Study— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và phát âm sai. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề, sau đó bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên và dễ hiểu hơn.

Example: I am a full-time student at the Academy of Finance. Currently, I am in my second year, majoring in corporate finance. Although my schedule is quite busy with both practical and theoretical classes, I really enjoy my studies.

Suggestion: Bạn nên trả lời đúng trọng tâm câu hỏi, tránh lặp lại thông tin không liên quan như nơi sinh. Câu trả lời cần hoàn chỉnh, tránh bỏ dở câu và sử dụng từ vựng chính xác hơn.

Example: I study at the Academy of Finance in Hanoi, the capital of Vietnam. My major is corporate finance, and I really enjoy the learning environment there because it is very supportive and focused.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, từ vựng không chính xác. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng, có liên từ để nối ý và cung cấp lý do cụ thể để trả lời câu hỏi.

Example: Yes, it is a good place to study because it is quiet and specialized. As a finance and banking student, I find the environment motivating and focused on career goals. Also, being in the capital city offers many opportunities.

Suggestion: Bạn đã cố gắng đưa ra ý kiến và ví dụ cụ thể, nhưng câu trả lời còn nhiều lỗi phát âm và ngữ pháp. Bạn nên nói rõ ràng, sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và câu hoàn chỉnh để ý tưởng được truyền đạt hiệu quả hơn.

Example: Honestly, I would like my school to improve the facilities because some parts of the campus feel old and outdated. For example, the classrooms and library could be better organized to create a more comfortable and productive learning environment.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự mạch lạc và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, từ vựng không chính xác. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và từ vựng phù hợp để thể hiện kế hoạch học tập rõ ràng.

Example: My mother is a banker, and I want to follow her career path. Therefore, I plan to study banking, finance, or accounting at university to gain the necessary skills for working in the banking sector.

× In my. I'm in my second years are starting coppery findings.

✓ I'm in my second year, starting corporate finance.

The phrase 'second years' should be singular 'second year' because it refers to a specific year of study. Also, 'coppery findings' is likely a mishearing or misspelling of 'corporate finance'.

× Although my schedule is quite busy both. Practical schedule, but I'll enjoy.

✓ Although my schedule is quite busy and practical, I enjoy it.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Combining the ideas into a complete sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Currently studying up the Academy of Findings where I focus on cooperate findings.

✓ Currently studying at the Academy of Finance where I focus on corporate finance.

The preposition 'up' is incorrect here; 'at' is the correct preposition to indicate the place of study. Also, 'cooperate findings' should be 'corporate finance'.

× I'm born in Hannoi which is capital of Vietnam.

✓ I was born in Hanoi, which is the capital of Vietnam.

'I'm born' is incorrect; past tense 'I was born' is needed. Also, 'Hannoi' is misspelled as 'Hanoi'. 'Capital' needs the definite article 'the'.

× I'm born in Hannoi which is capital of Vietnam.

✓ I was born in Hanoi, which is the capital of Vietnam.

The verb 'born' requires past tense 'was' to indicate the event happened in the past.

× which is capital of Vietnam.

✓ which is the capital of Vietnam.

The noun 'capital' requires the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific capital city.

× An I really enjoy being a student there because the environment is very.

✓ And I really enjoy being a student there because the environment is very nice.

The sentence is incomplete; an adjective is needed after 'very' to complete the thought.

× Yes, I think it's a quiet place to study because it's awful mini.

✓ Yes, I think it's a quiet place to study because it's a small campus.

'Awful mini' is incorrect and unclear; likely intended to say 'a small campus'.

× Special especially if feel like finance and banking student there are very focused on the career goal with pray to motivating environment edition being in the capital city provides of state too.

✓ Especially if you feel like a finance and banking student, they are very focused on career goals with a motivating environment. Additionally, being in the capital city provides many opportunities.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains pronoun errors and unclear phrases. Correct pronouns and clearer structure improve understanding.

× Honestly, I like do fasa lady at my school to improve because some part of the campus feel quite old in our date.

✓ Honestly, I would like to do facility improvements at my school because some parts of the campus feel quite old and outdated.

'Do fasa lady' is unclear; likely 'facility'. 'In our date' should be 'outdated'. Prepositions and word choice corrected.

× some part of the campus feel quite old in our date.

✓ Some parts of the campus feel quite old and outdated.

'Part' should be plural 'parts' to agree with 'some'.

× For example, the class classroom Anna Library could be better organized to create a more comfortable and productive learning environment.

✓ For example, the classrooms and library could be better organized to create a more comfortable and productive learning environment.

'Class classroom Anna Library' is unclear; corrected to 'classrooms and library'. Also, plural form used for 'classrooms'.

× They train could be the deal.

✓ The train could be improved.

The phrase is unclear; likely referring to 'the train' needing improvement. Correct article and verb used.

× My mother is banking a banker on I want to follow in a hover state.

✓ My mother is a banker and I want to follow in her footsteps.

Incorrect pronouns and unclear phrase 'hover state' corrected to 'her footsteps' to express following career path.

× Therefore. I hear studying banking in order I plan to study findings or accounting at my university to gain the necessary skill for work in an.

✓ Therefore, I am studying banking and plan to study finance or accounting at my university to gain the necessary skills for work in the field.

'Hear studying' corrected to 'am studying'. 'Findings' corrected to 'finance'. Added missing words for clarity and correct prepositions.