Teachers— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Cevap doğrudan ve olumlu, ancak ifadelerde tekrar ve dil hataları var. Daha doğal ve etkili bir cevap için kısa bir konu cümlesi kurun, ardından destekleyici bir örnek verin. Bağlaçlar kullanarak cümlenin akışını iyileştirin ve 'about' yerine uygun edatlar kullanın. Örneğin, neden onu sevdiğinizi kısa bir anekdotla belirtin.

Example: Yes. My favourite teacher in high school was my biology teacher because she was very patient and encouraging. For example, when I struggled with lab techniques she stayed after class to give me extra practice, which really improved my confidence.

Suggestion: Niyetinizi ifade etmişsiniz fakat dilbilgisi ve tekrar sorunları var ('children's' yanlış). Cümleleri daha doğal ve açık yapın; sebepleri somutlaştırın ve bir bağlaç kullanın. Ayrıca neden öğretmenlik size uygun olduğunu kısa bir yetenek veya değerle ilişkilendirin.

Example: Yes, I would like to be a teacher because I enjoy working with children and helping them learn. For instance, I find it rewarding to explain new ideas in simple ways, and that patience makes me well-suited to teaching.

Suggestion: Duygularınızı açıkça ifade etmişsiniz fakat 'traumas' kelimesi güçlü ve belki uygunsuz; daha uygun bir sözcük seçin (e.g. bad experiences). Cümleleri düzeltin, bağlaç kullanın ve kısa bir örnek verin. Aynı zamanda iki cümlede tekrar eden yapıdan kaçının.

Example: Yes, I remember several teachers, especially my English teachers who gave me negative experiences. For example, they often criticised my pronunciation harshly, which made me nervous about speaking for a long time.

Suggestion: Cevap net ancak dilbilgisi ve akıcılık geliştirilebilir. 'We lose our interaction' yerine daha doğal ifadeler kullanın ve bağlaç ile kısa bir neden-sonuç ilişkisi kurun. Gerekirse bir alternatif (e.g. social media) ekleyin.

Example: Unfortunately, I'm not in touch with my primary school teachers because I moved on to university and we lost regular contact. I do sometimes try to reconnect through social media, but it's not the same.

Suggestion: Cevap amaca uygun ancak tekrar ve dil hataları var ('mathematic' yerine 'math' veya 'mathematics'). Daha akıcı bir yapı için bağlaçlar kullanın ve spesifik bir örnek verin (nasıl yardım ettiğini açıklayın). Cümleleri sadeleştirin ve maksimum 5 cümle kuralına uyun.

Example: When I struggled with the lessons and felt anxious about exams, my favourite math teacher helped me prepare by giving extra practice tests and explaining problems step by step. As a result, I improved my grades and felt more confident in exams.

Suggestion: Cevap açık ama dilbilgisi ve akıcılık sorunları var ('compare between' yerine 'compare' ya da 'compare the two', 'all them' yanlış). Duyguyu ifade ederken kısa bir sebep veya örnek ekleyin ve daha doğal bir bağlam kullanın.

Example: I can't really compare them because I appreciate both; my primary teachers were warm and supportive, while my high school teachers challenged me academically, so each group has special memories.

× She's so sweet and always supports me about my lessons.

✓ She's so sweet and always supports me with my lessons.

Use 'support someone with something' rather than 'support someone about something'. Replace 'about' with 'with' to show the correct relationship between support and lessons.

× Everybody definitely loves her.

✓ Everybody definitely loves her.

This sentence is grammatically correct. No change is necessary. (Pronoun use is appropriate.)

× Yeah, I want to be a teacher in the future because I can spend good times with children.

✓ Yeah, I want to be a teacher in the future because I will be able to spend good time with children.

When talking about a future desire and its consequence, use 'will' or 'will be able to' rather than present 'can'. Also use uncountable 'good time' (or 'good times').

× They are all so sweet for me and I enjoy spending my time with children's.

✓ They are all so sweet to me and I enjoy spending my time with children.

Use 'sweet to me' not 'sweet for me'. Also 'children's' is incorrect possessive; use plural noun 'children'.

× I have a lot of teachers from my past that I still remember because I have a lot of traumas with my English teachers.

✓ I have many teachers from my past that I still remember because I had a lot of bad experiences with my English teachers.

Use 'many' with countable 'teachers'. 'Trauma' is usually uncountable and 'a lot of traumas' is awkward; better to say 'bad experiences' or 'traumatic experiences'. Also past situation fits 'had'.

× In the past, I couldn't speak English at all and they were so rude to me.

✓ In the past, I couldn't speak English at all and they were very rude to me.

This sentence is fine but 'so rude' is colloquial; 'very rude' is clearer. Tense and structure are correct.

× Unfortunately, I'm not in touch with my primary school teachers because now I go to the university and we lose our interaction.

✓ Unfortunately, I'm not in touch with my primary school teachers because now I go to university and we have lost our contact.

Use 'go to university' (no article) in general sense. 'Lose our interaction' is unnatural; 'have lost our contact' or 'have lost contact' is correct present perfect for a change that affects now.

× In high school, sometimes I didn't get the lessons and I was being anxious about it because I was afraid of exams.

✓ In high school, sometimes I didn't understand the lessons and I was anxious about that because I was afraid of exams.

Use 'understand the lessons' rather than 'get the lessons'. 'Was being anxious' is awkward; use 'was anxious'. 'About it' -> 'about that' clarifies reference.

× And my mathematic teacher, who was my favorite teacher in high school, helped me a lot about exams.

✓ And my mathematics teacher, who was my favourite teacher in high school, helped me a lot with exams.

Use 'mathematics' (or 'math' in US), and 'helped me a lot with exams' is correct collocation; 'about exams' is incorrect.

× I can't compare between them.

✓ I can't compare them.

Do not use 'compare between'; the verb 'compare' takes direct objects: 'compare A and B' or 'compare them'.

× I love all of them at the same time because I have beautiful moments, all them.

✓ I love all of them because I have beautiful memories with each of them.

'All them' is incorrect; use 'all of them'. 'Beautiful moments' is understandable but 'beautiful memories' is more natural. 'At the same time' is unnecessary and awkward here.