Music— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Speak in complete, grammatically correct sentences and avoid fillers. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words (e.g., "because" or "for example"). Use correct verb forms and plural/singular agreement.

Example: I prefer different kinds of music depending on my mood. For example, when I am in a good mood I usually listen to pop or electronic music because it makes me feel energetic; but when I feel down I choose sad songs because they help me process my emotions.

Suggestion: Control hesitation and avoid repetition. Use one clear topic sentence, then add a concise supporting example with linking words. Ensure subject-verb agreement and avoid run-on phrases.

Example: Yes, happy music makes me feel more excited and upbeat. For example, I often play upbeat rap songs when I drive or shower because they lift my mood and make me want to sing along.

Suggestion: Use past simple consistently for past events and give a clear time reference. Keep sentences grammatically correct and avoid trailing off—finish your thought with a reason or result. Provide one specific detail about what you learned.

Example: Yes, I took piano lessons when I was a child because my mother wanted me to learn music. I learned basic scales and simple songs, but I stopped when I started secondary school because I had much more homework.

Suggestion: Use a clear topic sentence and correct continuous or simple forms. Organize supporting details with linking words (e.g., "for example", "and") and give specific situations and effects without hesitation.

Example: Yes, I often listen to music while doing other activities such as studying or showering. For example, calming music helps me relax and improve my mood, while instrumental tracks sometimes help me concentrate better when I am working.

× When I in in a good mood I usually listening to pop or drum music.

✓ When I am in a good mood I usually listen to pop or drum music.

Missing auxiliary verb 'am' for present tense 'be' and incorrect use of progressive 'listening' when describing a habitual action; use simple present 'listen' for regular habits. Suggestion: use 'I am' for the state and 'I usually listen' for routine actions.

× But when I feeling down I prefer sad music because it helped me uh, handle my uh, emotion.

✓ But when I feel down I prefer sad music because it helps me handle my emotions.

Incorrect verb forms: 'feeling' should be simple present 'feel' for conditional habit, and 'helped' should be present 'helps' to match general truth; 'emotion' should be plural 'emotions' for general feelings. Suggestion: use simple present verbs for habitual or general statements.

× Happy music definitely make me feel more energetic and cheerful.

✓ Happy music definitely makes me feel more energetic and cheerful.

Subject 'happy music' is third person singular, so verb requires -s: 'makes'. Suggestion: add 's' for third person singular simple present verbs.

× Like, for example, I often listen to rap music when I drive or take a shower and they like, instantly make my mood feel, make life, make me feel like, make me sing along and.

✓ For example, I often listen to rap music when I drive or take a shower and it instantly improves my mood and makes me want to sing along.

Pronoun agreement and sentence fragments: 'they' incorrectly refers to 'rap music' (should be singular 'it'), verb forms inconsistent; original contains incomplete clauses and repetition. Suggestion: use one clear subject 'it', consistent verbs 'improves' and 'makes', and complete the clause 'makes me want to sing along'.

× Well, I have, I took a lesson, a piano lesson when I were a child.

✓ Well, I took a piano lesson when I was a child.

Incorrect auxiliary mix and wrong past tense of 'be': 'have' unnecessary with simple past 'took'; 'were' should be singular past 'was'. Suggestion: use simple past 'I took' and 'I was' for past facts.

× My mom want me to learn music.

✓ My mom wanted me to learn music.

Subject-verb agreement and tense: 'mom' is third person singular so 'want' should be 'wanted' to match past context. Suggestion: use past tense 'wanted' when referring to past desires.

× So I participate a basic piano lessons class and I learn, uh, like the basic so but I stop it when I, uh, go to the secondary school because I have more thing to.

✓ So I joined a basic piano lessons class and learned the basics, but I stopped when I went to secondary school because I had more things to do.

Multiple errors: verb choice 'participate' changed to 'joined' for natural past action; article and pluralization: 'a basic piano lessons class' corrected to 'a basic piano lessons class' kept but better 'a basic piano lessons class' -> using 'lessons' with 'class' is okay; changed to 'joined a basic piano class' would be simpler. Verbs adjusted to past tense 'learned', 'stopped', 'went', 'had' to match past narrative; 'thing' pluralized to 'things' and added 'to do'. Suggestion: keep consistent past tense and correct plural nouns and add missing verbs.

× Yes, I often listening to me listen to music while doing other things so that studying or taking a shower, it helped me relax and improve my mood and sometimes it helped me umm concentrate better when I working.

✓ Yes, I often listen to music while doing other things, such as studying or taking a shower. It helps me relax and improve my mood, and sometimes it helps me concentrate better when I am working.

Incorrect use of -ing and verb forms: 'listening to me listen' is redundant and wrong; use simple present 'listen' for habitual action. 'It helped' should be 'it helps' to match present habitual context. 'When I working' missing auxiliary 'am'. Suggestion: use simple present for habits, remove redundant words, and include 'am' with present participle 'working'.