Teachers— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Give a clear, concise answer with correct grammar and logical structure. Start with a direct topic sentence naming the favourite teacher, then add one or two specific reasons (teaching style, qualities) using linking words. Avoid pronoun and gender errors and unrelated details.

Example: Yes. My favourite teacher is my English teacher, Ms. Saira, because she explains difficult grammar clearly and uses interesting examples. In college, I also admire Professor Atif for his practical chemistry demonstrations, which made lessons easier to understand.

Suggestion: Begin with a direct statement and give specific reasons using linking words. Improve grammar (future tense, articles) and choose precise expressions for ideas like ‘instill discipline’. Limit to 2–3 sentences and avoid vague phrasing.

Example: Yes, I would like to be a teacher in the future because I have admired teachers since childhood. Moreover, I believe teachers can inspire students and instill discipline, which helps young people succeed.

Suggestion: Answer directly, then give clear, specific reasons. Use correct vocabulary (e.g., ‘taught me games’ not ‘trusted in game’), avoid repetition, and correct grammar (articles, verb forms). Use linking words like ‘because’ or ‘when’ to connect ideas.

Example: Yes. I still remember Mr. Prabhupada, my primary school teacher, because he taught us games and made lessons fun. Because of his friendly approach, I felt confident and enjoyed coming to school.

Suggestion: Respond clearly and give specific details: how you stay in touch (calls, visits, social media) and why you keep contact. Correct grammar (use ‘in touch with two teachers’, plural agreement) and avoid vague or odd phrases like ‘English beauty teacher’.

Example: Yes, I am still in touch with two of my primary school teachers. I contact my Urdu teacher by phone and follow my English teacher on social media because I appreciate her clear explanations and advice.

Suggestion: Start with a direct statement about specific help received. Use correct tense and clear examples (academic advice, emotional support, financial help). Use linking words (for example, sometimes, for instance) and avoid vague phrases like ‘difficult order of my life’.

Example: My favourite teacher has helped me in many ways. For example, she advised me on study strategies when I struggled with exams, lent me money to buy textbooks once, and encouraged me when I felt discouraged.

Suggestion: Answer directly (yes/no/both) and give two clear reasons with linking words (for example, ‘on the one hand… on the other hand…’). Improve grammar (plural forms, articles) and be concise—limit to 2–3 sentences.

Example: I appreciate both equally. On the one hand, my primary teachers feel like family because they nurtured me in childhood; on the other hand, my high school teachers guided me academically and helped me choose a career path.

× My favorite teacher in my school is my English Madam whose name is Saira.

✓ My favorite teacher at school is my English teacher, Madam Saira.

Use of 'in my school' is less natural than 'at school'; 'Madam' as a title should follow by name and 'English Madam' is incorrect. Replace with 'English teacher, Madam Saira' for correct noun phrase and word order.

× He I like the teaching of the mess, but I in college my professor of chemistry, Professor Atif is the best, so I would like.

✓ I like the teaching of my English teacher, but in college my chemistry professor, Professor Atif, is the best.

Sentence had mixed pronouns and word order errors. Remove stray 'He' and reorder phrases: 'I like the teaching of my English teacher' and 'in college my chemistry professor... is the best'. Ensure subject-verb agreement and remove incomplete clause 'so I would like'.

× Yes, I want to be a teacher in my future because I have admired the role of teachers since my childhood.

✓ Yes, I want to be a teacher in the future because I have admired the role of teachers since my childhood.

Use 'in the future' rather than 'in my future'. 'In the future' is the correct idiomatic phrase for talking about later time.

× I like this profession most because teacher is the way of concepting discipline to the people.

✓ I like this profession most because teachers teach discipline to people.

Original uses uncountable noun 'teacher' and incorrect verb 'concepting'. Use plural 'teachers' and replace with correct verb 'teach'. Also simplify 'to people' for clarity.

× Yes, I have a teacher from my past that I still remember the the teacher name is Prabhupada.

✓ Yes, I have a teacher from my past that I still remember. The teacher's name is Prabhupada.

Run-on sentence and missing possessive apostrophe. Split into two sentences and use 'teacher's name' to show possession.

× He is pretty teacher of my childhood primary school.

✓ He was a teacher at my primary school when I was a child.

'Pretty teacher' is incorrect adjective use and tense mismatch. Use 'was' for past reference and 'a teacher at my primary school when I was a child' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× I like this teacher more because at that time I trusted in game and he is my game teacher.

✓ I liked this teacher because at that time I trusted him and he was my games teacher.

Pronoun use and tense inconsistent. 'Trusted in game' is incorrect; likely meant 'trusted him'. Use past tense 'liked' and 'was' to keep past timeframe and pluralize 'games teacher' for the subject.

× Yes, I still in touch with my primary school teacher.

✓ Yes, I am still in touch with my primary school teachers.

Missing auxiliary verb 'am' and number agreement: if referring to more than one teacher use plural 'teachers'. Use 'in touch with' correct phrase.

× I still in touch with only two teacher.

✓ I am still in touch with only two teachers.

Add auxiliary 'am' and pluralize 'teacher' to 'teachers' to match 'two'.

× First is the teacher of my Urdu language book and 2nd is my English beauty teacher because I like this teacher most and their way of explaining to us.

✓ The first is the teacher of my Urdu class, and the second is my English teacher because I like her most and the way she explains things to us.

Use 'Urdu class' instead of 'Urdu language book'; 'English beauty teacher' is incorrect—likely 'English teacher'. Use ordinal words and pronoun agreement: if teacher is female use 'her' and singular 'the way she explains things' for clarity.

× My favorite teacher helped me when I am in any difficult order of my life.

✓ My favorite teacher helped me when I was in any difficult period of my life.

Mix of past and present tense. Use past tense 'was' to match 'helped'. 'Difficult order' is incorrect collocation; use 'difficult period'.

× Day tell us to face this difficulty and solve my problem.

✓ They told us to face difficulties and helped solve our problems.

'Day' is a typo for 'they'. Maintain past tense 'told' to match narrative and use plural 'difficulties' and 'our problems' for agreement.

× Sometime they help me when I need money to buy books.

✓ Sometimes they helped me when I needed money to buy books.

Use past tense 'helped' and 'needed' to remain consistent with previously described past events; use 'sometimes' (plural).

× Sometime they help me when I playing.

✓ Sometimes they helped me when I was playing.

Missing auxiliary 'was' and verb form. Use past continuous 'was playing' to indicate action in progress in the past; also 'sometimes' spelling and past tense for consistency.

× I like primary school teacher as well as like my high school teacher because there is no comparison between my primary school teacher and high school teacher.

✓ I like my primary school teachers as well as my high school teachers because there is no comparison between them.

Add possessive 'my', pluralize 'teachers' if referring to multiple, and replace repetitive phrase with 'them' for clarity and conciseness.

× Primary school teacher are my childhood people.

✓ Primary school teachers are the people of my childhood.

Subject-verb agreement: plural 'teachers' requires 'are'. 'People of my childhood' is awkward but preserves meaning; could also say 'were important figures in my childhood.'

× I like them most for this reason and I like my high school teacher because they gave me proper way of choosing my profession.

✓ I like them most for that reason, and I like my high school teachers because they gave me proper guidance in choosing my profession.

Pronoun agreement: 'they gave me' fits plural 'teachers'. Use 'guidance' instead of 'proper way' and 'in choosing my profession' for natural phrasing.