Clothing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and correct repetition/grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repeating words, and give one or two specific reasons using linking words (e.g., because, so). Correct tense and phrasing (e.g., "cotton clothes" not "the cotton type").

Example: I prefer cotton clothes because they are soft and breathable. For example, cotton absorbs sweat so I stay comfortable and don't feel sticky when I’m active.

Suggestion: Give a direct topic sentence, avoid vague phrases and filler words, and use linking words to explain reasons. Replace informal or incorrect phrases ("clothing is my right", "never gonna") with natural expressions like "I choose clothes for comfort, not to attract attention."

Example: I prefer comfortable clothes rather than smart outfits because I value ease of movement. For instance, I choose soft T-shirts and jeans for everyday activities so I can focus on tasks without feeling restricted.

Suggestion: This answer is clear and relevant. To improve, combine sentences smoothly with linking words and add a brief specific example or frequency phrase to sound more natural (e.g., "often," "usually"). Reduce comparative clutter ("much more comfortable than hoodies or formal clothes") to one comparison.

Example: Yes, I do. I often wear T-shirts because they are more comfortable than formal clothes and let me move freely when I’m at home or hanging out with friends.

Suggestion: Eliminate hesitations and repetitions. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give a concise reason and an example of your habit. Use linking words like "so" or "therefore."

Example: No, I don’t spend much time choosing clothes. I usually pick the first outfit I like, so I can get ready quickly and save time for other activities.

Suggestion: Clarify your main idea and correct vocabulary errors ("former tyres" unclear — perhaps "formal attire"). Use linking words to contrast weekday/weekend choices and give a specific example of each situation.

Example: It depends. On weekdays I usually wear casual, comfortable clothes, but if I have a formal event like a moot court competition, I wear formal attire such as a suit.

Suggestion: Provide a clearer topic sentence and a brief reason. You can add a small preference if any (e.g., neutral tones) to make the answer more specific; use linking words like "however" or "for example."

Example: Colour doesn’t matter much to me as long as the clothes are comfortable. However, I tend to choose neutral colours like black or grey because they are easy to match with other items.

× I like to wear the cotton type of clothes because because that's a CLO normally cotton makes my skin to be more comfortable and if I sweat even if I sweat a lot means also it will cover up and never show it outside that I'm sweating inside.

✓ I like to wear cotton clothes because they are normally more comfortable for my skin; even if I sweat a lot, it won't show on the outside.

Errors include awkward phrasing and incorrect use of 'to be' with 'make' (should use adjective form), repetition ('because because'), and unclear clauses. Use 'cotton clothes' instead of 'the cotton type of clothes', use plural pronoun 'they' for clothes, and express result concisely. Replace 'makes my skin to be more comfortable' with 'are more comfortable for my skin', and 'it will cover up and never show it outside that I'm sweating inside' with 'it won't show on the outside.' Suggestions: remove repeated words, use plural agreement, and simplify clauses.

× I prefer to wear comfortable clothes because clothing is my right and I have umm I I always will wear it for my own comfortable only.

✓ I prefer to wear comfortable clothes because clothing is my right, and I will always wear them for my own comfort only.

Pronoun and noun form errors: 'it' should be 'them' to agree with plural 'clothes'; 'comfortable' should be the noun 'comfort' when preceded by 'my own'. Also avoid filler words. Suggestion: ensure pronoun number matches noun and use correct noun form after 'my own'.

× I will never gonna wear it for wear it to get attention from others.

✓ I will never wear clothes to get attention from others.

Incorrect combination 'will never gonna' mixes 'will' and 'gonna' (informal 'going to'); remove redundancy and correct pronoun 'it' to 'clothes' or omit. Suggestion: use one correct future/modal form ('will' or 'am going to') and keep sentence concise.

× T-shirts are much more comfortable than hoodies or formal clothes, and I usually wear them at home or when I hang out with friends because they are casual and easy to move in.

✓ T-shirts are more comfortable than hoodies or formal clothes, and I usually wear them at home or when I hang out with friends because they are casual and allow easy movement.

'Much more' is acceptable but can be simplified; 'easy to move in' is informal and awkward. Use 'allow easy movement' or 'are easy to move in' as an alternate. Ensure parallel structure and clarity.

× To be honest, I am not because I'm not I, I, I'm not the person who really love to spend lots of time choosing clothes.

✓ To be honest, I'm not; I'm not the kind of person who really loves to spend a lot of time choosing clothes.

Problems: redundancy ('I am not' repeated), subject-verb agreement ('who really love' should be 'who really loves'), and use of 'lots of' is informal; use 'a lot of' or 'much'. Suggestion: remove repetitions, fix agreement, and use clearer phrasing.

× When it's come to clothes for me, I, I wear what I saw at the very first moment and I'll just pick it up and wear it for the for the rest of the day.

✓ When it comes to clothes, I wear what I see at first and then I usually wear it for the rest of the day.

Incorrect verb form 'it's come' should be 'it comes'; tense inconsistency 'I saw' should be 'I see' to match present habitual action. Remove repetitions. Suggestion: use present simple for habitual actions and keep verbs consistent.

× It depends, if I have a plans with my family or friends, I will only wear something that looks comfortable and sometimes I also do wear some former tyres if I have any mooting competition or if I'm per participating in any law competitions.

✓ It depends; if I have plans with my family or friends, I will wear something comfortable, and sometimes I also wear more formal attire if I have a mooting competition or if I'm participating in any law competition.

Multiple errors: 'a plans' should be 'plans' (quantifier), 'former tyres' is wrong word choice — should be 'formal attire', 'per participating' is incorrect duplication — keep 'participating', and 'any law competitions' better as 'any law competition' or 'any law competitions' consistently. Prepositions not needed in phrases like 'wear something comfortable'. Suggestion: correct word choice, remove articles incorrectly used, and use proper collocations ('formal attire', 'participating in').

× It doesn't matter for me, as long as it makes me comfortable I will wear it for my rest of the day.

✓ It doesn't matter to me; as long as it makes me comfortable, I will wear it for the rest of the day.

Use 'to me' not 'for me' in this context. Include the definite article 'the' before 'rest of the day'. Add comma for clarity. Suggestion: use correct preposition 'to' and include 'the' with 'rest of the day'.