Music— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and organize your response: start with a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid fillers, repetition and unclear phrases. Pronounce key words clearly and use correct grammar (e.g., "if I'm not in the mood" not "if I'm I'm not in mood").

Example: I usually prefer happy music when I want to feel energetic because it lifts my mood and motivates me. However, when I feel down or reflective, I choose emotional or sad songs to process my feelings and calm down.

Suggestion: Give a direct yes/no answer followed by specific examples using linking words. Correct verb forms and avoid repetition. Use precise vocabulary (e.g., "boosts my mood" instead of "left us my mood").

Example: Yes, happy music definitely boosts my mood and energy. For example, when I'm doing calisthenics or running errands, I play upbeat playlists because they help me keep a steady pace and stay motivated.

Suggestion: Answer directly and give a brief reason or reflection. Avoid repeating phrases and use correct tense (e.g., "I haven't taken any official music classes" and "I regret it now"). Add a specific detail about what you might study if given the chance.

Example: No, I haven't taken any official music classes because I focused on sports as a child. Looking back, I regret it a little — if I had the chance now, I'd like to learn guitar or vocal techniques to improve my singing.

Suggestion: Provide a clear topic sentence and one or two specific examples of activities, using linking words and correct verb forms. Avoid extra words and improve sentence flow (e.g., "I usually put on a playlist before I start exercising").

Example: Yes, I often listen to music while exercising. I usually put on an upbeat playlist before I start my workout because it motivates me, lifts my mood, and makes the exercise more enjoyable.

× Actually it depends on my mood.

✓ Actually, it depends on my mood.

The sentence needs a comma after 'Actually' as an introductory word; otherwise grammar is correct. Suggestion: add the comma for proper sentence flow.

× If my mood, uh, quiet God, I usually listen happy music because it lifts my mood and gives me umm, more motivation.

✓ If my mood is calm, I usually listen to happy music because it lifts my mood and gives me more motivation.

Original has missing verb and incorrect vocabulary ('quiet God') and missing preposition 'to' after 'listen'. Use present tense 'is' for state, adjective 'calm' for mood, and 'listen to' is correct collocation. Remove filler words.

× But if uh, my but but if I'm I'm not in mood, I usually listen to uh, I usually listen to.

✓ But if I'm not in the mood, I usually listen to emotional music.

Original repeats words and omits necessary article 'the' before 'mood' and omits the object of 'listen to'. Fix repetition and provide the intended object.

× Emotional music watching make my mood much better.

✓ Emotional music makes my mood much better.

Subject-verb agreement error and unnecessary word 'watching'. Use singular verb 'makes' to agree with singular subject 'Emotional music' and remove 'watching' as it is irrelevant.

× Absolutely yes.

✓ Absolutely, yes.

Add comma for natural speech punctuation; otherwise acceptable.

× Happy music left us my mood and gives me motivations, especially when I'm practicing my hobbies like calisthenics and exercise.

✓ Happy music lifts my mood and gives me motivation, especially when I'm practicing hobbies like calisthenics and exercising.

Use present tense 'lifts' not 'left'; 'gives me motivation' uses uncountable noun 'motivation' (not 'motivations'); 'exercise' as noun should be 'exercising' or 'exercise' as activity—use parallel gerund 'practicing hobbies... and exercising'. Subject-verb agreement and word choice corrected.

× And sometimes I listen to it while I'm I listen to music happy music while I'm doing. While doing running errands.

✓ Sometimes I listen to happy music while I'm doing things, such as running errands.

Original has repetitions and fragmented clauses. Combine into one sentence, remove duplicates, and use 'running errands' as example. Maintain present continuous 'I'm doing' with object.

× Actually, I haven't taken any. I have taken any official music classes because I was interested in sports while I was a child, while I was a child.

✓ Actually, I haven't taken any official music classes because I was interested in sports when I was a child.

Remove duplicate sentence and incorrect use of 'have taken any' in second clause. Use simple past 'was interested' with 'when I was a child'. 'Haven't taken any' is present perfect and appropriate for experience; combine clauses correctly.

× But looking back, I'm sort of regretted because I really like music now.

✓ But looking back, I sort of regret it because I really like music now.

Use present simple 'regret' with 'looking back' for current feeling; 'I'm sort of regretted' mixes tenses and incorrect participle usage. Also add 'it' as object of 'regret'.

× Yeah, actually I quite often listen to music while doing the things like practicing exercise.

✓ Yeah, actually I quite often listen to music while doing things like exercising.

'Practicing exercise' is unnatural; use 'exercising'. Remove 'the' before 'things' and keep present simple 'listen' is fine.

× I usually put on playlist before start my exercise to gives me motivations and also to lift my mood and also add mix exercising more enjoyable.

✓ I usually put on a playlist before I start my exercise to give me motivation, lift my mood, and make exercising more enjoyable.

Need article 'a' before 'playlist'; use 'before I start' with subject; verb 'give' (not 'gives') to match infinitive construction; 'motivation' uncountable; use 'make exercising more enjoyable' for correct structure. Removed unnecessary repetition.