Teachers— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Сократите повторения, исправьте грамматику и используйте связные предложения: начните с основной идеи, добавьте 1–2 конкретных деталей и используйте правильные глагольные формы. Избегайте многократных пауз и повторов («I'm I'm I'm»).

Example: Yes. My favourite teacher is Miss Camilla. She is very kind and very knowledgeable. In her lessons I learn many new English words and useful skills, and she often gives us extra practice and occasional small rewards for good work.

Suggestion: Укажите чёткое мнение, приведите одну-две причины и используйте корректную структуру (тезис + причина). Избегайте неуместных повторов и разговорных пауз. Корректнее выражайте «children» и «teacher».

Example: No, I don't want to be a teacher. I think the job can be financially difficult and quite stressful. However, I would like to work with children in a language-related role, perhaps teaching basic English or Spanish informally.

Suggestion: Уточните, что именно вы помните: опишите поведение учителя или конкретный поступок. Уберите бессвязные фразы («gift, gift gifts», «she in the seat») и используйте связанные предложения с примерами. Будьте конкретнее в деталях.

Example: Yes, I remember one primary school teacher who was very kind. She often took us for walks in the park and sometimes bought me warm clothes when I needed them, which made a big impression on me.

Suggestion: Сформулируйте ответ грамматически верно: укажите, с кем вы общаетесь, как часто и о чём говорите. Используйте связующее слово и правильные местоимения (them, not him).

Example: Yes, I am still in touch with some of my primary school teachers. I write to them about once a week to ask how they are, and we usually talk about my current school and life updates.

Suggestion: Дайте конкретные примеры помощи: какие навыки или темы она объясняла, как это повлияло на ваши оценки. Избегайте слов-паразитов («I don't know», «and and») и укажите результат чётко.

Example: My favourite teacher helped me by explaining difficult grammar and giving extra exercises before exams. Thanks to her help, my exam scores improved and I achieved a grade of 5 in one important test.

Suggestion: Сформулируйте сравнение прямо: скажите, почему вы предпочитаете учителей начальной школы, приведите конкретные причины и закончите мысль. Избегайте повторов и незаконченных фраз.

Example: Yes, I prefer my primary school teachers because they spent more time helping me with exams and vocabulary practice. They gave many exercises and personal support, which made learning easier.

× She really kind and smart.

✓ She is really kind and smart.

The sentence lacks the verb 'to be' for describing qualities. Use 'is' for third person singular present. Suggestion: Always include the correct form of 'to be' (She is) when describing someone in present tense.

× Every day I go in lessons and she learn me a lot of things and English words.

✓ Every day I go to lessons and she teaches me a lot of things and English words.

Two errors: incorrect preposition 'in' (use 'to' with 'go to lessons') and third person singular verb form 'learn' should be 'teaches' when the subject is 'she'. Also 'teach someone' is the correct verb pattern, not 'learn me'. Suggestion: Use 'go to lessons' and 'she teaches me'.

× And also we do a lot of exams and sometimes I'm I'm I'm give gift.

✓ Also we take a lot of exams and sometimes I give her a gift.

'Do exams' is acceptable but more natural is 'take exams'. Repeated 'I'm' is erroneous; 'I give gift' misses article and object. Use simple present 'I give her a gift' for habitual actions. Suggestion: Use 'take exams' and include article and indirect object: 'give her a gift'.

× No, I won't because teacher is very uh, poor, poor job and but I wanna learn some children's about English or Spanish, but English a teacher is is not my favorite.

✓ No, I won't because being a teacher is a very poor job, and I want to teach children English or Spanish, but an English teacher is not my favorite.

Multiple errors: missing gerund/article in 'being a teacher', incorrect adjective placement, informal 'wanna' should be 'want to', incorrect 'learn some children's' should be 'teach children', and article before 'English teacher' is needed. Also duplicate 'is is'. Suggestion: Use 'being a teacher' or 'to be a teacher', 'want to teach children', and include appropriate articles.

× I remember she she was very kind and gift, gift gifts and also she loved me and very a lot of walking around the park and she in the seat and she buy me a lot of clothes and.

✓ I remember she was very kind and gave me gifts; she also loved me a lot, took me walking around the park, sat with me, and bought me a lot of clothes.

Many problems: repeated words, wrong noun/verb forms ('gift' vs 'gave me gifts'), awkward phrasing 'very a lot of walking' should be 'took me walking a lot' or 'took me on walks frequently', 'she in the seat' unclear—interpreted as 'sat with me', 'she buy' should be past 'bought'. Use past tense consistently for remembered past events. Suggestion: Use past simple verbs (was, gave, loved, took, sat, bought) and clear noun phrases.

× Yeah, I primary school teachers is my last schools and every week I write him and saying how are you and we talk about new schools or about with life and that's all.

✓ Yes, my primary school teachers are from my previous school, and every week I write to them, asking 'How are you?', and we talk about new schools or life, and that's all.

Problems: missing possessive/article before 'primary school teachers' and wrong verb agreement ('teachers is' should be 'teachers are'). 'I write him' should be 'I write to them' (correct pronoun and use of preposition). 'saying how are you' should be 'asking "How are you?"'. 'about with life' should be 'about life'. Suggestion: Ensure subject-verb agreement, correct pronouns, and proper prepositions for 'write to someone'.

× Yeah, my favorite teacher helped me especially when I have a exams I and and some exercise. I don't know and she helped me with exams and and I take a 5.

✓ Yes, my favorite teacher helped me, especially when I had exams and exercises. She helped me with exams, and I got a grade of 5.

Tense inconsistency: describing past help should use past tense 'had' not 'have'. 'a exams' incorrect article and plural; use 'exams' or 'an exam'. 'some exercise' should be 'exercises'. 'I take a 5' should be past 'I got a 5' (or 'I received a 5'). Suggestion: Keep past tense for past events, use correct articles with count nouns, and use 'get/receive' for grades.

× Yeah, I like my primary school teacher because because they help me with exams and learn a lot of words and exercise and also. We uh.

✓ Yes, I like my primary school teachers because they helped me with exams, taught me many words and exercises, and so on.

Issues: inconsistent singular/plural: 'my primary school teacher' vs 'they help'; choose plural 'teachers' or change verb. Tense should be past if referring to past help: 'helped' and 'taught'. 'learn a lot of words' should be 'taught me a lot of words'. 'exercise' should be plural 'exercises'. Suggestion: Keep number agreement between subject and pronoun, and use past tense to describe past help.