Part 1
Examiner
Do you have a favorite teacher?
Candidate
No, no I don't. I not because I'm the favorite teacher.
Examiner
Do you want to be a teacher in the future?
Candidate
I am a teacher.
Examiner
Do you have a teacher from your past that you still remember?
Candidate
Yes, my father.
Examiner
Are you still in touch with your primary school teachers?
Candidate
Of course, my father.
Examiner
In what way has your favourite teacher helped you?
Candidate
He beat me, ****.
Examiner
Do you like your primary school teachers more than your high school teachers?
Candidate
I love primary teachers more than two high school.
Do you have a favorite teacher?
Score: 28.0Suggestion: Give a clear, grammatically correct direct answer and a brief explanation. Avoid repetition and incorrect word order. Use one topic sentence then one supporting detail if needed.
Example: No, I don't have a single favorite teacher. I respect many teachers for different reasons—for example, one was excellent at explaining maths while another inspired me with creative projects.
Do you want to be a teacher in the future?
Score: 40.0Suggestion: Answer the question directly and expand briefly. If you are already a teacher, state that clearly and add a short explanation about your future plans or motivations, using correct verb forms.
Example: I am already a teacher, and I plan to continue teaching for the foreseeable future because I enjoy helping students learn and grow.
Do you have a teacher from your past that you still remember?
Score: 60.0Suggestion: Provide a direct answer and add one or two specific details about why you remember this person. Use linking words (for example, because or who) to make the sentence coherent.
Example: Yes, I still remember my father, who was my first teacher at home because he taught me to read and encouraged my curiosity about science.
Are you still in touch with your primary school teachers?
Score: 30.0Suggestion: Clarify the relationship and respond directly to whether you keep in touch. If you mean your father was a teacher and you stay in contact, explain briefly to avoid confusion.
Example: Yes, I am still in touch with one of them—my father—because he lives nearby and we talk about my work every week.
In what way has your favourite teacher helped you?
Score: 5.0Suggestion: Never use violent or inappropriate language. Provide a respectful, specific example of how a teacher helped you, such as teaching a skill, giving advice, or encouraging you. Keep it concise and polite.
Example: He helped me become more disciplined by setting clear expectations and providing regular feedback on my assignments, which improved my study habits.
Do you like your primary school teachers more than your high school teachers?
Score: 35.0Suggestion: Answer directly and use comparative structures correctly. State a main opinion, then give one reason with a linking word like because or since, and avoid unclear phrases such as 'two high school.'
Example: I prefer my primary school teachers to my high school teachers because they were more patient and made learning feel fun.
× No, no I don't. I not because I'm the favorite teacher.
✓ No, no, I don't. I'm not because I'm not the favorite teacher.
The sentence contains incorrect pronoun/auxiliary use and missing auxiliary 'do' for negation. 'I not' is ungrammatical; use 'I am not' or 'I'm not'. Also logical clarity: student likely means 'I don't have a favorite because I'm not the favorite' or 'I don't, because I'm not a teacher' — here corrected to 'I'm not because I'm not the favorite teacher' to maintain original structure. Use contractions correctly and include commas for natural speech. Note: If intended meaning was 'I don't have a favorite because I'm the favorite teacher', then correction should be 'No, I don't. I think I'm the favorite teacher.'
× I am a teacher.
✓ I want to be a teacher.
The question asks about future desire 'Do you want to be a teacher in the future?'. The student's reply 'I am a teacher.' uses present tense and does not answer the question. Change to 'I want to be a teacher.' to match the modal/future-intent context. Alternatively 'Yes, I want to be a teacher.' would be a complete direct answer.
× Yes, my father.
✓ Yes, my father was my teacher.
The question asks 'Do you have a teacher from your past that you still remember?' Reply 'Yes, my father.' is short but lacks verb and clarity. This is a sentence without a verb issue (ID 23) as well, but primarily a pronoun/reference/clipping problem. Provide a complete sentence 'Yes, my father was my teacher.' to clarify role and use past tense 'was' for past relationship.
× Of course, my father.
✓ Of course. My father.
The question 'Are you still in touch with your primary school teachers?' expects yes/no with clarification. 'Of course, my father.' is fragmented; better as 'Of course. I'm still in touch with my father.' Include verb 'am' to form a complete sentence and indicate continuing relationship.
× He beat me, ****.
✓ He disciplined me physically when I misbehaved.
The raw sentence is crude and incomplete; grammatically it's fragmented and uses slang/obscenity. For a polite, grammatically correct answer, rephrase to 'He disciplined me physically when I misbehaved.' This uses past tense 'disciplined' to match 'has helped you' in past context. It avoids profanity and clarifies meaning. If the student meant 'He beat me' as a factual past action, 'He beat me' is grammatically correct in past tense but may be inappropriate; the correction preserves meaning while improving tone.
× I love primary teachers more than two high school.
✓ I love my primary school teachers more than my high school teachers.
The original mixes number 'two' incorrectly and omits possessive determiners and the plural form. Use 'my primary school teachers' and compare them with 'my high school teachers'. Ensure plural agreement 'teachers' for both groups. If the student meant 'more than my two high school teachers', specify 'two' correctly: 'I love my primary school teachers more than my two high school teachers.'