Study— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，例如“Loby”应为“law”或“lawyer”，且句子结构不够自然。建议使用更准确的词汇和简洁的句子表达自己的专业和未来目标。

Example: I'm currently studying law because I want to uphold fairness and justice. My goal is to become a lawyer in the future.

Suggestion: 回答中有语法错误和词汇使用不当，如“becauses”、“atmospheres”、“resources edge”和“distr”。句子不完整且表达不清晰。建议使用正确的词汇和完整句子，并用连接词使表达更连贯。

Example: I prefer studying at the library because it has a focused atmosphere and provides access to a wide range of books and resources. Also, I can study with my friends and classmates there.

Suggestion: 回答中断断续续，语法和拼写错误较多，如“Fear distractions”应为“fewer distractions”。建议用完整句子表达观点，并使用连接词使句子流畅。

Example: Yes, the library is a good place to study because it has fewer distractions compared to home. Additionally, I can study with my friends or classmates there.

Suggestion: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不连贯的问题，如“changings”、“Library of my school was built with the school was founded”。建议使用正确的时态和连贯的句子表达具体的改进建议。

Example: Yes, I would appreciate it if my school could make some changes. The library was built when the school was founded, so it needs more modern facilities, such as faster Wi-Fi and more computers.

Suggestion: 回答中语法错误较多，如“I enter to pursued”、“Super size in international arbitration”和“other wised knowledge”。建议使用正确的动词形式和表达，清晰说明未来计划。

Example: I plan to pursue a master's degree in my field, specializing in international arbitration. I aim to study abroad because it will provide me with broader knowledge and skills.

× I choose Loby 'cause I want to uphold fairness and justice and I was there to become a lawyer in the future.

✓ I chose Loby 'cause I want to uphold fairness and justice and I want to become a lawyer in the future.

这里的choose应该用过去式chose，因为说话者是在描述过去做出的选择。was there是错误表达，应该用want to become表示未来的意图。

× I prefer starting at the library becauses it has a focused atmospheres and access to a wide range of books and resources edge.

✓ I prefer starting in the library because it has a focused atmosphere and access to a wide range of books and resources.

介词应使用in表示在图书馆内。at通常表示在某个点。at the library不如in the library准确。

× I prefer starting at the library becauses it has a focused atmospheres and access to a wide range of books and resources edge.

✓ I prefer starting in the library because it has a focused atmosphere and access to a wide range of books and resources.

atmospheres应为单数形式atmosphere，因为这里指的是图书馆的整体氛围。

× I can study with my friends and clubs and classmates.

✓ I can study with my friends, club members, and classmates.

clubs和classmates之间缺少适当的连接词，且clubs应改为club members更符合语境。

× There are few distr.

✓ There are few distractions.

句子不完整，distr应为distractions，且需要完整表达。

× Yes, it's a good place to start it. The library. Is. Fear distractions compared to home.

✓ Yes, it's a good place to start. The library has fewer distractions compared to home.

句子断裂且结构混乱，应合并并使用正确的比较结构fewer distractions。

× I can study with my friends or classmates.

✓ I can study with my friends and classmates.

这里用and更合适，表示两者都可以一起学习。

× Yes, I would appreciate if my school could make some changings.

✓ Yes, I would appreciate it if my school could make some changes.

appreciate后应接it作形式宾语，changings不是正确的名词形式，应为changes。

× Library of my school was built with the school was founded, so I think we need more modern. Facility.

✓ The library of my school was built when the school was founded, so I think we need more modern facilities.

句子中缺少连词when，facility应为复数facilities，modern后不应有句号。

× Such as faster Wi-Fi and more computers.

✓ Such as faster Wi-Fi and more computers.

此句无明显语法错误，保持原句。

× I enter to pursued a master's degree in my field.

✓ I plan to pursue a master's degree in my field.

enter to pursued结构错误，应使用plan to pursue表示计划。

× Super size in international arbitration.

✓ Specialize in international arbitration.

super size用法错误，应为specialize，表示专业方向。

× I aim to study abroad.

✓ I aim to study abroad.

此句无语法错误，保持原句。

× It will provide me with other wised knowledge and skills.

✓ It will provide me with broader knowledge and skills.

other wised用法错误，应为broader表示更广泛的知识和技能。