Clothing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and structured. Start with a clear topic sentence (e.g., “I prefer comfortable clothes”), then give one or two specific reasons with an example. Avoid repetition (e.g., “very very”) and unnecessary filler.

Example: I prefer comfortable clothes because they make me feel confident and relaxed. For example, I often choose soft cotton shirts and loose jeans for long days at work since they keep me comfortable without looking sloppy.

Suggestion: Answer directly, then give a clear contrast and one specific example. Use linking words (however, but, for example) and avoid trailing off. Keep within 3–4 sentences.

Example: It depends, but I generally prefer comfortable and casual clothes for daily life. However, I choose smart clothes for meetings or presentations; for example, I wear a blazer and chinos when I have an important meeting at work.

Suggestion: Good direct answer. Improve by removing repetition and combining ideas with linking words. Add one concrete detail about style or fabric to sound specific.

Example: Yes, I do. T-shirts are comfortable and can look smart when well-fitted; for example, I prefer soft cotton T-shirts in plain colors because they’re easy to style for both home and casual outings.

Suggestion: Be concise and avoid hesitations. State frequency or intensity (e.g., “often” or “always”), explain the reason briefly, and give one example of your planning routine. Finish the sentence clearly.

Example: Yes, I often spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I want to make a good impression. For instance, before an interview I lay out a complete outfit the night before so I don’t worry in the morning.

Suggestion: Answer directly and give a clear contrast between weekday and weekend styles. Avoid unclear phrases (“my 90s”) and finish thoughts. Use one linking word (however, whereas) and a concrete example of each style.

Example: Yes. On weekdays I usually wear smart-casual outfits like shirts and trousers for work or classes. In contrast, at weekends I prefer comfortable loungewear such as sweatpants and loose T-shirts when I stay at home.

Suggestion: Good direct response. Reduce redundancy and give one specific favorite color and a short reason or example (e.g., black for versatility). Use one linking phrase to support your opinion.

Example: I prefer dark colors, especially navy and black, because they suit my complexion and look smart. For example, I often choose a black blazer for interviews since it’s versatile and flattering.

× I like to wear clothes which are comfortable as I feel pretty good when I wear comfortable clothes and I feel very very confident in them and plus they make me look better also.

✓ I like to wear clothes that are comfortable because I feel good and confident in them, and they also make me look better.

Run-on and redundant conjunctions: multiple 'and' and 'plus' create a long, awkward sentence. Use 'because' to show reason, replace 'which' with 'that' for defining clauses, remove repetition ('pretty' and duplicate 'very'), and place 'also' before the verb phrase for clarity. Keep ideas concise and linked logically.

× Well, it depends I like to wear comfortable clothes and casual clothes and smart clothes also because I like to wear comfortable clothes when I'm going for my work and when I'm at home and also when I'm going with my friends, I like to wear some casual clothes. But when I'm going to a meeting or uh, when I used to go for my classes and my.

✓ Well, it depends. I like to wear comfortable, casual, and smart clothes because I prefer comfortable clothes for work and at home, and casual clothes when I go out with friends. But for meetings or when I attend classes, I wear smarter clothes.

Multiple issues: run-on sentences and inconsistent tense 'used to go' is incorrect here. Use present simple for habitual actions ('I attend classes'), organize with punctuation, combine adjectives with commas, and replace 'when I'm going with my friends' with 'when I go out with friends'. Finish the last clause with a clear verb phrase ('I wear smarter clothes').

× Yes, I do like wearing T-shirts. I feel T-shirts are quite comfortable and and they also make me look smart. And whenever I'm at home or I'm going with my friends I like to wear T-shirts and but they should be in a soft fabric.

✓ Yes, I like wearing T-shirts. I find them quite comfortable and they also make me look smart. Whenever I'm at home or with my friends, I like to wear T-shirts, but they should be made of a soft fabric.

Redundancy ('do like', double 'and'), awkward pronoun reference ('T-shirts' repeated) and incorrect phrase 'in a soft fabric'. Use simple present 'I like', replace 'I feel' with 'I find' for opinion, use 'them' to avoid repetition, and 'made of a soft fabric' is correct collocation. Remove unnecessary 'and' and ensure commas separate clauses.

× Honestly, yes I do. When I'm going for my interviews or for my classes at my university, I spend a lot of time in selecting my clothes. Actually, I start thinking before the day what clothes should I wear and how should I look and it's really hard for me to select which type of which.

✓ Honestly, yes. When I go to interviews or classes at university, I spend a lot of time choosing my clothes. Actually, I start thinking the day before about what I should wear and how I should look, and it's really hard for me to decide which type to choose.

Use simple present for habitual actions ('I go'), use correct verb collocation 'spend time choosing' not 'in selecting', and 'start thinking the day before' is clearer than 'before the day'. Avoid question word order in indirect questions ('what I should wear' not 'what should I wear'). Finish with a clear verb ('decide') and correct preposition use.

× Yes, uh, but it also depends. Sometimes at weekends I'm at home and then I like to wear in my casual clothes, especially my home clothes, my 90s and I like to stay comfortable in them. However, when I'm going out for a work or or for my important classes, I like to wear.

✓ Yes, it depends. Sometimes on weekends I'm at home and I like to wear casual clothes, especially my home clothes, because I want to stay comfortable. However, when I go out for work or for important classes, I wear smarter clothes.

Preposition errors: use 'on weekends' not 'at weekends' (either is acceptable but 'on' is common), remove incorrect 'wear in', and unclear phrase 'my 90s' probably meant 'my pajamas' or 'my 90s-style clothes' — replace with clear wording ('home clothes'). Use present simple 'I go out' and provide a complete clause for what you wear ('smarter clothes'). Avoid repetition 'or or'.

× I like to wear dark colored clothes as I believe darker colored clothes suit well on my complexion and they make me look smart and well dressed and even fit.

✓ I like to wear dark-colored clothes because I believe darker colors suit my complexion and make me look smart, well dressed, and even fitter.

Use 'because' for reason, hyphenate 'dark-colored' if used as a compound adjective, avoid repeating 'colored clothes' by using 'darker colors'. Correct preposition: 'suit my complexion' (not 'suit on my complexion'). Use comparative 'fitter' instead of 'fit' to compare appearance. Use commas to separate adjectives.