Clothing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one specific reason and an example. Avoid repetition and correct grammar (e.g., "related to" not "regarding to").

Example: I usually wear traditional Muslim clothing, especially the hijab, because my faith encourages modest dress. For example, I often choose long dresses and a hijab when I go out to maintain modesty and comfort.

Suggestion: Begin with a direct statement, then give one clear reason with correct verb forms and linking words. Avoid repeating the same idea.

Example: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because I value ease of movement and practicality. For instance, when I'm studying or running errands I choose soft fabrics and relaxed fits so I can feel comfortable all day.

Suggestion: Answer directly, then give a concise reason and an example. Use clear vocabulary (formal, casual, impression) and correct sentence structure. Avoid unclear phrases like "at or clothes".

Example: I don't often wear T-shirts because I prefer a more formal appearance. For example, I usually wear a smart jacket or blouse when I meet people so I can make a good impression.

Suggestion: Start with a clear topic sentence, then use linking words (however, if) and correct grammar. Be specific about what occasions make you spend more time.

Example: Sometimes — it depends on the occasion. If I am going to an important event, I spend more time selecting an outfit and matching accessories; however, for casual outings I choose something quickly.

Suggestion: Give a direct answer followed by specific contrasts using linking words (whereas, while). Use more natural phrasing (wear, informal).

Example: Yes. During weekdays I wear more formal clothes for college, whereas at the weekend I prefer informal, comfortable outfits when I go shopping or spend time with my family.

Suggestion: Answer clearly, then give two brief, specific reasons with linking words (and, also). Correct grammar and smoother phrasing ("in Islam we are taught").

Example: I like white and purple. I choose purple because it's my mother's favorite and we often share tastes, and I like white because in Islam we are taught that white is a symbol of purity and is commonly worn for religious occasions.

× I like to wear clothes regarding to Muslim clothes because in my religion I have to wear that, especially hijab.

✓ I like to wear Muslim clothing because in my religion I have to wear it, especially the hijab.

Use 'regarding to' is incorrect; say 'Muslim clothing' or 'Muslim clothes'. Use 'it' to refer to 'clothing' and include the definite article with 'hijab'. Also replace the repetitive phrase with a concise noun phrase. Suggestion: say 'I like to wear Muslim clothing' and use 'the hijab' for a specific garment.

× So I love to wear clothes that relates to Muslim clothes.

✓ So I love to wear clothes that relate to Muslim clothing.

Subject 'clothes' is plural, so the relative clause verb should be 'relate' not 'relates'. Also avoid repeating 'Muslim clothes' — use 'Muslim clothing'. Suggestion: ensure verb agrees with plural antecedent.

× I prefer wear comfortable clothes because actually I do prioritize my comfortable at clothes because I really wants to have nice and comfortable clothes when I was in everywhere.

✓ I prefer to wear comfortable clothes because I do prioritize my comfort; I really want to have nice and comfortable clothes wherever I am.

1) After 'prefer' use the infinitive 'to wear'. 2) Use the noun 'comfort' rather than 'comfortable' after 'prioritize'. 3) 'Wants' should be 'want' to agree with 'I'. 4) 'When I was in everywhere' is ungrammatical; use 'wherever I am'. Suggestion: use correct verb forms and nouns ('to wear', 'comfort', 'want', 'wherever I am').

× I really wants to have nice and comfortable clothes when I was in everywhere.

✓ I really want to have nice and comfortable clothes wherever I am.

The verb 'wants' is incorrect with subject 'I' — use 'want'. Also tense and expression 'when I was in everywhere' is wrong; use present 'wherever I am' for habitual preference. Suggestion: use correct subject-verb agreement and proper adverbial phrase.

× I don't really like to wear T-shirts because actually it's not that formal.

✓ I don't really like to wear T-shirts because they are not that formal.

A T-shirt is plural in form here; use the plural pronoun 'they' to refer back, or say 'a T-shirt is not that formal'. Using 'it's' suggests a singular abstract idea which is less clear. Suggestion: match pronoun number to noun (T-shirts -> they).

× So I love to wear such a jacket or formal wearing and at or clothes so that I can give the best impression to other people in my surrounding on environment.

✓ So I like to wear a jacket or formal clothes so that I can give the best impression to other people in my surroundings.

Phrases are awkward and prepositions incorrect: 'formal wearing' is wrong — use 'formal clothes'; 'at or clothes' is incorrect. Use 'surroundings' without 'on environment'. Suggestion: simplify to 'a jacket or formal clothes' and use 'surroundings'.

× Sometimes, but it depends on the events itself.

✓ Sometimes, but it depends on the event itself.

Use singular 'event' to match 'it' or change pronoun. 'Events' plural would need 'them'. Suggestion: keep noun and pronoun number consistent.

× If I wants to go somewhere that important.

✓ If I want to go somewhere that is important.

Use 'want' with subject 'I' (not 'wants'), and include the verb 'is' in the clause 'that is important'. Suggestion: maintain correct subject-verb forms and include linking verb in relative clause.

× I do have a lot of time for choosing clothes, but if it's only like casual or non formal I don't have that lot of time.

✓ I do have a lot of time to choose clothes, but if it's just casual or informal I don't have that much time.

Use 'to choose' (infinitive) rather than 'for choosing' for purpose after 'have time'. Use 'informal' instead of 'non formal' and 'that much time' instead of 'that lot of time'. Suggestion: use natural collocations: 'have time to choose', 'just casual', 'that much time'.

× Yes because at weekdays I go to college and in weekends I go to the mall or spend time with my family.

✓ Yes, because on weekdays I go to college and on weekends I go to the mall or spend time with my family.

Use 'on weekdays' and 'on weekends' (preposition 'on' for days). Insert a comma after 'Yes'. Suggestion: use correct prepositions with time expressions.

× So actually when I go to college I use formal clothes but when I go shopping with my family I use non formal or comfortable clothes.

✓ So when I go to college I wear formal clothes, but when I go shopping with my family I wear informal or comfortable clothes.

Use 'wear' rather than 'use' for clothing. 'Non formal' should be 'informal'. Insert a comma before 'but'. Suggestion: use correct verbs with clothing and standard adjective 'informal'.

× I really like white and purple because it's actually my mother's favorite color too.

✓ I really like white and purple because they are actually my mother's favorite colors too.

Referring to two colors requires plural pronoun 'they' and 'colors' plural. 'It's' with singular is incorrect. Suggestion: ensure number agreement between noun, pronoun, and 'favorite color(s)'.

× So I do love purple because it's my mom favorite and I like white because in Muslim or Islam we're teach by wearing white clothes.

✓ So I love purple because it's my mom's favorite, and I like white because in Islam we are taught to wear white clothes.

Use possessive 'mom's'. 'Muslim or Islam' is incorrect—use 'in Islam'. 'We're teach' is wrong: passive past participle 'we are taught'. Use 'to wear' after 'taught'. Suggestion: correct possessive, use 'in Islam', and correct passive verb form 'are taught to wear'.