Tidiness— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Make your answer more natural and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, give one or two specific reasons, and avoid confusing tense shifts and irrelevant details. Use linking words (because, so, for example) and correct grammar (e.g., "I like to keep things tidy"; "so I can find things easily"). Limit to 2–4 sentences.

Example: Yes, I like to keep things tidy because it helps me find things quickly and reduces stress after a long day. For example, I always put documents in folders and tidy my desk before sleeping so I can start work the next morning feeling calm.

Suggestion: Respond directly, use correct past tense, and add one specific supporting detail. Avoid repetition and unnecessary comments about being "lazy"; instead describe a clear habit and one consequence or memory. Use a linking word like "but" or "so" to connect ideas.

Example: No, I didn't. As a child I often left toys and clothes on the floor, so my parents reminded me every weekend to tidy up. However, their routine helped me learn to clean up after myself over time.

Suggestion: Start with a clear topic sentence about your regular habit, use present simple, and give one or two specific actions with linking words (for example, then, so). Correct collocations ("rearrange my books and pens") and avoid filler phrases. Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

Example: I keep my study space tidy by clearing my desk every evening and rearranging my books, pens and laptop. For example, I store loose papers in a folder and wipe the surface so it stays organized for the next day.

Suggestion: Give a direct opinion followed by one or two clear reasons using proper vocabulary. Avoid unclear words like "capital" and awkward phrases like "regular man." Use linking words (because, so) and provide a specific result of being tidy (e.g., less stress, more productivity). Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Example: Yes, I think being tidy is important because it reduces stress and helps me focus. For instance, when my room and desk are clean I can study more efficiently and feel more relaxed.

× Yes I do like keep things tidy because I want to keep anything stay organized and I want to clean this up when I was tired of work life and my parents remind me constantly when I was get my *** in my room.

✓ Yes, I do like keeping things tidy because I want to keep everything organized and I want to clean up when I am tired from work, and my parents constantly remind me when I leave my stuff in my room.

Multiple issues: use of verb + -ing needed after 'like' (keeping) and after 'keep' use 'everything organized' not 'anything stay organized'; 'clean this up when I was tired of work life' should match present habit or condition so use 'clean up when I am tired from work'; 'remind me constantly when I was get' needs present tense and correct verb form: 'remind me constantly when I leave my stuff'. Suggestions: after verbs like 'like' use gerund; use 'everything' instead of 'anything' in positive context; use consistent present tense for habitual actions; use correct verb forms 'clean up', 'leave'.

× No I didn't. When I was a child I was a lazy boy and always make my room get messy and my my parents remind me constantly to clean things up immediately.

✓ No, I didn't. When I was a child I was a lazy boy and always made my room messy, and my parents constantly reminded me to clean things up immediately.

Tense inconsistency: speaker is describing past habits so past tense must be used: 'make' -> 'made', 'get messy' -> 'became/made messy' (simplified to 'made my room messy'), 'remind' -> 'reminded'. Suggestions: keep past simple for past habitual actions; ensure all verbs are shifted to past accordingly.

× When I was tired my parents always have a chat with me to teach me.

✓ When I was tired my parents always had a chat with me to teach me.

Tense agreement: describing past habitual actions so 'have' should be past 'had'. Suggestions: maintain past tense across the sentence when referring to past routines.

× Oh that's a good question actually. When my study space get messy I always remove anything on the table and re arrangement my book and pen and computer regularly.

✓ Oh, that's a good question. When my study space gets messy I always remove everything from the table and rearrange my books, pens, and computer regularly.

Subject-verb agreement and verb forms: 'get' should be 'gets' for third person singular (see related type ID 2 but covered here as present tense); 'remove anything on the table' is incorrect—use 'remove everything from the table'; 're arrangement' should be verb 'rearrange'; plural nouns for multiple items: 'books, pens'. Suggestions: use third-person singular '-s' with 'gets', use 'everything' for clearing a surface, use correct verb 'rearrange' and pluralize countable nouns.

× Yes, absolutely. I think capital is necessary for me because I want to have a clean surroundings in my whole room and I always plan to clean things up on the table and I want to be a regular man.

✓ Yes, absolutely. I think it is necessary for me because I want to have clean surroundings in my entire room, I always plan to clean up the table, and I want to be more orderly.

Errors in word choice and pronouns: 'capital' is incorrect word choice—likely meant 'it' or 'being tidy'; use 'it is necessary' or 'tidiness is necessary'; 'a clean surroundings' should be 'clean surroundings' or 'a clean environment'; 'in my whole room' -> 'in my entire room'; 'clean things up on the table' -> 'clean up the table'; 'be a regular man' is unnatural—meaning likely 'be more orderly' or 'maintain a regular cleaning routine'. Suggestions: choose correct vocabulary ('orderly', 'tidiness'), use 'it is' for dummy subject, match determiners and singular/plural appropriately.