Clothing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and clearer. Start with a direct topic sentence (e.g. I prefer comfortable clothes), then give one or two specific reasons/examples. Avoid filler words and unclear phrases (e.g. 'I have done my postpartum now') and keep to 2–4 sentences. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to connect ideas.

Example: I prefer comfortable clothes because I need to hold my baby and move around easily. For example, I often wear loose T-shirts and jeans at home because they are practical and let me be comfortable while caring for my baby.

Suggestion: Give a clear, structured response: state your general preference, then explain exceptions with a short reason. Avoid repetition. Use linking phrases like 'usually', 'however' and 'for example'.

Example: I usually prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they suit my daily routine. However, I wear smart or formal clothes for special occasions, such as job interviews or events, because they look more professional.

Suggestion: Keep your answer natural and specific. Start with a clear statement, give one or two specific reasons or examples (comfort, occasions, styles), and reduce hesitations. Use vocabulary accurately (e.g. 'nightwear' instead of 'night suits').

Example: Yes, I love wearing T-shirts because they are very comfortable. I often sleep in soft T-shirts as nightwear, and when I go out I choose different styles like short-sleeved or sleeveless T-shirts depending on the weather.

Suggestion: Answer directly and add a brief reason with one clear example. Avoid repeating phrases and filler words. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to connect ideas and give a concise explanation of how you decide quickly.

Example: No, I don't spend much time choosing clothes because I'm not picky. I usually pick items that are comfortable and suit my body shape and color, so I can dress quickly in the morning.

Suggestion: Structure the answer: start with a clear statement whether you do or not, then explain the difference with one or two specific examples. Remove hesitations and avoid repeating 'depends'. Use linking words like 'on weekdays' and 'on weekends'.

Example: Yes. On weekdays I usually wear smarter or more practical clothes because I go out for work and errands. On weekends I prefer casual, comfortable clothes like T-shirts and jeans when I'm staying at home or visiting friends.

Suggestion: Give a concise answer: state your favorite colour(s) and briefly explain why with a specific reason. Avoid contradictory phrases like 'no preference' followed by a preference. Use precise vocabulary ('skin tone' not 'skin colour') and limit to 2–3 sentences.

Example: I tend to choose black because it suits my skin tone and is easy to match with other clothes. I also pick colours that flatter my body shape and make me feel confident.

× I always prefer to wear comfortable clothes as I have done recently, uh, done my postpartum now.

✓ I always prefer to wear comfortable clothes because I have just finished my postpartum period.

The original sentence misuses 'as' and 'done my postpartum now' is ungrammatical. Use 'because' to express reason and 'have just finished my postpartum period' is a natural way to indicate recent completion. Also replace 'done' with 'finished' and add 'period' for clarity.

× That's why I've always tried to feel to be relaxed as I have to hold my baby and I feel all.

✓ That's why I always try to feel relaxed because I have to hold my baby and I get tired.

'Tried to feel to be relaxed' is incorrect word order and verb form. Use present simple 'try to feel relaxed' for habitual action and 'get tired' is a clear way to express becoming fatigued. 'Because' introduces the reason.

× I most of the prefer to wear lower T-shirts and sometimes jeans and according to the.

✓ Most of the time I prefer to wear loose T-shirts and sometimes jeans.

'I most of the prefer' is ungrammatical; correct phrase is 'Most of the time I prefer'. 'Lower T-shirts' is likely intended to mean 'loose T-shirts'. Remove the incomplete fragment 'and according to the.'.

× It depends upon the occasion where I am going to or what I am going to do.

✓ It depends on the occasion where I am going or what I am going to do.

Use 'depends on' (not 'upon' is acceptable but 'on' is more natural). The structure 'where I am going to' is redundant; use 'where I am going'.

× Sometimes I prefer to do formal to wear formal clothes or most of the times I prefer comfortable.

✓ Sometimes I prefer to wear formal clothes, but most of the time I prefer comfortable clothes.

'Prefer to do formal to wear formal clothes' is incorrect; use 'prefer to wear formal clothes'. Use 'most of the time' rather than 'most of the times'. Maintain parallel structure.

× I wear comfortable clothes whereas sometime I wear some smart clothes and formal clothes.

✓ I wear comfortable clothes, whereas sometimes I wear smart or formal clothes.

Use 'sometimes' (plural) not 'sometime', and streamline 'some smart clothes and formal clothes' to 'smart or formal clothes' for clarity and natural phrasing.

× Whenever I'm going to going for going to job and for an interview and for an other occasion.

✓ Whenever I am going to a job, an interview, or another occasion, I wear smart clothes.

Remove repeated 'going to' and correct articles: 'a job', 'an interview', 'another occasion'. Reorder to complete the sentence logically.

× I love to wear T-shirts as I find this is the very comfortable clothes for me and the, uh, even the most of the night times I wear T-shirts that uh, rather than incomplete night night suits.

✓ I love to wear T-shirts because I find they are very comfortable for me, and most nights I wear T-shirts rather than complete night suits.

Use plural pronoun 'they' to refer to T-shirts. 'The very comfortable clothes' should be 'very comfortable for me'. 'Most of the night times' -> 'most nights'. 'Incomplete night night suits' unclear; change to 'complete night suits' for contrast.

× Uh, also sometimes I'm going outside, I wear different kind of T-shirts, sometimes with the sleeves, with, uh, sometime with cut sleeves.

✓ Also, sometimes when I go out I wear different kinds of T-shirts, sometimes with sleeves and sometimes with cut sleeves.

Use 'when I go out' instead of 'I'm going outside'. Use plural 'kinds' and 'sometimes' consistently. 'With the sleeves' -> 'with sleeves'. Maintain parallel structure.

× Actually, no. Uh, because I'm not a choosy or a picky person to choose the things or even the clothes.

✓ Actually, no, because I'm not a choosy or picky person when it comes to choosing things or clothes.

Avoid 'to choose the things' and use 'when it comes to choosing'. Remove redundant 'a' before 'picky' and ensure parallel adjectives 'choosy or picky'.

× I only prefer the comfortable and the style that so suits to me and suits my body, that suits the color and the style of the suit.

✓ I only prefer comfortable styles that suit me and my body shape, and that match the color and design I like.

'Prefer the comfortable and the style that so suits to me' is ungrammatical. Use 'comfortable styles that suit me and my body shape' and 'match' instead of 'suits to'.

× And I don't spend much of the time, I don't waste my time to choosing the.

✓ I don't spend much time; I don't waste time choosing clothes.

Use 'much time' not 'much of the time' here and 'waste time choosing' is the correct verb pattern (no 'to' before choosing). Complete the object 'clothes'.

× Yes, it depends on, as it I, as I already mentioned, it depends upon the wearing of the clothing, where I'm going, where I, what, uh, and uh, what I am going to do on the week, weekdays I have to do, uh, I have to go outside for a job, for a different kind of uh, other house stores or documentation.

✓ Yes, as I mentioned, it depends on the clothing I wear, where I'm going and what I am going to do during the week. On weekdays I have to go out for work, to shops, or for paperwork.

Remove redundant fragments and repetitions. Use 'as I mentioned' and 'depends on the clothing I wear'. 'Go out for work, to shops, or for paperwork' is clearer than 'other house stores or documentation'.

× Sometimes I have to go outside. I usually prefer to wear good clothes.

✓ Sometimes I have to go out. I usually prefer to wear nice clothes.

Use 'go out' not 'go outside' in this context. 'Good clothes' is better as 'nice clothes' or 'smart clothes' depending on meaning.

× There is no uh, I don't have a preference for the colour I usually prefer, but I usually choose the black colour because it's, uh, it suits me and it source with my skin colour and I love the black colour uh, also I chose the colours which suits my body and which suits my body colour, body shape and also.

✓ I don't have a strong preference for color, but I usually choose black because it suits my skin tone. I also choose colors that suit my body shape and skin tone.

Remove awkward 'There is no' and conflicting phrases. Use 'I don't have a strong preference for color' and 'it suits my skin tone'. 'Source with' is incorrect; use 'suit'. Correct verb tense 'chose' -> 'choose' and ensure plural agreement 'colors that suit'.