Clothing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and fluent: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers (uh), and expand with one specific reason and an example. Use a linking word when adding the reason.

Example: I prefer wearing comfortable clothes, such as T-shirts and jeans, because they allow me to move freely for exercise. For example, when I go jogging or join PE class, T-shirts and jeans are practical and comfortable.

Suggestion: Correct grammar and give a clear structure: state your preference, then give a specific reason using a linking word. Remove unnecessary phrases like 'As you probably know' and fix verb forms.

Example: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes rather than smart clothes because I rarely have formal events. Therefore, I don't usually buy suits or dress shirts and mostly choose T-shirts and jeans.

Suggestion: Improve grammar and cohesion: start with a topic sentence, use linking words (because, and), avoid repetition, and give a specific example of when you wear T-shirts.

Example: Yes, I really like wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and versatile. For instance, I often wear T-shirts to extra classes and school since they look neat and are easy to combine with jeans.

Suggestion: Good content and structure; improve grammar and precision. Use correct expressions (much time, the uniform) and one linking word to contrast past and present.

Example: I used to spend a lot of time choosing clothes, but now that my high school has a uniform I don't. Instead, I only decide which jeans or T-shirt to wear with the uniform each morning.

Suggestion: Combine answers into one coherent response: give a clear topic sentence, then a reason with a linking word. Fix verbs and avoid short fragmented sentences.

Example: No, I don't usually change styles between weekdays and weekends; I prefer casual clothes at home and find smart clothes uncomfortable, so I avoid them even on weekends.

Suggestion: Be specific and correct grammar: name colours (blue, dark colours), explain reasons using clear linking words (because, so), and avoid vague phrases. Use correct verb forms and concise phrasing.

Example: I prefer blue or darker-coloured clothes because they make my skin look brighter and, in summer, dark fabrics can help reduce the feeling of sun glare on my skin.

× Honestly I'd like to wear a comfortable T-shirt. Uh, jeans, Uh, so that I can easily practice or exercise.

✓ Honestly I'd like to wear a comfortable T-shirt and jeans so that I can easily practice or exercise.

The original text has sentence fragments and incorrect punctuation between items. Combine items with 'and' to form a single coordinated noun phrase; the present conditional 'I'd like' is correct. Ensure parallel structure when listing clothing items.

× As you probably know, I still prefer wear comfortable clothes. I rarely wear smart clothes. I'm because I don't have special occasion to wear it.

✓ As you probably know, I still prefer to wear comfortable clothes. I rarely wear smart clothes because I don't have a special occasion to wear them.

'Prefer' requires the infinitive 'to wear' (verb form issue). 'I'm because' is ungrammatical; combine clauses with 'because'. Use the article 'a' before 'special occasion' and plural pronoun 'them' to refer to 'clothes'.

× Absolutely, I very like wearing T-shirts because T-shirts is not only comfortable it also I also wear it as to go to extra class or school.

✓ Absolutely, I really like wearing T-shirts because T-shirts are not only comfortable, but I also wear them to go to extra classes or school.

'Very like' is incorrect; use 'really like' or 'really enjoy' (adverb placement and collocation). 'T-shirts is' should be 'T-shirts are' (plural agreement). 'It also I also' is redundant and misordered; use 'but I also'. Use plural 'them' to refer to 'T-shirts', and 'extra classes' (plural) or 'an extra class' depending on meaning.

× In the past I used to spend many time choosing clothes, but now my high school has uniform so I don't spend too much time on it. I just need to choose the jeans and the T-shirt uniform has.

✓ In the past I used to spend a lot of time choosing clothes, but now my high school has a uniform so I don't spend too much time on it. I just need to choose the jeans and T-shirt that the uniform includes.

'Many time' is incorrect; use 'a lot of time' or 'much time'. Use the article 'a' before 'uniform'. The second sentence is awkward; clarify with 'that the uniform includes' or 'from the uniform'.

× Actually no. At home I still wear casual clothes. I'm not usually wear smart clothes because I think it's not comfortable.

✓ Actually no. At home I still wear casual clothes. I don't usually wear smart clothes because I think they're not comfortable.

'I'm not usually wear' mixes subject and auxiliary incorrectly; use 'I don't usually wear'. 'It's not comfortable' refers to 'clothes' (plural), so use 'they're not comfortable'.

× Uh, I would prefer the blue one or the darker one because it will makes my skin brighter and uh in the summer I won't get the sun heat into my body.

✓ Uh, I would prefer blue or a darker color because it will make my skin look brighter and in the summer I won't get as much heat from the sun on my body.

Use 'blue' or 'a darker color' rather than 'the blue one' for clothing in general (article and specificity). 'Will makes' is incorrect verb conjugation; use 'will make'. 'Get the sun heat into my body' is unnatural; use 'get as much heat from the sun on my body' for clarity and correct preposition use.