Tidiness— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and fluent. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers and repetition, and use one or two specific reasons with a linking word. Watch pronunciation and sentence endings so your answer sounds complete.

Example: Yes, I do. I prefer to keep my surroundings neat because a tidy space helps me concentrate and feel relaxed. For example, I always put away clothes and clear surfaces so my room looks clean and organized.

Suggestion: Give a clear topic sentence and add one specific example linked with a connector. Correct small grammar errors (e.g., "used to", articles) and avoid repeating 'always' too often.

Example: Yes, I used to. As a child I liked keeping my room tidy, so I would always fold my clothes neatly in the cupboard and keep my books on the desk; in addition, I kept school papers in a single folder to avoid mess.

Suggestion: Organize your response with a topic sentence then list methods using linking words (first, then, finally). Reduce hesitations and correct vocabulary (stationery, put things in their place). Keep sentences short and clear.

Example: I keep my study space tidy by grouping items: first, I put books on one side of the desk; then I keep daily papers in a compact folder; finally, I store pens and other stationery in a cup so everything is easy to find.

Suggestion: Answer directly with a clear reason and avoid repetition. Use linking words to explain benefits and give a brief example or consequence. Fix grammar (e.g., 'on a daily basis', 'materials').

Example: Yes, I think it is necessary because tidiness improves hygiene and makes it easier to find things. For example, if I clean and organize my room every day, I waste less time looking for items and feel less stressed.

× 'I don't like uh cluttering the things I always believe to place things in a perfect manner.'

✓ 'I don't like clutter; I always believe in placing things neatly.'

'Cluttering the things' is unidiomatic and the sentence runs together without proper connectors. Rephrase to a clear subject-verb-object structure and use 'believe in' + gerund. Use concise vocabulary ('clutter' as a noun) and 'placing things neatly' to match intended meaning.'

× 'I always arrange my clothes in cupboard in a perfect good manner and I always place my books on table, my papers in a compact folder.'

✓ 'I always arrange my clothes in the cupboard neatly, and I place my books on the table and my papers in a compact folder.'

'cupboard' and 'table' need definite articles ('the') when referring to specific furniture. Also word order and redundant adjectives ('perfect good manner') are incorrect; use an adverb ('neatly') to describe how you arrange clothes.'

× 'I always arrange my books on one side of the table, the papers I use daily on a perfect compact folder, and uh, my pens and pencils and all stationary material in on one side of my table.'

✓ 'I always arrange my books on one side of the table, keep the papers I use daily in a compact folder, and put my pens, pencils, and other stationery on one side of the table.'

The original sentence mixes forms and has preposition errors ('in on one side') and redundant words. Use parallel verb phrases ('arrange', 'keep', 'put') and correct noun form ('stationery'). Place prepositions correctly ('in a folder', 'on one side').'},{