Study— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains repetition and grammatical errors. Try to respond directly and clearly to the question, avoid repeating words, and use correct grammar. Also, keep your answer concise and relevant.

Example: I am currently a student. I studied chemical engineering at Tehran University, and I briefly worked a temporary job, but I left because the working conditions were too inflexible for me.

Suggestion: Your answer lacks clarity and contains grammatical mistakes. Make sure to use correct sentence structure and provide specific details to support your answer. Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences.

Example: I study at Tehran University, which is one of the top universities in Iran. It has excellent academic programs and highly qualified professors.

Suggestion: Your answer is on the right track but contains repetition and could be more detailed. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide more specific reasons to support your opinion.

Example: Yes, I believe it is a good place to study because it has highly qualified and professional staff. Moreover, the university offers excellent facilities that support students' learning.

Suggestion: Your answer is incomplete and contains many hesitations. Try to speak more fluently and complete your thoughts. Use linking words to explain your ideas clearly.

Example: Yes, if I had the opportunity, I would like the university to build a sports centre where students can exercise and relax after classes.

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and incomplete. Avoid informal language like 'wanna' and try to complete your sentences. Provide specific details about your plans and use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Example: I plan to go abroad for higher education, focusing on renewable energy. I also hope to write and publish the latest research articles in this field.

× I studied chemical engineering in Tehran University and I got temporary job but I gave it up because I can't.

✓ I studied chemical engineering at Tehran University and I got a temporary job but I gave it up because I couldn't.

The sentence contains past tense verbs 'studied' and 'got', so 'can't' should be in past tense 'couldn't' to maintain tense consistency. Also, 'in Tehran University' should be 'at Tehran University' because 'at' is the correct preposition for institutions. Additionally, 'temporary job' needs an article 'a' before it.

× I studied chemical engineering in Tehran University and I got temporary job but I gave it up because I can't.

✓ I studied chemical engineering at Tehran University and I got a temporary job but I gave it up because I couldn't.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect when referring to studying at a university; the correct preposition is 'at'. Also, 'temporary job' requires the indefinite article 'a' before it.

× I couldn't endure inflexibility, inflexible working app.

✓ I couldn't endure the inflexibility and inflexible working environment.

The phrase 'inflexible working app' is unclear and likely a mispronunciation or misuse. It should be 'inflexible working environment' or 'working conditions'. Also, 'inflexibility' needs the definite article 'the' to specify the particular inflexibility experienced.

× I study in Tehran University and this is the top of other university in Iran and also it it have perfect professional.

✓ I study at Tehran University and it is the top among other universities in Iran and it also has excellent professionals.

'In Tehran University' should be 'at Tehran University'. 'This is the top of other university' is incorrect; it should be 'the top among other universities'. 'It it have' is incorrect subject-verb agreement; it should be 'it has'. 'Perfect professional' is awkward; 'excellent professionals' is more appropriate.

× I study in Tehran University and this is the top of other university in Iran and also it it have perfect professional.

✓ I study at Tehran University and it is the top among other universities in Iran and it also has excellent professionals.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect for universities; 'at' is correct. Also, 'top of other university' should be 'top among other universities' to express comparison properly.

× To be honest, yes, I believe it is for a couple of reasons. First of all, it has professional and professional and qualified staff, which makes it very good.

✓ To be honest, yes, I believe it is for a couple of reasons. First of all, it has professional and qualified staff, which makes it very good.

The phrase 'professional and professional and qualified staff' repeats 'professional' unnecessarily. Removing the repetition improves clarity and correctness.

× Uh, yes, if I have umm opportunity, I would like umm to make umm build a sport, a sport place for exercising and.

✓ Uh, yes, if I had the opportunity, I would like to build a sports facility for exercising.

The conditional sentence requires past tense 'had' after 'if' to express a hypothetical situation. 'Make umm build' is incorrect; 'would like to build' is correct. 'A sport place' is awkward; 'a sports facility' or 'a sports place' is better.

× I wanna go abroad and study there and for higher education and I wanna write latest articles about my major in energy, renowned energy, renewable energy and.

✓ I want to go abroad to study for higher education and I want to write the latest articles about my major in renewable energy.

'Wanna' is informal; 'want to' is appropriate in formal speech. 'Study there and for higher education' is awkward; 'to study for higher education' is correct. 'Renowned energy' is incorrect; likely intended 'renewable energy'. Also, 'write latest articles' needs the definite article 'the' before 'latest'.