Music— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Improve grammar, word choice and sentence structure. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons using correct verb forms and linking words. Avoid unnecessary words and keep it under five sentences.

Example: I prefer happy music because it helps me relax after a long day. For example, upbeat songs lift my mood and make me feel refreshed, so I listen to them when I finish work to unwind.

Suggestion: Use correct tense and accurate adjectives. Begin with a direct answer, then add a short specific example. Use linking words like "for example" or "because" and avoid incorrect adjectives like "exciting" vs "excited."

Example: Yes, happy music usually makes me feel more excited and energetic. For example, after a tiring day at work I put on an upbeat song, and it boosts my energy and reduces my stress.

Suggestion: Answer directly and clearly, use correct connectors and vocabulary. Say whether you have taken classes, then state a clear plan or desire using correct nouns (instrument) and phrases (reduce stress). Avoid extra unclear words or questions to the examiner.

Example: No, I haven't taken any music classes, but I would like to learn an instrument such as the guitar. I think lessons would help me unwind and reduce stress, so I plan to sign up for beginner classes soon.

Suggestion: Organize your answer: start with a clear yes/no, then give two specific activities and one reason. Fix grammar (continuous forms, subject-verb agreement) and reduce redundancy. Use linking words like "for example" or "when."

Example: Yes, I often listen to music while doing other things. For example, I play cheerful songs when I clean my room or study because they put me in a good mood and make time feel like it passes faster.

× I prefer happy music because it help me refresh and put me in a good mood after a long day asking.

✓ I prefer happy music because it helps me relax and puts me in a good mood after a long day of work.

The verbs 'help' and 'put' need third-person singular -s because the subject is 'it' implied by 'happy music' (singular). 'Refresh' is incorrectly used; 'relax' fits context. 'Asking' is incorrect word choice; likely 'work' or 'day' is intended. Suggestion: add -s to verbs with singular third-person subjects and choose appropriate vocabulary.

× It's a simple way for me to relax and stay away stressed.

✓ It's a simple way for me to relax and stay stress-free.

The phrase 'stay away stressed' is ungrammatical: 'stay away' requires an object and 'stressed' should be modified. Use 'stay stress-free' or 'avoid stress'. Suggestion: use 'stress-free' adjective or 'avoid being stressed'.

× Ha, happy music made me feel more exciting and genetic.

✓ Happy music makes me feel more excited and energetic.

The student used past tense 'made' while speaking generally; present simple 'makes' is appropriate. 'Exciting' describes something that causes excitement; the correct adjective for personal feeling is 'excited'. 'Genetic' is incorrect word choice; likely 'energetic'. Suggestion: use present simple for general truths and choose correct adjectives.

× For example, after a long day at work, I listen to a cheerful song.

✓ For example, after a long day at work, I listen to cheerful songs.

Singular 'a cheerful song' is not wrong but in context of habitual action plural 'cheerful songs' is more natural. This is a present-tense habitual action; ensure plural when referring to general habit. Suggestion: use plural for habitual objects or keep singular with article if referring to one instance.

× It will keep me in a good mood and reduce stress.

✓ It keeps me in a good mood and reduces stress.

The original uses future 'will' but speaker is describing general effect; present simple is appropriate for habitual results. Suggestion: use present simple for general statements.

× I haven't taken any music classes before, however Eva.

✓ I haven't taken any music classes before, however I would like to.

Sentence is incomplete and contains a stray name 'Eva'. Likely intended to contrast with desire to take classes. 'However I would like to' completes contrast. Suggestion: remove extraneous words and use clause to show contrast.

× I would like 1 to study new instrument such as guitar.

✓ I would like to study a new instrument such as the guitar.

'1' is numeric typo; use 'to'. Missing article before 'new instrument' and before 'guitar' use 'the' or 'a'. Suggestion: include 'a' before 'new instrument' and 'the' before specific instruments or 'a' before 'guitar'.

× I think it will help me unwind and reduce chest.

✓ I think it will help me unwind and reduce stress.

'Reduce chest' is incorrect collocation; likely 'stress'. Use correct noun 'stress'. Suggestion: choose correct collocations (reduce stress, reduce anxiety).

× Is it a better way to learn a new?

✓ Is it a better way to learn something new?

Sentence is incomplete and missing object. 'Learn a new' needs a noun after 'new'. Suggestion: add 'something' or specify what is being learned (e.g., 'a new instrument').

× Well I do listen to music while I clean in my room or do in assessment it it keep me in a good mood and I feel the time is go faster whenever I listen to a cheerful song that have really good lyrics.

✓ Well, I do listen to music while I clean my room or do assessments; it keeps me in a good mood and makes time go faster whenever I listen to a cheerful song that has really good lyrics.

Multiple issues: preposition 'in my room' should be 'my room'; 'do in assessment' should be 'do assessments'; 'it it keep' duplicated and verb agreement wrong — use 'it keeps'; 'I feel the time is go faster' should be 'it makes time go faster'; 'that have' should be 'that has' agreeing with 'a cheerful song' (singular). Suggestions: fix word order, remove duplicates, ensure subject-verb agreement, and use correct plural/singular forms.