Study— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答时语法有误，"enjoy depict"应为"enjoy depicting"，且表达不够自然。建议使用更地道的表达方式，并注意动词形式。

Example: Currently, I am a college student majoring in Visual Communication Design. I enjoy expressing ideas through visual language.

Suggestion: 回答较完整，但"studying art college"表达不够准确，建议说"studying at an art college"。此外，可以使用连接词使句子更流畅。

Example: I am currently studying at an art college, majoring in Visual Communication Design. Moreover, the school offers comprehensive facilities that help students improve their practical skills.

Suggestion: 句子衔接不够自然，"Which can help..."不应单独成句。建议合并句子并使用连接词，使表达更连贯。

Example: Yes, definitely. I believe it is a great place to study because it provides comprehensive facilities such as libraries and base rooms, which help students enhance their practical skills.

Suggestion: 表达中有语法错误，如"air conditioning's"应为"air conditioners"，且句子较长，缺少适当的连接词。建议简化句子并注意名词复数形式。

Example: To be honest, I think more air conditioners should be installed in the libraries because the summer temperature is very high. This would help students cool down and concentrate better on their studies.

Suggestion: 表达中"recharge my battery"为口语化表达，正式场合建议使用更正式的表达。"go to UK"应为"go to the UK"。建议使用更正式且准确的表达。

Example: My future study plan is to switch my major to filmmaking because I am passionate about it. This will help me improve my practical skills and stay motivated. For example, I plan to study in the UK.

× I enjoy depict everything with my visual languages.

✓ I enjoy depicting everything with my visual languages.

动词enjoy后应接动名词形式，不能直接接动词原形。这里应使用depict的动名词形式depicting。

× Well, currently I'm studying art college and my major is Visual Communication Design.

✓ Well, currently I'm studying at an art college and my major is Visual Communication Design.

在表示学校时，通常需要使用介词at和不定冠词an，表示“在一所艺术学院学习”。缺少介词和冠词导致表达不完整。

× Which can help students enhance their practical skills.

✓ These can help students enhance their practical skills.

句子以关系代词Which开头，缺少先行词，导致句子结构不完整。应改为These指代前文提到的设施，使句子完整。

× Well to be honest, I believe more air conditioning's should be added in libraries because the temperature in summer is so high so students need more air conditioning to come down and concentrate themselves on study.

✓ Well to be honest, I believe more air conditioners should be added in libraries because the temperature in summer is so high that students need more air conditioning to cool down and concentrate on their studies.

air conditioning是不可数名词，不能用复数形式air conditioning's，应使用可数名词air conditioners表示空调设备。此外，表达“concentrate themselves on study”不正确，应为concentrate on their studies。

× My future study plan is to change my major into filmmaking because I'm so passionate about filmmaking, which can help me recharge my battery and enhance my practical skills.

✓ My future study plan is to change my major to filmmaking because I'm so passionate about filmmaking, which can help me recharge my battery and enhance my practical skills.

动词change后接专业时，介词应为to而非into，表示“转专业到某专业”。

× For instance, I want to go to UK for my future study.

✓ For instance, I want to go to the UK for my future study.

国家名称前缺少定冠词the，英国应为the UK。