Tidiness— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more grammatically accurate, concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct noun forms and verb forms, and avoid redundancy. Use one or two supporting details with a linking word. For example, say you organize items into categories and explain briefly why that helps.

Example: Yes, I do. I usually organize items into clear categories because it makes them easier to find. For example, I keep stationery in one drawer and documents in labeled folders, so I save time when I need something.

Suggestion: Improve grammatical accuracy and clarity. Use the correct past-tense phrasing ('I didn't use to' or 'I didn't keep my room tidy') and a linking phrase to explain why. Keep it concise and avoid awkward phrasing like 'it's start messy.'

Example: Not really. I didn't use to keep my room tidy when I was a child because I was busy playing. As a result, my mother often had to remind me to clean up.

Suggestion: Provide a clear, structured response: topic sentence plus specific details. Use correct verb forms and clearer descriptions of actions (e.g., put things away, clear desk). Mention frequency with a linking word to make it coherent.

Example: I put things away as soon as I finish using them and clear my desk at the end of each day. For instance, I file papers, store pens in a cup, and wipe the surface once a day after work.

Suggestion: Use natural vocabulary and correct word choice. Replace unclear term 'Krillini' and fix grammar (subject–verb agreement). Give a concise reason and an example to support your opinion using a linking word.

Example: Yes, definitely. A tidy environment makes me feel more comfortable and helps me concentrate. For example, when my desk is organized I can focus better and finish tasks faster.

× I like to organize the thing and sorting by the category because it is easy to use.

✓ I like to organize things and sort them by category because it is easier to use.

The student used singular 'the thing' where plural 'things' is needed to match general meaning (quantifier/number). Also mixed verb forms 'organize' and 'sorting' should be parallel: use 'sort'. 'By the category' is unnatural; use 'by category'. 'It is easy to use' is vague; 'easier to use' compares organizing vs not organizing and sounds natural.

× Not really, I didn't keep tidying my room except my mom telling me to do that because it's start messy.

✓ Not really, I didn't keep tidying my room except when my mom told me to do it because it started to get messy.

The original mixes tenses and incorrect gerund forms. 'Except my mom telling me' should be 'except when my mom told me' to use past tense narrative. 'It's start messy' is incorrect: use past tense 'it started to get messy'. This keeps consistent past time frame.

× I keep the thing away is when I finish due is and I usually clean it once a day after work.

✓ I put things away when I finish using them, and I usually clean my workspace once a day after work.

Original sentence has broken structure and incorrect phrasing ('the thing away is when I finish due is'). Clear, grammatical alternatives: 'put things away when I finish using them' expresses the intended action. Also specify 'clean my workspace' to be natural.

× Yes, definitely, because the Krillini environment make the feeling more comfortable when you have to spend the time in this area.

✓ Yes, definitely, because a clean environment makes you feel more comfortable when you have to spend time in that area.

Several issues: 'Krillini' seems to be a misspelling of 'clean' or a proper noun; assuming 'clean' is intended. 'Environment make' needs subject-verb agreement: 'environment makes'. 'Make the feeling more comfortable' is unnatural; use 'makes you feel more comfortable'. 'Spend the time' should be 'spend time'. Also choose correct article 'a clean environment'.