Music— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more grammatical and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Correct verb forms and articles (e.g., 'listen to happy music', 'it makes me feel encouraged').

Example: I prefer happy music because it lifts my mood. For example, when I listen to upbeat songs while studying, they make me feel more motivated and help me concentrate better.

Suggestion: Avoid repetition and fix tense and word choice. Give a clear topic sentence, then explain with a specific example and a linking word (e.g., 'For instance'). Use correct adjectives and verbs (e.g., 'boosts my mood' not 'boosted my feeling').

Example: Yes, happy music definitely boosts my mood and energy. For instance, when I'm tired or stressed, listening to upbeat songs helps me feel more energetic and improves my concentration.

Suggestion: Organize the answer with a clear timeline and correct nouns. Use linking words ('when I was in junior high'). Correct instrument names and verb forms. Provide one concise specific detail about what you learned or enjoyed.

Example: Yes, I have. When I was in junior high school I took a music class and joined the school music club. I played the trombone and enjoyed learning to read music and play in a group.

Suggestion: Speak more naturally and use correct verbs and prepositions (e.g., 'reading a book', 'listen to music'). Start with a direct answer, then add two specific activities and one reason using a linking word like 'also' or 'because'.

Example: Yes, I often listen to music while doing other things. For example, I usually listen to music when I'm reading a book and when I'm walking around the city because it makes the activity more enjoyable and relaxing.

× I prefer happy music and I often listen happy music.

✓ I prefer happy music and I often listen to happy music.

The verb 'listen' requires the preposition 'to' when followed by the object (listen to something). Add 'to' to form the correct verb + preposition combination: 'listen to happy music.' Also keep 'music' singular as an uncountable noun is fine here.

× It made me encouraged to do study and the work.

✓ It made me feel encouraged to study and do my work.

The phrase 'made me encouraged' is awkward; after 'made' use the base verb 'feel' (made me feel encouraged). 'Do study' is incorrect — use 'study' without 'do.' Also use 'do my work' to specify the tasks. Maintain past tense 'made' with appropriate infinitives.

× Yes it does happy music boosted my feeling better and the excited and also when I feel sad it's kind of music makes me better.

✓ Yes, it does. Happy music boosts my mood and makes me feel excited, and when I feel sad, this kind of music makes me feel better.

Subject-verb agreement: 'music' as a singular subject requires 'boosts' (third person singular). Use 'mood' instead of 'feeling' for naturalness. Split into clear clauses and add 'makes me feel better' for correct structure. Add commas and small words ('does.' 'this') for clarity.

× Yes, I have. When I was a junior high school I took music class and they also I joined the music club as well.

✓ Yes, I have. When I was in junior high school, I took a music class and I also joined the music club.

Insert preposition 'in' for 'in junior high school.' Use the article 'a' with 'music class.' Remove redundant words ('they also') and 'as well' duplicate; keep one 'also' or 'as well.' Add a comma after the introductory clause.

× I played their trombone, horsely ears.

✓ I played the trombone and sleigh bells.

'Their trombone' is unclear; use 'the trombone' when speaking generally about an instrument you played. 'Horsely ears' is not an English instrument name; likely meant 'sleigh bells' or another percussion—replace with the correct instrument name. Ensure nouns are accurate and definite article 'the' is used for specific instruments played.

× I enjoyed to play music.

✓ I enjoyed playing music.

After 'enjoy,' use the -ing form (gerund): 'enjoy playing' not 'enjoy to play.' This is a common verb + -ing usage rule.

× Yes, I am leading it some book while I'm listening to music and also when I am walking around the city I'm listening music as well.

✓ Yes, I am reading a book while I'm listening to music, and when I am walking around the city I listen to music as well.

'Leading it some book' is incorrect — the correct verb is 'reading' and use 'a book' with the article. 'Listening music' requires the preposition 'to' (listen to music). For habitual action, present simple 'I listen' is more natural than 'I'm listening' for repeated actions. Use commas to separate clauses.

× It's made me enjoy more.

✓ It makes me enjoy it more.

Tense consistency: use simple present 'makes' for general truths or habitual effects rather than 'it's made' (present perfect). Add 'it' to clarify the object: 'enjoy it more.' Alternatively, 'I enjoy it more' is acceptable.