Clothing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and organize your answer: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details with linking words. Avoid filler sounds and small grammar errors (e.g., 'all kinds of clothes', 'tight‑fitting', 'on very particular days' -> 'on special occasions').

Example: I like a variety of clothes, but I mainly wear comfortable sportswear and T-shirts. On special occasions I choose tight‑fitting clothes because they look smart and boost my confidence.

Suggestion: Provide a clear direct answer and avoid repetition. Use correct grammar (e.g., 'comfortables clothes help me stay focused'). Add one specific reason and a short example linked with a connector like 'because' or 'so'.

Example: I prefer comfortable clothes rather than smart clothes because, as a counsellor, I need to concentrate on my patients. For example, wearing loose T‑shirts lets me focus on conversations rather than adjusting my outfit.

Suggestion: Start with a direct short answer, then give two specific details: the brand and why you like it. Fix grammar and phrasing (e.g., 'I am a huge fan', 'My mum introduced me to this brand', 'it has become my go‑to style').

Example: Yes, I love T‑shirts, especially Polo styles. My mum introduced me to the MMM brand and I now own many of their T‑shirts because they are comfortable and durable, so they are my go‑to choice.

Suggestion: Answer directly and organize reasons with clearer grammar. Avoid vague phrases ('some selected pieces') and finish sentences. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so'. Give a specific example of how you shop to illustrate.

Example: Not really. Because I am a dietitian and busy with patients, I rarely spend time choosing clothes. So I buy a few basic items online—like T‑shirts and track pants—that I can repeat during the week.

Suggestion: Begin with a clear topic sentence ('It depends on the occasion'), then give two contrasting specifics for weekdays and weekends using linking words ('however', 'otherwise'). Remove fillers and choose precise vocabulary ('tight‑fitting' not 'tight fitting').

Example: It depends on the occasion: if I attend a gathering I wear tight‑fitting clothes to feel confident, however on normal weekends I prefer sports T‑shirts and keep my outfit very casual at home.

Suggestion: Give a direct opening sentence, then one specific reason for your colour choice at work. Correct grammar ('suit my complexion', 'these colours', 'they go well'). Use a linking word like 'because' and be concise.

Example: I like many colours because most suit my complexion, but at the clinic I prefer green and white because they create a calm, professional atmosphere and match my white coat.

× I appreciate wearing all kind of clothes.

✓ I appreciate wearing all kinds of clothes.

'All' with 'kind' requires the plural 'kinds' when referring to multiple types. Use 'all kinds of' to indicate various types. Suggestion: Say 'all kinds of clothes' or 'every kind of clothing'.

× Uh tight fitting clothes are more suitable to me.

✓ Tight-fitting clothes are more suitable for me.

Compound adjective before a noun should be hyphenated ('tight-fitting'). Use 'suitable for' rather than 'suitable to'. Suggestion: Use 'tight-fitting clothes are more suitable for me' or 'I prefer tight-fitting clothes for certain occasions.'

× Hence I can wear these on very particular days.

✓ Therefore, I can wear them on very particular days.

Use a clear subject pronoun ('them') to refer to 'clothes'. 'Hence' is formal; 'therefore' or 'so' is better. Also include a comma after introductory adverb. Suggestion: 'I can wear them only on particular days.'

× Apart from that I only wear sports clothes and T-shirts during the rest of time.

✓ Apart from that, I only wear sports clothes and T-shirts the rest of the time.

Use 'the rest of the time' for remaining periods. Add comma after introductory phrase. Suggestion: '...the rest of the time' or '...the rest of my time.'

× Without a doubt, yes.

✓ Yes, without a doubt.

The placement of 'yes' and the phrase 'without a doubt' is awkward. Begin with the simple affirmation 'Yes' followed by the adverbial phrase. Suggestion: 'Yes, without a doubt.'

× I always select comfortable clothes over smart clothes because I really don't want to distract myself during my counselling.

✓ I always choose comfortable clothes over smart clothes because I don't want to distract myself during counselling.

'Select' is acceptable but 'choose' is more natural. 'Distract myself during my counselling' is awkward; 'during counselling' or 'during sessions' is clearer. Remove unnecessary 'my' before uncountable noun 'counselling'. Suggestion: 'I choose comfortable clothes because I don't want to be distracted during counselling.'

× Just managing my uh clothes and not focusing on the conversation I'm having with my patient.

✓ I would be managing my clothes and not focusing on the conversation with my patient.

Original is a sentence fragment. Make it a complete clause with subject and modal ('would be'), matching the previous reason. Also clarify 'having with my patient' to 'with my patient.' Suggestion: 'I would be busy managing my clothes and not focusing on the conversation with my patient.'

× Comfortable clothes helps me not only be focused but more concentrated for particular topic.

✓ Comfortable clothes help me not only stay focused but also be more concentrated on a particular topic.

'Clothes' is plural so verb should be 'help' not 'helps'. Use 'stay focused' rather than 'be focused'. Add 'also' for parallel structure and 'on a particular topic' for correct preposition. Suggestion: 'Comfortable clothes help me stay focused and more concentrated on a particular topic.'

× Ah definitely yes I am huge fan of Polo T-shirts.

✓ Ah, definitely yes. I am a huge fan of polo T-shirts.

Missing article 'a' before 'huge fan'. Capitalization: 'polo' need not be capitalized unless a brand. Add punctuation for clarity. Suggestion: 'I am a huge fan of polo T-shirts.'

× Moreover I have huge collection of MMM T-shirts from this particular brand.

✓ Moreover, I have a huge collection of MMM T-shirts from this brand.

Need article 'a' before 'huge collection'. Remove redundant 'particular'. Add comma after introductory word. Suggestion: 'I have a huge collection of MMM T-shirts from this brand.'

× I introduced with this brand by my mum.

✓ I was introduced to this brand by my mum.

Use passive 'was introduced to' not 'introduced with'. Correct preposition is 'to'. Suggestion: 'My mum introduced me to this brand.'

× Since that I started buying these kind of T-shirts and it is my only go to style as compared to any other design.

✓ Since then I started buying these kinds of T-shirts and it has been my go-to style compared to other designs.

Use 'since then' for time. 'These kinds of' (plural) for types. 'Go-to' needs hyphen and use present perfect 'has been' to show continuing habit. 'Compared to any other design' simplified to 'compared to other designs.' Suggestion: 'Since then, I have started buying these kinds of T-shirts, and they have been my go-to style.'

× Not really, I don't have enough time to spend on selecting clothes or particular style.

✓ Not really, I don't have enough time to spend selecting clothes or particular styles.

Use gerund 'selecting' without 'on'. 'Particular style' should be plural 'styles' to match general meaning. Suggestion: 'I don't have time to spend selecting clothes or styles.'

× I uh, I'm a dietitian so my most of the time dedicated to my patient.

✓ I'm a dietitian, so most of my time is dedicated to my patients.

Word order and articles: 'most of my time' not 'my most of the time'. Include verb 'is'. Use plural 'patients' if referring generally. Suggestion: 'Most of my time is dedicated to my patients.'

× I hardly have a weekend to celebrate this day with my family and kids.

✓ I hardly have a weekend to spend celebrating with my family and kids.

'Celebrate this day' is vague; 'spend celebrating' is clearer. Alternatively 'I rarely have a weekend to spend with my family and kids.' Suggestion: 'I rarely have a weekend to spend with my family and kids.'

× Uh, so I always go for online shopping and some selected pieces.

✓ So I always shop online and choose only selected pieces.

Use verb 'shop' rather than 'go for online shopping'. Clarify 'some selected pieces' to 'only selected pieces'. Suggestion: 'I usually shop online and choose only selected items.'

× I don't mind repeat them more than.

✓ I don't mind repeating them more than once.

Original is incomplete and incorrect verb form. Use gerund 'repeating' and complete the comparison 'more than once' or 'too often'. Suggestion: 'I don't mind repeating them.'

× It depends upon the occasion if any gathering or celebration is there.

✓ It depends on the occasion if there is any gathering or celebration.

Use 'depends on' not 'depends upon' (both possible but 'on' is more natural here). Also reorder clause to 'if there is any gathering'. Suggestion: 'It depends on the occasion, if there is any gathering or celebration.'

× I really go for umm tight fitting clothes to be more confident and recognizable.

✓ I usually go for tight-fitting clothes to feel more confident and stand out.

'Recognizable' is awkward; 'stand out' or 'feel more confident' better. Hyphenate 'tight-fitting'. Replace 'I really go for' with 'I usually go for'. Suggestion: 'I usually wear tight-fitting clothes to feel more confident and stand out.'

× Beside this, I always wear sports T-shirts and keep my attire super simple when I'm at home.

✓ Besides this, I always wear sports T-shirts and keep my attire very simple when I'm at home.

Use 'Besides' not 'Beside' for 'in addition'. 'Super' is informal; use 'very' or 'quite'. Suggestion: 'Besides, I wear sports T-shirts and keep my attire simple at home.'

× I love all the colors and I think all these colors suits to my complexion.

✓ I love all the colors and I think they all suit my complexion.

'Colors' plural requires verb 'suit' not 'suits'. 'Suits to' is incorrect; use 'suit' with direct object. 'They all' refers clearly to colors. Suggestion: 'I love all colors; I think they suit my complexion.'

× But if I am in my clinic, I love to choose green and white because it helps me to establish an immediate connection with my patient and I feel more recognizable in these particular color.

✓ But if I am in my clinic, I like to choose green and white because they help me establish an immediate connection with my patients and I feel more recognizable in these colors.

Use plural pronouns 'they' for 'green and white'. 'Helps me to establish' -> 'help me establish'. 'Patient' should be plural if general. 'These particular color' incorrect; use 'these colors'. Suggestion: 'In my clinic, I prefer green and white because they help me connect with patients and make me feel more noticeable.'

× Moreover, it go well with my white coat.

✓ Moreover, they go well with my white coat.

Subject should match plural 'green and white' so use 'they' and plural verb 'go'. 'It go' is incorrect subject-verb agreement. Suggestion: 'Moreover, these colors go well with my white coat.'