Clothing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more grammatically accurate and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct mistakes (e.g., "I'm quite shy"), and give one brief specific detail about comfort. Avoid redundancy.

Example: I prefer comfortable, understated clothes because I'm quite shy. For example, I often choose loose jeans and plain sweaters that don’t attract attention but keep me relaxed.

Suggestion: Improve grammar and cohesion. Use a clear topic sentence, correct singular/plural errors, and link your reason smoothly. Provide a short specific example of smart-comfortable clothing.

Example: I prefer smart yet comfortable clothes because appearance creates the first impression. For example, I usually wear tailored chinos and a neat polo shirt which looks professional but feels comfortable.

Suggestion: Reduce hesitation and correct verb forms. Answer directly, then give a specific context where you wear T-shirts. Remove filler words and fix phrasing like "I might go out to many places."

Example: Yes, I often wear T-shirts, but usually smart‑casual ones. For instance, I choose a plain, well‑fitted T‑shirt when I go out for coffee or casual meetings because it looks tidy.

Suggestion: Clarify tense and simplify sentences. State your habit clearly, give one specific example (what you consider when buying), and avoid repetition.

Example: Yes, I'm fairly picky because I prefer to invest in clothes that last. For example, I check fabric quality and stitching before buying rather than choosing items just because they're on sale.

Suggestion: Use correct verb forms and smoother linking. Start with a topic sentence, then contrast weekdays and weekends with a linking word (e.g., "whereas"). Give a concrete example of each style.

Example: Yes, I dress differently: on weekdays I wear smart‑casual clothes for work, whereas on weekends I choose simple, relaxed outfits. For example, I wear a blazer and chinos to the office but jeans and a hoodie on Sunday.

Suggestion: Complete your answer and correct grammar. State the colour preference clearly, explain why with a specific description, and finish the thought about others' impressions. Avoid vague endings.

Example: I prefer blue in many shades because it gives me a calm, composed feeling. For example, wearing navy or sky blue makes me feel relaxed and I think it gives others a calm first impression as well.

× I like to wear comfortable clothes, not attracting people because I'm quite a shy people.

✓ I like to wear comfortable clothes that do not attract attention because I'm quite a shy person.

The original sentence misuses 'people' when referring to the speaker (should be 'person') and uses an incorrect clause 'not attracting people.' Change to a relative clause 'that do not attract attention' and use singular 'person'. Also use 'attract attention' rather than 'attracting people' for natural English.

× I prefer smart and comfortable clothes because presentation is the most important things for a person.

✓ I prefer smart and comfortable clothes because presentation is the most important thing for a person.

There is a number mismatch: 'presentation is the most important things' mixes singular verb with plural noun. Use singular 'thing' after 'most important' when referring to 'presentation.' This corrects subject-verb and noun-number agreement.

× For example, your dressing will give the primary impression from others.

✓ For example, your dressing will give the first impression to others.

The preposition 'from' is incorrect in this context. Use 'to others' to indicate who receives the impression. Also 'primary impression' is awkward; 'first impression' is the common collocation.

× Yes, most of the time I like wearing T-shirts, but a smart casual T-shirt because, as I said before, umm, primary impressions of others are important.

✓ Yes, most of the time I like wearing T-shirts, but a smart casual T-shirt, because, as I said before, first impressions from others are important.

'Primary impressions' is not the usual collocation; use 'first impressions.' Also 'impressions of others' is better expressed as 'impressions from others.' Minor punctuation adjusted for clarity.

× I might coming out to, uh, the every place.

✓ I might go out to every place.

'Might' requires the base form of the verb ('go'), not the present participle 'coming.' Also 'the every place' is incorrect; use 'every place' or better 'many places' depending on meaning.

× I can say that I'm quite picky because I really wanted to invest into something that I really use it for a long time.

✓ I can say that I'm quite picky because I really want to invest in something that I can use for a long time.

Tense and verb form errors: 'wanted' should be present 'want' to match 'I can say' and general preference. 'Invest into' is incorrect; use 'invest in.' Also remove redundant pronoun 'it' after 'use.' Use 'can use' or 'will use' for future durability.

× I I don't want to make a random choice and just simply buying because of the price is cheaper on having any discount.

✓ I don't want to make a random choice and just simply buy something because the price is cheaper or there is a discount.

After 'and' you need the base verb 'buy' rather than the gerund 'buying' to keep parallel structure. Also 'on having any discount' is ungrammatical; rephrase as 'there is a discount' or 'it is on discount.' Removed duplicate 'I.'

× Yes, I always did that on weekends.

✓ Yes, I always do that on weekends.

The original uses past tense 'did' but the adverb 'always' here indicates a habitual action in present time. Use present tense 'do' to describe regular weekend habit.

× Usually it's a leisure day I will just wearing a simple outfit and during weekdays which is my working days, I will always make sure to wear smart casual to maintain professional in my workplace.

✓ Usually on leisure days I just wear a simple outfit, and during weekdays, which are my working days, I always make sure to wear smart casual clothes to maintain a professional appearance at my workplace.

'I will just wearing' is incorrect: use 'I just wear' (base verb) for habitual action. 'Weekdays which is my working days' has number disagreement; use 'which are my working days.' Also 'maintain professional' needs a noun: 'maintain a professional appearance.' Added plural 'clothes' for clarity.

× I really love blue colours and all the tones of blue because it's really give a an aura, a very calming effect to me.

✓ I really love blue and all its tones because it really gives me an aura of calm; a very calming effect.

Grammar errors: 'blue colours' is odd in English — use 'blue' or 'blue colors.' Subject-verb agreement: 'it’s really give' should be 'it really gives.' Remove duplicate article 'a an.' Reorder to natural collocation 'gives me an aura of calm' or 'a very calming effect.'

× And for the for any people who will see me for the first time, they will feel very.

✓ And for anyone who sees me for the first time, they will feel very calm.

The sentence is incomplete and awkward: 'for the for any people' is redundant and ungrammatical; use 'anyone.' 'Will see' can be simplified to 'sees' for general statements. Complete the sentence by specifying what they will feel (e.g., 'calm').