Music— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and correct small grammar issues. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid redundancy like 'a bit happy music' and replace with 'mostly upbeat music'.

Example: I enjoy both sad and happy music, but I usually prefer upbeat songs. For example, when I need energy I play lively pop or dance tracks because their tempo and melodies boost my mood and help me concentrate.

Suggestion: Clarify your idea and avoid unclear metaphors. Give one clear reason and one specific example. Correct grammar: 'most of the time' and avoid 'according to me' — use 'in my opinion'.

Example: Yes, most of the time happy music energizes me because of its fast tempo and positive lyrics. For instance, I often play upbeat songs in the morning to wake up and feel motivated for the day.

Suggestion: Use correct grammar and a clear structure: topic sentence then brief supporting detail. Replace vague phrases like 'for time being' with 'for enjoyment'. Limit to two to three sentences.

Example: No, I have never taken music classes, but I enjoy singing as a hobby. I sing simple songs every day for fun, although I have no formal training and do not plan to pursue it professionally.

Suggestion: Be more natural and specific about activities and effects. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' correctly, and avoid repetition. Correct phrases: 'while I'm walking' and 'when I'm doing chores'.

Example: Yes, I often listen to music while doing chores or walking. For example, I play upbeat playlists when cleaning or exercising because the songs lift my mood and help me stay motivated.

× I like both happy and sad music.

✓ I like both happy and sad music.

No change needed; sentence is correct and fits present simple to state general preference.

× When I'm feeling down, I usually listen to sad songs because they help me process my emotions, but most of the time I prefer a bit happy music because it improves my mood and energy.

✓ When I'm feeling down, I usually listen to sad songs because they help me process my emotions, but most of the time I prefer slightly happier music because it improves my mood and energy.

'a bit happy music' is incorrect adjective form and article use; use comparative adjective 'happier' with adverb 'slightly' for degree. This keeps present tense and compares types of music correctly.

× Yes, most of the times it makes me excited.

✓ Yes, most of the time it makes me excited.

Use singular 'most of the time' not 'most of the times'. Placement of adverb is fine; correct quantifier form is required.

× It's not only a music we heard, it's a rhythm from our blood, heart and oil.

✓ It's not just music we hear; it's a rhythm from our blood, heart, and soul.

Do not use the indefinite article with uncountable 'music'. Use 'music we hear' not 'we heard'. 'Only' to 'just' is stylistic; 'oil' is incorrect word choice likely meant 'soul'.

× You have to listen a song every day.

✓ You have to listen to a song every day.

Verb 'listen' requires the preposition 'to' when followed by an object. This is a preposition + verb construction issue (listed as verb + -ing but matches preposition use).

× It's very helpful according to me.

✓ I find it very helpful.

'According to me' is nonidiomatic; use 'I find it' or 'in my opinion' to express personal view. Also keeps present simple.

× Never, but still I love to sing this musics.

✓ Never, but I still love to sing these songs.

'Musics' is incorrect plural for 'music'; use 'songs' or 'music' (uncountable). 'This' with plural should be 'these'. Maintain present simple for habit/love.

× I usually sing a music everyday but I never went to the music class.

✓ I usually sing every day, but I have never taken music classes.

'Sing a music' is wrong; use 'sing' or 'sing songs' and 'every day' written as two words. Use present perfect 'have never taken' to indicate life experience up to now. 'Music class' plural or 'music classes' preferred; no article required for plural.

× It is not my profession.

✓ It is not my profession.

Sentence is correct; no tense change needed.

× Just for time being I will sing that's it.

✓ Just for the time being I will sing, that's it.

Missing definite article 'the' in 'for the time being'. Add comma before 'that's it' for clarity. Future 'will sing' is acceptable for temporary intention.

× Most of the time when I'm cleaning my room or the kitchen or walking something, I listen to music because it will change my mood.

✓ Most of the time when I'm cleaning my room or the kitchen or walking, I listen to music because it changes my mood.

Use base verb 'walking' without 'something'; 'it will change' is future-looking and odd; use present simple 'changes' to state habitual effect.

× It will boost me so that I listen to music when I'm working something.

✓ It boosts me, so I listen to music when I'm working on something.

'Boost me' better as 'it boosts me' in present simple for habit. Use 'so' plus clause 'I listen' rather than 'so that I listen'. Use preposition 'on' with 'working on something'.