my favorite subject, English. Besides that, I want to step out of my comfort zone by studying diverse subjects like Japanese sign language and learning to play the guitar.
Grammar
× My future study plans is focusing on my favorite subject which is English.
✓ My future study plans are focusing on my favorite subject which is English.
The subject 'plans' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is' to agree in number. This is a subject-verb agreement issue related to present tense.
× Besides that, I want I also want to get out my comfort zone so I will study diverse subjects like Japanese sign languages and playing guitar.
✓ Besides that, I also want to get out of my comfort zone, so I will study diverse subjects like Japanese sign language and play the guitar.
The sentence has redundant 'I want' and missing preposition 'of' after 'get out'. Also, 'Japanese sign languages' should be singular 'Japanese sign language' as it refers to a specific language. 'Playing guitar' should be parallel with 'study' and corrected to 'play the guitar'. The conjunction 'so' should be preceded by a comma. These corrections improve sentence structure and grammar.
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