Tidiness— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答总体明确，但有重复和语法细节问题。应以主题句直接回应，然后补充一到两条具体、相关的细节，避免无谓重复。注意时态一致（例如谈习惯用一般现在时），并用连词如“so”或“because”使句子更连贯。可以把家庭影响作为补充证据简短说明。

Example: Yes, I do. I keep my desk and bathroom organized so I can find things quickly, and I sort items into drawers and boxes. My parents encouraged this habit when I was young, which helped me develop a regular tidying routine.

Suggestion: 回答有重复且出现无关或混乱的短语（如“try to make travel organize”），影响表达清晰度。应使用过去时谈论童年习惯，避免重复同一信息三次。可给出一两个具体例子说明当时如何整理（例如每天叠被或每周打扫）。

Example: Yes, I did. When I was a child I tidied my room every weekend by folding clothes and putting toys into boxes, because my parents expected me to keep things neat.

Suggestion: 回答不够流畅且含有语法错误或无意义片段（如“doesn't in your message”）。应直接描述具体做法并用连词连接步骤，例如“I sort papers into folders and throw away rubbish”。保持句子简短且明确，最多三到五句。

Example: I keep my study space tidy by sorting papers into folders, filing important documents, and throwing away rubbish every day. I also use trays and pen holders so everything has a place.

Suggestion: 回答内容合理，但有小语法和用词错误（如“more better”应为“better”）。建议先给出简短观点，然后用两条具体原因支持，并用连接词（because, so, therefore）提高连贯性。可补充一个具体结果或例子。

Example: Yes, I believe it is necessary. Being tidy helps me find things quickly and reduces stress, so I feel more comfortable at home. For example, when guests visit I can welcome them without worrying about clutter.

× I always try to organize my desk and my bathroom so I can find things more easily and my parents always told me to keep my room neat when I was a child.

✓ I always try to organize my desk and my bathroom so I can find things more easily, and my parents always told me to keep my room neat when I was a child.

此句存在时态与连词使用问题：前半句“I always try...”使用现在时，后半句“my parents always told me...”使用过去时且缺少合适的连接标点或连词来分隔两个并列分句。两个分句可以并列，用逗号加连词“and”更自然，保持原有时态也可以，因为父母过去常告诫的事实用过去时是正确的。建议在并列句间加逗号或分为两句以提高可读性。

× Yes, I used to keep my room tidy when I was a child. I always try to make travel organize my desk or my bathroom so I can find things more easily. My parents taught me to keep my room neat when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I used to keep my room tidy when I was a child. I always tried to organize my desk or my bathroom so I could find things more easily. My parents taught me to keep my room neat when I was a child.

此处上下文为过去习惯（used to... when I was a child），后面句子应使用过去时以保持时态一致。“I always try to make travel organize...”句子有语序和用词错误：多余的单词“make travel”不合适，应改为“always tried to organize”。另外因为在过去背景下，表示结果的从句也应使用过去式“could”。建议在描述过去习惯时，全句使用过去时（tried, could）。

× Yes, I always organize my desk and I often put away the rubbish and the old paper so my desk is doesn't in your message.

✓ Yes, I always organize my desk and I often put away the rubbish and old papers so my desk doesn't get cluttered.

原句语序混乱且包含无意义片段“is doesn't in your message”。需要重组句子并用合适的动词短语表达“桌子不凌乱”。将“the old paper”改为复数“old papers”更自然。使用短语“get cluttered”来表达变得凌乱。建议写句子时保持主谓一致并避免无关片段。

× It looks more better when my friends or family come over.

✓ It looks better when my friends or family come over.

“more better”为重复比较级错误（非标准词形）。形容词“better”本身就是比较级，不能再加“more”。应使用单一比较级“better”或用“more attractive”等不同词。建议学习比较级规则：短形容词直接加 -er 或使用 irregular forms（good -> better）；不能与“more”连用。