Study— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: คำตอบควรใช้ไวยากรณ์ที่ถูกต้องและคำศัพท์ที่เหมาะสม เช่น ใช้ 'I am currently a student' แทน 'at now I still be a student' และควรหลีกเลี่ยงการใช้คำซ้ำหรือผิดรูปแบบ

Example: I am currently a student studying at an International School located in Bangkok, the capital of Thailand.

Suggestion: ควรใช้โครงสร้างประโยคที่ถูกต้องและคำเชื่อมเพื่อความลื่นไหล เช่น ใช้ 'which has many campuses and nice teachers' แทน 'it's have many campus and teacher was really nice' และหลีกเลี่ยงการใช้คำซ้ำ

Example: I am currently studying at RBIs International School, which was formerly known as Lasami British International School located in Ali Paya Thai, Bangkok. I love this school because it has many campuses and the teachers are very nice.

Suggestion: ควรปรับปรุงไวยากรณ์และคำศัพท์ให้ถูกต้อง รวมถึงใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อความชัดเจน เช่น 'The environment is quiet and free from distractions, which helps me concentrate better.' และให้รายละเอียดที่ชัดเจนและเหมาะสม

Example: Yes, I believe it is a good place to study because the environment is quiet and free from distractions, which helps me concentrate better. Additionally, the school provides excellent facilities such as a well-stocked library and study loans. For example, I can easily borrow books and feel comfortable discussing with many students.

Suggestion: ควรใช้ประโยคที่ชัดเจนและถูกต้อง พร้อมคำเชื่อมที่เหมาะสม เช่น 'I would like the school to improve the study environment by adding more quiet and comfortable areas for students.' และหลีกเลี่ยงคำผิดหรือคำที่ไม่เหมาะสม

Example: Yes, I would like the school to improve the study environment by adding more quiet and comfortable areas that help students study better. Also, updating the technology by providing faster Wi-Fi and more computers would be beneficial.

Suggestion: ควรใช้คำศัพท์และไวยากรณ์ที่ถูกต้อง รวมถึงแสดงความคิดอย่างชัดเจน เช่น 'I plan to pursue a Master's degree in Environmental Science because I am interested in climate change issues.' และหลีกเลี่ยงคำที่ไม่เหมาะสมหรือไม่ชัดเจน

Example: In the future, I plan to pursue a Master's degree in Environmental Science because I am interested in addressing climate change issues. I intend to study at a university abroad to gain international experience and learn more about this field.

× Well, at now I still be a student and I study in International School which is located in Bangkok, the capital of Thailand.

✓ Well, right now I am still a student and I study at an International School which is located in Bangkok, the capital of Thailand.

The phrase 'at now' is incorrect; it should be 'right now' to indicate the present time. The verb 'be' should be in the present tense 'am' to agree with the subject 'I'. Also, 'study in International School' should be 'study at an International School' because 'study at' is the correct preposition for institutions and 'an' is needed before a noun starting with a vowel sound.

× Well now I'm studying at RBIs International School but previously in the past it called Lasami British International School which is located in Ali Paya Thai, Bangkok.

✓ Well, now I'm studying at RBI's International School but previously it was called Lasami British International School which is located in Ali Paya Thai, Bangkok.

The phrase 'previously in the past' is redundant; 'previously' alone is sufficient. The verb 'called' needs the auxiliary 'was' to form the past passive voice 'was called' to indicate the former name of the school.

× I love this school because it's have many campus and teacher was really nice.

✓ I love this school because it has many campuses and the teachers are really nice.

The contraction 'it's' (it is) should be followed by 'has' for correct subject-verb agreement. 'Campus' should be plural 'campuses' to match 'many'. 'Teacher was' should be plural 'teachers are' to agree with the plural subject and present tense.

× Yes, I believe that good place to study the environment quite well and free from distraction which helped me comfortable better.

✓ Yes, I believe that it is a good place to study; the environment is quite good and free from distractions, which helps me feel more comfortable.

The original sentence lacks proper structure and connectors. 'Good place to study the environment quite well' is unclear; it should be 'it is a good place to study'. 'Free from distraction' should be plural 'distractions'. 'Helped me comfortable better' is incorrect; it should be 'helps me feel more comfortable'.

× Additionally, the financial such as library and study loan will equipment providing all the resource I need.

✓ Additionally, the facilities such as the library and study loans provide all the resources I need.

'Financial' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'facilities'. 'Will equipment providing' is incorrect; it should be 'provide'. 'Resource' should be plural 'resources' to match 'all'.

× For example, having a car to write from book and comfortable to speak many students.

✓ For example, having a card to borrow books and a comfortable place to speak with many students.

The original sentence is unclear and grammatically incorrect. 'Car to write from book' likely means 'card to borrow books'. 'Comfortable to speak many students' should be 'a comfortable place to speak with many students'.

× Yes, I would like pest where I study now to make some change previously by improving the study environment.

✓ Yes, I would like the place where I study now to make some changes by improving the study environment.

'Pest' is a typo and should be 'place'. 'Some change previously' is incorrect; 'some changes' is correct and 'previously' is unnecessary here.

× For example adding more question and comfortable area who helps student better.

✓ For example, adding more questions and comfortable areas that help students better.

'More question' should be plural 'more questions'. 'Comfortable area who helps student better' should be 'comfortable areas that help students better' to agree in number and use correct relative pronouns.

× Also updating the technology and resource available for Wi-Fi faster and more computer in computer.

✓ Also, updating the technology and resources available, such as faster Wi-Fi and more computers in the computer lab.

The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. 'Resource' should be plural 'resources'. 'Wi-Fi faster' should be 'faster Wi-Fi'. 'More computer in computer' is unclear; likely means 'more computers in the computer lab'.

× In the future, I plan to purchase a MA Master degree in Environment Siam because I am proposing about adequate climate change and suitable issue.

✓ In the future, I plan to pursue an MA Master's degree in Environmental Science because I am interested in climate change and related issues.

'Purchase' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'pursue' for degrees. 'Environment Siam' is unclear; likely 'Environmental Science'. 'Proposing about adequate climate change and suitable issue' is incorrect; should be 'interested in climate change and related issues'.

× I intend to study in university abroad to gain international Expo and learn more from a part in a certainly.

✓ I intend to study at a university abroad to gain international experience and learn more from participating in certain activities.

'Study in university' should be 'study at a university'. 'International Expo' likely means 'international experience'. 'Learn more from a part in a certainly' is unclear; corrected to 'learn more from participating in certain activities'.

× I hope the pattern itself will project nowadays.

✓ I hope the project itself will be successful nowadays.

The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. 'Pattern itself will project' is incorrect; likely means 'project itself will be successful'. 'Nowadays' is awkward here but kept as per original context.