Study— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答时出现了重复，语言不够流畅，且内容稍显杂乱。建议回答时避免重复，结构清晰，突出重点。

Example: I am a 19-year-old student at Nanjing Normal University, majoring in history. I focus on Chinese history, especially the history of clothing in the past.

Suggestion: 表达不够自然，有语法错误和用词不当，如“over university library”、“trade more conveniently”、“Harry books”。建议使用更准确的词汇和句式，避免错误。

Example: I enjoy studying in the university library because I need to read many books for my history research. Since physical books are heavy, I usually borrow e-books, which are more convenient and easier to carry.

Suggestion: 回答内容混乱，语法和词汇错误严重，难以理解。建议简洁明了地表达观点，使用正确的句子结构和词汇。

Example: Yes, I think the library is a great place to study because it is spacious and equipped with modern computers. There are also personal tutors who can help me understand difficult topics.

Suggestion: 回答不完整且表达不清，存在语法和词汇错误。建议完整表达想法，使用准确的词汇和句子，避免断句。

Example: Yes, I would like the university to improve the environment by keeping it cleaner and quieter. This would help students concentrate better while studying.

Suggestion: 回答不完整且表达不流畅，语法错误较多。建议完整表达计划，使用连贯的句子和适当的连接词。

Example: I have a clear study plan. First, I will complete my history courses at university. Then, I plan to travel to other countries to learn new ways of studying history.

× Actually, I'm a student in Actually I'm a student in Nanjing Normal University and I'm 19 years old.

✓ Actually, I'm a student in Nanjing Normal University and I'm 19 years old.

句子中重复了“Actually, I'm a student in”，造成句子结构混乱，应删除重复部分。

× I really love studying over university library because my major is history so I need to read lots of books for my research.

✓ I really love studying in the university library because my major is history so I need to read lots of books for my research.

介词“over”用错，表示“在……上方”，此处应使用“in”表示“在……里面”。

× However, the real books are often very heavy, so I only borrow some e-books from the library trade more conveniently.

✓ However, the real books are often very heavy, so I only borrow some e-books from the library to read more conveniently.

句中“trade”用错，应为“to read”表示“为了更方便地阅读”。

× That way I can study comfortably without carrying too much Harry books.

✓ That way I can study comfortably without carrying too many heavy books.

“too much”用于不可数名词，“books”是可数名词，应使用“too many”；“Harry”应为“heavy”，拼写错误。

× Yeah, I think 80 is a great place to study because I will liberate is very large and in smart ways.

✓ Yeah, I think it is a great place to study because the library is very large and modern.

句子结构混乱，“80”应为“it”，“liberate”应为“library”，“in smart ways”表达不当，改为“modern”更合适。

× Alone what is modern computer and there are also many personal until Terra blade who can provide one-on-one sports which already has me understand difficult topic that.

✓ Also, there are modern computers and many personal tutors who can provide one-on-one support which helps me understand difficult topics.

句子中“Alone what is”无意义，应改为“Also,”；“until Terra blade”应为“tutors”；“sports”应为“support”；“already has me understand”表达错误，应为“helps me understand”。

× Yes, I would like my university to improve some area on university.

✓ Yes, I would like my university to improve some areas of the university.

介词“on”用错，应使用“of”表示“……的某些区域”。

× For example, I think the university could enforce clear environmental pilots to cave the elaborate clear and quite are.

✓ For example, I think the university could enforce clear environmental policies to keep the campus clean and quiet.

“pilots”应为“policies”；“cave”应为“keep”；“elaborate clear and quite are”表达混乱，应为“clean and quiet”。

× I think I have a pretty plan about my study.

✓ I think I have a clear plan for my study.

“pretty plan”搭配不当，应改为“clear plan”；“about my study”改为“for my study”更自然。

× Firstly I need to finish my history class in my university and the secondly I think I will travel to other countries and to know how to study history.

✓ Firstly, I need to finish my history classes at my university and secondly, I think I will travel to other countries to learn how to study history.

“class”应为复数“classes”；“the secondly”应为“secondly”；“to know”应为“to learn”。