Tidiness— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 在回答中要更直接、简洁地回应问题，避免重复与语法错误。可以用一到两句主题句表明观点，随后用一到两句具体例子或结果支持。注意动词形式、冠词和代词使用，并使用连接词使句子更流畅（例如: therefore, which helps, so that）。

Example: Yes, I do. Keeping my space tidy helps me feel relaxed and more focused. For example, when I study at a clean desk, I can concentrate better and finish tasks faster.

Suggestion: 回答要注意时态一致和句子结构，避免混用现在/过去时。用一到两句说明过去的习惯，并给出具体频率或原因。改正语法错误（organized而不是 organizing, 'do chores' 而不是 'doing chores'），并用连接词如 'because' 或 'so' 清楚表达因果关系。

Example: Yes, I did. My mother encouraged me to be organized, so I used to tidy my room once a week and do small chores by myself.

Suggestion: 回答要直接且条理清晰，避免问句式开头。用主题句说明方法，然后列出具体做法并用连接词（for example, also, besides）连接。注意词汇搭配（books on the desk, bags on the wardrobe/on a hook）和完整句子结构。

Example: I usually organise items by function. For example, I keep books on my desk or bookshelf, put stationery in a drawer, and hang bags on a hook in the wardrobe so everything is easy to find.

Suggestion: 表达观点时注意语法和搭配（make a good impression, find things easily）。先给出直接回答，然后用两到三个具体理由支持，使用连接词（not only... but also, because, therefore）使结构更自然。避免冗余短语如 'keep in tidy'.

Example: Absolutely. Being tidy not only makes a good impression on others but also helps you find things quickly. Because of that, I feel less stressed and more productive.

× I think it is a practical way to keep my own space tidy and it will make me feel more relaxed and structured.

✓ I think it is a practical way to keep my space tidy, and it makes me feel more relaxed and organised.

句子描述一般事实和习惯，应使用一般现在时而不是将来时“will”。将“will make”改为“makes”与主句时态一致；去掉“my own”可以更自然，且“structured”用于形容“我感到有条理”时不太自然，改为“organised”。建议使用一般现在时表达习惯或常态。

× For instance, when I'm studying, if I stay at the tidy space, I will have the clear mind and help me to study me.

✓ For instance, when I'm studying, if I stay in a tidy space, I have a clear mind and it helps me study.

1) “stay at the tidy space”介词用错，表示在某个空间应使用“in a tidy space”（见11）；2) 条件句描述习惯性结果，应使用一般现在时而非将来时，将“will have”改为“have”；3) “the clear mind”用不定冠词且词序应为“a clear mind”；4) “and help me to study me”结构错误且多余第二个“me”，应为“and it helps me study”。建议按英语习惯使用一般现在时和正确的介词/代词。

× Yes I did because my mom told me that I need to be a person who organized and doing chores by myself.

✓ Yes, I did because my mom told me that I needed to be a person who was organised and did chores by myself.

1) 时态不一致：回忆过去应使用过去时“needed”“was organised”“did”；2) 原句中“who organized and doing chores”并列形式错误，应保持一致的动词形式，使用过去式“was organised and did chores”。为自然地表达童年被教导，应把动词改为过去时。

× So I always keep my room steady and I clean it once a week.

✓ So I always keep my room tidy and I clean it once a week.

主要问题是词汇使用不当：用“steady”描述房间不恰当，应使用“tidy”。句子时态和主谓一致无误。建议用固定搭配“keep my room tidy”。

× Will I usually put the different things with the function in the different spaces?

✓ I usually put different things according to their function in different places.

1) 不应以疑问句形式开始（原句与语境不符）；2) “with the function”表达笨拙，应改为“according to their function”；3) “different spaces”更自然为“different places”；整体改为一般陈述句并使用正确短语。

× For example, I usually put my books on the desks or on the bookshelf.

✓ For example, I usually put my books on my desk or on the bookshelf.

1) “desks”复数不合语境，应使用单数“desk”或“my desk”；2) 两者并列时统一拥有者更自然，改为“my desk”或直接“on the desk”。注意主谓和名词数一致。

× What's more, put the bags on the wardrobe so through this I can make my room.

✓ What's more, I put my bags in the wardrobe, so this helps me keep my room tidy.

原句缺主语且介词使用不当：“put the bags on the wardrobe”通常应为“put my bags in the wardrobe”（把包放进衣柜）；“so through this I can make my room”语序和表达错误，应为“so this helps me keep my room tidy”。建议补全主语并使用正确介词短语与固定搭配。

× Absolutely, keeping tidy not only can help you live a nice impression to others but also can help you to find something easily.

✓ Absolutely. Keeping tidy not only can give others a good impression of you, but also can help you find things easily.

1) “live a nice impression”错误，应为“give others a good impression of you”；2) “find something easily”更自然为“find things easily”；3) 句子可分成两部分，首字母大小写和标点需调整。建议使用固定搭配“give someone an impression”并去掉多余不定式“to”。

× It is convenient for people to keep in tidy and also clean.

✓ It is convenient for people to keep things tidy and clean.

原句“keep in tidy”结构错误，语序和词语选择不当。应为“keep things tidy and clean”或“to keep places tidy and clean”。建议使用“keep + 宾语 + tidy/clean”的结构来表达保持整洁。