Parks— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Make your answer direct and concise: give a clear topic sentence, then one or two specific supporting details. Avoid repetition and grammatical errors. Use linking words like 'because' or 'and' correctly, and prefer correct tense forms (e.g., 'I loved' not 'I really spend').

Example: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child because they were my favorite places to play. For example, I used to climb trees and play football with neighborhood children every afternoon, which made those days very enjoyable.

Suggestion: Start with a clear direct response, then give concise, specific reasons. Fix grammar (e.g., 'I like going to parks' and 'I don't have time') and avoid filler words like 'uh' and repeated phrases. Use linking words such as 'but' and 'because' properly and limit length to 2–3 sentences.

Example: I still like going to parks, but at the moment I don't have much time. Because I attend classes and study at the library, I usually exercise at home to lose weight instead of visiting parks.

Suggestion: Answer clearly (yes/no) and then explain why with specific, coherent reasons. Avoid unclear phrases and pronoun errors ('her' is incorrect). Use linking words like 'however' or 'because' to connect ideas and keep sentences grammatical and concise.

Example: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they help people relax and take a break from work or study. For instance, additional green spaces would give residents easy places to exercise and meet friends.

Suggestion: Give a direct answer and then a short specific explanation. Avoid unclear expressions and incorrect tense/word choices. If you haven't chosen a park, say so clearly and explain why (e.g., lack of interest or time). Use linking words like 'because' or 'so'.

Example: Not really — I haven't researched any specific parks to visit in the future because I don't often go for walks these days. If I did plan a visit, I would pick a large park with walking trails and a playground for my son.

× When I was a child I loved to live in gardens or parks because I really spend my time in home because I love to play games and enjoying my time in park or that type of any places.

✓ When I was a child, I loved spending time in gardens or parks because I enjoyed playing games and spending time in those places.

Errors: 'spend' is incorrect because the context is past habitual action; use past form or gerund 'spending'. 'in home' is incorrect preposition and article use; use 'at home' or omit if referring to parks. 'enjoying my time in park' mixes gerund with incorrect article; better to use 'enjoyed playing games and spending time in those places'. Suggestion: use consistent past tense and correct prepositions/articles; use gerunds for activities (loved spending, enjoyed playing).

× Generally I like to going park, but uh, nowadays I doesn't have time because I have to go to my classes and uh library and also doing exercise for my weight loss, so I nowadays I doesn't have time to go to park.

✓ Generally I like going to the park, but nowadays I don't have time because I have to go to my classes and the library and also exercise for weight loss, so I don't have time to go to the park.

Errors: 'like to going' mixes infinitive and gerund; after 'like' use 'like going' or 'like to go'. 'doesn't' is incorrect with subject I; use 'don't'. Missing articles: 'the library', 'the park'. 'doing exercise' should be 'exercise' or 'do exercise'. Repetition 'nowadays I doesn't' is redundant. Suggestion: use correct verb forms (like + gerund), subject-verb agreement for I + do not, include necessary definite articles, and avoid repetition.

× No pause charging was not important but yes it is relaxed her mind and give a best feeling apart from work or studies.

✓ No, charging fees was not important, but yes, parks relax the mind and give a good feeling away from work or studies.

Errors: sentence is unclear and has incorrect noun phrases and verb forms. 'No pause charging' likely intended 'No, park charging' or 'charging fees'; 'is relaxed her mind' mixes passive/active incorrectly; use 'parks relax the mind'. 'give a best feeling' incorrect article and adjective order; use 'give a good feeling' or 'a pleasant feeling'. Suggestion: clarify subject, use correct verb forms for active voice, correct article usage and adjective choice.

× Internally I didn't read a search or the type of I went for my son to go in future in that park because I nowadays I don't like that much to go in walks to enjoy my time.

✓ Actually, I didn't research any parks for my son to visit in the future because nowadays I don't really like going for walks to enjoy my time.

Errors: 'Internally' is wrong word; use 'actually'. 'didn't read a search' is incorrect verb and noun choice; use 'didn't research' or 'didn't do research'. 'the type of I went' is ungrammatical; clarify purpose 'parks for my son to visit'. Tense and form: 'I nowadays I don't like that much to go in walks' should be 'nowadays I don't really like going for walks'. Suggestion: use correct lexical choices (research), proper infinitive/gerund forms (like going), and remove redundant words.