Tidiness— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and focused on tidiness (avoid irrelevant detail about brushing teeth). Use a clear topic sentence, one or two supporting details, and linking words. Also correct small grammar issues (e.g., "fold my bedsheets"; avoid mixing topics).

Example: Yes, I do. I like to keep my home tidy: for example, I fold my bedsheets and make the bed every morning, and I put away any clothes or items immediately so the rooms stay clutter-free.

Suggestion: Use past tense consistently and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence about the past, then give one or two specific supporting details with linking words. Remove vague phrases like "I tried my best."

Example: Yes, I did. When I was a child, I always put my toys back in a basket after playing, and I wiped surfaces so the room stayed dust-free. I also helped my mother with simple chores like sweeping and putting laundry away.

Suggestion: Be precise and complete your sentences. Use correct grammar (e.g., "after I read them", "a bin next to my desk") and linking words for listing (first, second). Provide specific actions and finish the second point. Keep answers under five sentences.

Example: I follow a few simple rules. First, I put books back on the shelf after I read them so the desk stays clear. Second, I keep a small bin next to my desk to throw away scraps immediately, and I tidy for five minutes at the end of each day.

Suggestion: Avoid errors and unclear phrases (e.g., "its" → "it's", remove "house bill", correct "leftover leftovers"). Give a clear opinion, one reason with a supporting example, and finish the final thought. Use connectors like "because" or "for example."

Example: Yes, I think it's necessary. A tidy environment helps me concentrate because I am less distracted; for example, if I see a dirty coffee mug on my desk I clean it up first so I can focus on work.

× Yes, I always keep my room free from dust after I finish playing.

✓ Yes, I always kept my room free from dust after I finished playing.

The context asks about childhood habit (past). Use past tense 'kept' and 'finished' to match time frame. Suggestion: use past simple for past routines ('I always kept...').

× First one is I put back the books after I reading it in the bookshelf so that the table does not look messed up.

✓ The first one is I put back the books after I read them on the bookshelf so that the table does not look messy.

After 'after' use base or past form ('read' for past habit) not 'reading'. Also 'books' is plural so refer with 'them'. 'On the bookshelf' is correct preposition and 'messy' is the correct adjective. Suggestion: use 'after I read them' or 'after reading them' consistently.

× Second I have a dustbin kept assigned my workspace so that I can.

✓ Second, I have a dustbin placed next to my workspace so that I can use it.

Original misuses 'kept assigned' and missing preposition. Use 'placed next to' or 'by' to indicate location. Also sentence was incomplete; add 'use it' to finish the thought. Suggestion: keep prepositions simple ('next to', 'by').

× The moment I wake up, I fold my bed sheets and clean the bed.

✓ The moment I wake up, I fold my bedsheets and make the bed.

Phrase 'clean the bed' is unnatural; native speakers say 'make the bed'. 'Bedsheets' can be one word. Suggestion: use conventional collocations like 'make the bed'.

× I brush my teeth twice a day to keep my oral hygiene.

✓ I brush my teeth twice a day to maintain my oral hygiene.

Use 'maintain' or 'keep up' with 'oral hygiene'—'keep my oral hygiene' is awkward. Suggestion: pair nouns like 'oral hygiene' with verbs 'maintain', 'improve', or 'practice good'.

× I used to keep my toys back in the basket so that the room looks neat.

✓ I used to put my toys back in the basket so that the room looked neat.

Mix of past habitual 'used to' with present 'looks' is inconsistent. Use past 'looked'. Also 'keep my toys back' is unnatural; use 'put'. Suggestion: maintain past tense throughout when describing past habits.

× I also remember I used to help my mom with all those household chores and I tried my best to keep the home.

✓ I also remember that I used to help my mom with all those household chores, and I tried my best to keep the home tidy.

Missing conjunction 'that' and sentence needs comma before 'and'. Add adjective 'tidy' for clarity. Suggestion: include 'that' after 'remember' and ensure parallel structure.

× Yes, its absolutely necessary to keep the workspace or the house bill organized.

✓ Yes, it's absolutely necessary to keep the workspace or the house organized.

Use contraction 'it's' (it is). 'House bill' is incorrect—probably intended 'house' or 'household'. Remove 'bill'. Suggestion: proofread for unintended words and use correct contractions.

× A good working space gives creates a good atmosphere to work.

✓ A good workspace creates a positive atmosphere for work.

Original has double verbs 'gives creates' and awkward noun phrases. Use single verb 'creates' and noun 'workspace' is one word. Use 'for work' or 'to work in'. Suggestion: avoid redundant verbs and choose idiomatic collocations.

× For instance, I do not like to work whenever I see a leftover leftovers or coffee mug in my place, I always clean it first and then I.

✓ For instance, I do not like to work when I see leftover food or a coffee mug in my place, so I always clean them first before working.

Original has repetition 'leftover leftovers', missing article before 'coffee mug', run-on sentence, and incomplete ending 'and then I'. Correct by specifying 'leftover food' and making sentence complete with cause-effect structure. Suggestion: avoid repetition, include articles, and finish clauses fully.