Teachers— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be direct and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (subject-verb agreement and pronouns) and avoid hesitations. Provide one or two brief supporting details using linking words.

Example: Yes, I do. My favorite teacher was my secondary school math teacher because she explained difficult concepts clearly and made lessons engaging with real-life examples.

Suggestion: Answer directly, use correct grammar (verbs and adjectives), and give a short reason with linking words. Replace fillers with precise vocabulary and keep it within 2–3 sentences.

Example: Not really. Although my parents think I would be a good teacher, I don't feel I have the patience or passion required for teaching.

Suggestion: Start with a clear topic sentence and avoid repetition. Use correct adjective forms and complete supporting details with examples or results. Use linking words like 'because' or 'for example' to clarify why she is a role model.

Example: Yes. My secondary school math teacher is my role model because she was passionate and hardworking; for example, she stayed after class to help struggling students and encouraged us to think critically.

Suggestion: Be grammatically accurate (use correct plural and verb forms) and provide a concise detail about how often you meet. Use linking words to contrast past and present.

Example: Yes, absolutely. Although I don't see them as often as before, I visit them occasionally, especially on Vietnamese Teachers' Day and at school reunions.

Suggestion: Respond directly and give a specific example of the help, using smooth linking words and correcting sentence breaks. Keep it coherent and avoid hesitations.

Example: She helped me choose my high school by advising me on the best programs for my strengths; for example, she recommended schools with strong maths departments and helped me prepare the application.

Suggestion: Answer clearly and compare using correct comparative structures. Use linking words like 'because' and 'however' and give one or two specific reasons to support your preference.

Example: Not really. I admire both, but I especially appreciate my primary school teacher because she provided a strong foundation in learning; for example, she built my confidence and interest in reading, which helped later at high school.

× I think many of us has our own favorite teacher in my in mine is umm, my math teacher from my secondary school.

✓ I think many of us have our own favorite teacher; mine is my math teacher from secondary school.

Subject 'many of us' is plural and requires the plural verb 'have' not 'has'. Also the phrase 'in my in mine is' is redundant and ungrammatical; use 'mine is'. Simplify and correct word order. Suggestion: identify the subject first and ensure verb agreement, and remove redundant words.

× I think being a teacher need to be patient and has passionate uh with your work but I don't have that.

✓ I think being a teacher needs you to be patient and passionate about your work, but I don't have that.

After 'being a teacher' the verb should agree with the singular idea: use 'needs' not 'need' (third person singular). Also 'has passionate' is incorrect; use the adjective 'passionate' with a linking verb or adjective construction and the preposition 'about' for 'passionate about your work'. Suggestion: use 'needs you to be' or 'requires' and follow 'passionate' with 'about'.

× She is passionate with her work and really in a really hardworking person.

✓ She is passionate about her work and is a really hardworking person.

'Passionate with' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'about' when following 'passionate'. The phrase 'really in a really hardworking person' is ungrammatical and likely intended as 'is a really hardworking person'. Use 'is a' before the noun phrase. Suggestion: pair 'passionate' with 'about' and use the correct copula 'is a' before noun phrases.

× Moreover, she always pursues and care about.

✓ Moreover, she always pursues her goals and cares about her students.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks objects for the verbs 'pursues' and 'care about'. Also subject-verb agreement: 'she... cares' needs 'cares' not 'care'. Provide explicit objects to complete the sentence. Suggestion: ensure verbs have direct objects or complements and match verb forms to the subject.

× Although I don't see them frequently like we was in the past, I still visit them and on uh, Vietnamese teacher days.

✓ Although I don't see them as frequently as we did in the past, I still visit them on Vietnamese Teachers' Day.

Comparative structure is incorrect: use 'as frequently as' and past tense 'did' for 'we did in the past'. 'We was' is wrong (subject-verb agreement). Also 'visit them and on... days' is ungrammatical; 'visit them on Vietnamese Teachers' Day' is correct and possessive/apostrophe use needed. Suggestion: use proper comparative construction 'as...as' and correct past tense and possessive form for named days.

× Well, my teacher used to help me to choose my high school. I remember that I still. Don't know which school should I choose for my high school, but she helped me, uh with that.

✓ Well, my teacher used to help me choose my high school. I remember that I still didn't know which school I should choose, but she helped me with that.

Redundant 'to' after 'help' is unnecessary: 'help me choose' is correct. The sentence 'I remember that I still. Don't know' is fragmented and has incorrect capitalization and punctuation. Use past tense 'didn't know' to match 'used to' and correct word order 'which school I should choose'. Suggestion: remove unnecessary 'to', avoid sentence fragments, and keep consistent past tense.

× Not really why I still like my primary teacher because umm she provide provided the foundation umm more of a high school teacher also umm teaching me many things and I really admire her too.

✓ Not really. I still like my primary teacher because she provided the foundation more than a high school teacher did; she also taught me many things and I really admire her.

Verb forms and agreement errors: 'she provide provided' is incorrect — use past tense 'provided'. Comparative 'more of a high school teacher' is unclear; use 'more than a high school teacher did' for comparison. 'Also umm teaching me' should be past tense 'taught me'. Suggestion: use consistent past tense for past actions and clear comparative structure.