Study— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer lacks clarity and coherence. Try to give a direct response first, then add clear supporting details. Avoid redundancy and unclear phrases. Use simple and correct sentences to express your ideas naturally.

Example: I am a student and have just completed my master's degree in pharmacy, specializing in regulatory affairs. I am eager to gain more knowledge and skills to become a good professional in this field.

Suggestion: Your answer is confusing and difficult to understand. Please give a clear and direct answer naming your university and location. Use simple sentences and avoid unnecessary repetition.

Example: I study at Ramanbhai Patel College of Pharmacy, which is part of Charotar University of Science and Technology. It is located in Anand district, Gujarat.

Suggestion: Your answer has good ideas but is unclear and lacks proper linking. Try to use linking words like 'because' and 'for example' to connect your points. Also, be specific about the activities and events.

Example: In my experience, it is a very good place to study because it offers various academic and co-curricular activities. For example, the college organizes events and seminars where students can showcase their knowledge and learn new things.

Suggestion: Your answer has a good point but is not clearly expressed. Start with a clear topic sentence, then explain your suggestion with reasons. Use linking words like 'however' and 'because' to improve coherence.

Example: The place where I study is good; however, I would suggest changes in the education system. I think the university should provide more practical knowledge because practical skills are useful for solving real-life problems.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Give a clear and direct response about your future plans. Use simple sentences and avoid repetition. Explain your interest briefly with relevant vocabulary.

Example: I have completed my master's degree in pharmacy and now I am looking to pursue a doctoral degree, such as a Doctor of Pharmacy. I am interested in clinical development and pharmacovigilance, which involves monitoring the safety of medicines.

× I have just completed my masters degree in pharmacy specialization in regulatory of fires.

✓ I have just completed my master's degree in pharmacy specialization in regulatory affairs.

The term 'masters degree' should be singular possessive 'master's degree' as it refers to one degree. Also, 'regulatory of fires' seems to be a mishearing or typo; the correct term is 'regulatory affairs'.

× They provide to me a various types of the provides me good my good academic journal re.

✓ They provided me with various types of good academic journals.

The phrase 'a various types' is incorrect; 'various' already implies plural, so 'a' should be removed. Also, the sentence structure is unclear and needs correction for clarity and grammar.

× Well, I am a student and I can enter the awesome to become a good too.

✓ Well, I am a student and I want to become a good professional.

The original sentence is unclear and grammatically incorrect. 'Enter the awesome' and 'good too' do not make sense. The correction provides a meaningful and grammatically correct sentence.

× I studied in a charger to university with this time for sure other University of Science and technology in which one of the institute a Roman by Patel College of Pharmacy in In this particular department I study which is which is This university is located in Aanand Distrait and relates this cold changga.

✓ I studied at Charotar University of Science and Technology, specifically at Ramanbhai Patel College of Pharmacy. This university is located in Anand District, near Changga.

The original sentence has multiple grammar and clarity issues. 'Charger to university' is incorrect; it should be 'Charotar University'. The sentence is run-on and confusing; breaking it into clear parts and correcting prepositions improves clarity.

× According to the my experience, it's a very good place to study because it's provided various kind of academic as well as Cochrum activity and organized many types of event when the students Anchorage order showcase their knowledge and sometimes the provider seminars so the students can gain out through there and and throw them.

✓ According to my experience, it's a very good place to study because it provides various kinds of academic as well as co-curricular activities and organizes many types of events where students can showcase their knowledge. Sometimes, it also provides seminars so students can learn from them.

The phrase 'According to the my experience' is incorrect; 'the' should be removed. 'Provided' should be present tense 'provides' to match the context. 'Cochrum' is likely 'co-curricular'. 'Anchorage order' is unclear and replaced with 'where students can'. The sentence is corrected for prepositions and clarity.

× 98 but the one at the English had the place was very good, but the changes are on the education system.

✓ The place was very good, but changes are needed in the education system.

The original sentence is unclear and contains unnecessary numbers and words. '98 but the one at the English had' is nonsensical here and removed for clarity.

× If I talk about the educational system, so I suggest to universities to provide a more practical knowledge as compared with a theory because of practicals are useful Dev day life of problems.

✓ If I talk about the educational system, I suggest universities provide more practical knowledge compared to theory because practicals are useful for solving day-to-day life problems.

The conjunction 'so' after 'If' is incorrect and removed. 'Suggest to universities' should be 'suggest universities'. 'Dev day life of problems' is corrected to 'day-to-day life problems' for clarity.

× Now I. I searching for the doctoral study order from doctor of pharmacy is ready in region I go to.

✓ Now, I am searching for doctoral studies, such as a Doctor of Pharmacy program, in the region I want to go to.

The sentence lacks the auxiliary verb 'am' for present continuous tense. 'Doctoral study order from doctor of pharmacy is ready in region I go to' is unclear and rephrased for clarity.

× Interested in particular clinical clinical development or clinical pharmacist study where I did a regulated writers or pharmacovigilance study.

✓ I am interested in clinical development or clinical pharmacist studies, particularly in regulatory affairs or pharmacovigilance.

The sentence is repetitive ('clinical clinical') and unclear. 'Did a regulated writers' is incorrect; it should be 'regulatory affairs'. The sentence is corrected for clarity and grammar.