Clothing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid filler words and complete sentences properly (subject-verb agreement, articles). Mention one concrete example of patterns and explain why comfort matters in your climate.

Example: I prefer clothes with distinctive patterns because I like to stand out. For example, I often choose floral or geometric-print shirts that are unique. However, since I live in Indonesia where it is hot, I always pick breathable fabrics like cotton so I stay comfortable all day.

Suggestion: Use present simple and a clear topic sentence. Give a direct reason and one specific example, linking ideas with words like 'because' or 'so'. Avoid redundancy and fix tense and word order errors.

Example: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because the weather in Indonesia is usually hot. For instance, I often wear loose cotton shirts and shorts so I can stay cool and move easily during the day.

Suggestion: Give a clear topic sentence and organize supporting details with linking words (for example, 'I wear them to...'). Correct grammar and avoid repetition. Provide one specific detail about when and why you wear T-shirts.

Example: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts. I wear them to university, to work, when I hang out with friends, and even for yoga because they are comfortable and easy to move in. For example, I have several black T-shirts with the same pattern that I wear often because they are versatile.

Suggestion: Avoid stereotypes and filler phrases. Start with a direct answer, then give specific habits or a routine using linking words like 'so' or 'therefore'. Keep it concise and correct verb forms.

Example: Yes, I often spend time choosing clothes. Because I have many options, I still feel I have nothing suitable, so I usually pick my outfit the night before to avoid rushing in the morning.

Suggestion: Provide a clear contrast with linking words like 'on weekdays' and 'on weekends'. Correct grammar (word choice: 'quiet' → 'quite' or better 'neat'). Give specific examples of weekday and weekend outfits and a brief reason for each.

Example: On weekdays I wear neat, semi-professional clothes for university, such as a blouse and trousers, because I want to look approachable and serious. On weekends I wear more casual, fun outfits like jeans and colorful T-shirts when I meet friends.

Suggestion: Begin with a direct topic sentence naming your preferred colours. Use linking words to show contrast when you explain occasional choices. Be specific about why you like those colours and give one concrete example of when you choose brighter colours.

Example: I usually prefer simple colours like black, white, gray and brown because they are versatile and easy to match. However, when I want to be more playful, I choose brighter colours such as red or pink for parties or outings to add variety to my wardrobe.

× I like some clothes that having their own pattern and be somehow conspicuous towards other people.

✓ I like clothes that have their own patterns and are somewhat conspicuous to other people.

The clause 'that having' is incorrect because after a relative pronoun we need a finite verb, not an -ing form (Grammar type 8). Use plural 'patterns' to match 'their' and 'are' as the correct verb form for 'clothes'. Also use 'somewhat conspicuous to' instead of 'towards'.

× Like I don't like clothes that everyone have or everyone wearing.

✓ I don't like clothes that everyone has or that everyone is wearing.

'Everyone' is singular and requires singular verb forms: 'has' (not 'have') and a full clause 'is wearing' rather than the bare present participle 'wearing' (Grammar type 27). Adding 'that' before the second clause makes the structure parallel and grammatical.

× I just like want to feel different.

✓ I just want to feel different.

The sequence 'like want' is ungrammatical. Use either 'I just like' or 'I just want'; here 'I just want to feel different' matches intended meaning (Grammar type 26).

× However, despite all of the umm magic pattern towards the cloth, I still want the clothes to be comfortable.

✓ However, despite all the magical patterns on the clothes, I still want the clothes to be comfortable.

Use 'despite' with a noun phrase 'all the magical patterns'. 'Magic pattern' should be 'magical patterns' and the correct preposition for patterns affecting clothes is 'on' rather than 'towards' (Grammar type 11). Also 'cloth' should be plural 'clothes' to be consistent.

× Especially I live Indonesia where just like a lot of.

✓ I especially live in Indonesia, where it is very hot and humid.

The original sentence is incomplete and missing preposition 'in' after 'live' and a complete clause after 'where'. Provide a full clause describing the weather to match context (Grammar type 26).

× I actually preferred the wearing more casual clothes, especially as I mentioned before, I live in Indonesia where the weather was so hot and bit comfortable was like something that I paradise actually.

✓ I actually prefer wearing more casual clothes, especially as I mentioned before, I live in Indonesia where the weather is very hot, so comfort is like a paradise for me.

'Preferred' incorrectly uses past tense; present 'prefer' is appropriate for habitual preference (Grammar type 5). 'The wearing' is wrong; use 'wearing' or 'wear' as a gerund. 'Was' should be 'is' for a present condition. Rephrase 'bit comfortable was like something that I paradise' to 'comfort is like a paradise for me' for clarity and correct grammar (Grammar type 6 and 26).

× I wear the school to my university, to my job even like when I I'm hanging out with my friend and also when I do yoga practice.

✓ I wear T-shirts to school, to university, to my job, when I'm hanging out with my friends, and when I do yoga.

Correct collocations: 'wear T-shirts to school' and 'to university'. Use plural 'friends' and remove duplicated 'I'. Use present continuous 'I'm hanging out' correctly and parallel list structure. This corrects subject-verb and collocation issues (Grammar type 2).

× It's just like fun fact for me that for you actually I have like 5 kind of black T-shirt, the same pattern.

✓ It's a fun fact that I actually have about five black T-shirts with the same pattern.

Use 'a fun fact' not 'like fun fact', and quantifier 'about five' or 'five' and plural 'T-shirts'. 'Kind of' is unnecessary and ungrammatical here (Grammar type 14).

× Yes, of course I'm a girl. I have like all of the girls out there, even, like, we have so many clothes in our cupboard.

✓ Yes, of course I'm a girl. Like many girls, I have a lot of clothes in my wardrobe.

Original pronoun/reference 'I have like all of the girls out there' is incorrect; use 'Like many girls' to generalize. 'Cupboard' can be 'wardrobe' or 'closet'; use singular 'a lot of clothes' not 'so many clothes' with awkward phrasing (Grammar type 12).

× But still, whenever we want to go hang out, we'll, uh, say to other people that I don't have many clothes.

✓ But still, whenever we want to go out, we say to others that we don't have anything to wear.

'Go hang out' is colloquial; 'go out' suffices. The original mixes 'we' and 'I' and uses awkward phrasing 'say to other people that I don't have many clothes'. Use consistent plural 'we' or singular 'I' and the fixed expression 'I don't have anything to wear' (Grammar type 26).

× Yes, of course I wear more casual and professional clothes for the weekday since I am university student and I want to wear quiet, approachable yet professional clothes today university.

✓ Yes, of course I wear more casual and professional clothes on weekdays since I am a university student and I want to look quiet, approachable yet professional at university.

Use 'on weekdays' not 'for the weekday'. Add article 'a' before 'university student'. 'Want to wear quiet' is incorrect; use 'want to look' or 'want to wear clothes that are quiet' and correct 'today university' to 'at university' (Grammar type 6).

× However, on the weekend I usually hang out with my friends, so my clothes will be more, uh, fun I can say and more umm, casual.

✓ However, on weekends I usually hang out with my friends, so my clothes are more fun and casual.

Use 'on weekends' (plural) for habitual actions and keep consistent tense 'are' instead of 'will be'. Simplify filler words and avoid 'I can say' (Grammar type 12).

× As I mentioned before, I have 5 black T-shirt with the same pattern, so color that I like mostly more to be like simple colors.

✓ As I mentioned before, I have five black T-shirts with the same pattern, so the colours I prefer are simple ones.

Use plural 'T-shirts' and spell out 'five'. 'Color that I like mostly more to be like simple colors' is awkward; rephrase to 'the colours I prefer are simple ones' for correct adjective/noun use (Grammar type 13).

× I just like black, white, Gray or brown.

✓ I like black, white, gray, or brown.

Capitalize only as needed; remove 'just' for clarity and ensure consistent punctuation. No preposition needed, but correct capitalization of 'gray' and include comma before 'or' optionally. This addresses style and correctness (Grammar type 11).

× However, today I want to make my fashion more fun so I tend to use more colors such as like red or pink.

✓ However, today I want to make my fashion more fun, so I tend to wear more colors such as red or pink.

Use verb 'wear' instead of 'use' when referring to clothing. Remove unnecessary filler 'like' after 'such as'. The gerund/verb form 'tend to wear' is correct (Grammar type 8).