Parks— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Make the sentence grammatically correct, give a clear topic sentence, and add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and keep it under five sentences.

Example: Not really. When I was a child I didn’t enjoy going to parks because there wasn’t much to do for me. For example, there were no playgrounds nearby and my friends rarely went, so I usually stayed at home instead.

Suggestion: Correct grammar (verb forms, articles) and organize ideas with linking words. Give clear, specific reasons and avoid unclear phrases. Use two to three concise sentences.

Example: Yes, I love going to parks now because I run there regularly to stay healthy. Also, I enjoy sitting under the trees to relax and read, which helps me reduce stress after a busy day.

Suggestion: Start with a clear topic sentence and use precise vocabulary. Explain specific benefits with linking words and avoid vague words like “anything.” Keep it concise and accurate.

Example: Yes, I would. Bangkok is very crowded with buildings and traffic, so more parks would provide green spaces for relaxation and exercise. For instance, they would improve air quality and give people places to walk or play.

Suggestion: Make the sentence grammatically correct and give a specific park name and reason. Use linking words to explain why you are interested and keep it within two sentences.

Example: Yes, I would like to visit New York to see Central Park because it is a large urban park with many attractions. For example, I want to walk its trails and see the lakes and historic sites there.

× When I was young I did not like go to the park that much because I don't have anything to do.

✓ When I was young I did not like going to the park that much because I did not have anything to do.

Type IDs: 8 (Verb + -ing form), 6 (Present tense issue). The verb 'like' when used with another verb in this context requires the -ing form: 'like going' not 'like go'. Also the second clause mixes past and present tenses: 'When I was young' establishes past time, so 'I don't have' should be 'I did not have'. Keep verb tenses consistent. Suggestion: use 'did not like going' and 'did not have'.

× I love going to the parks nowadays because I love to running to get me healthier and I want to spend a lot of time at park to relax myself by just sit and wash the trees all up. Sponge.

✓ I love going to parks nowadays because I love running to become healthier, and I want to spend a lot of time in the park to relax by just sitting and looking at the trees.

Type IDs: 8 (Verb + -ing form), 11 (Incorrect use of prepositions), 13 (Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs). 'Love' can be followed by a gerund: 'love running' or an infinitive 'love to run' but not 'love to running'. 'Get me healthier' is unnatural; use 'become healthier' or 'get healthier'. 'At park' needs the article or 'in parks' — use 'in the park'. 'Relax myself by just sit' requires gerund: 'relax by just sitting'. 'Wash the trees all up. Sponge.' is unclear; likely intended 'looking at the trees' or 'watching the trees'. Suggestion: simplify to 'love running to become healthier' and 'spend time in the park to relax by sitting and looking at the trees.'

× Yes I do because in Bangkok we have a lot of buildings, cars, anything. The park or a green space will help us add a lot of oxy oxygen.

✓ Yes, I do because in Bangkok we have a lot of buildings, cars, and other things. Parks or green spaces help us by adding a lot of oxygen.

Type IDs: 14 (Incorrect use of quantifiers), 17 (Incorrect use of the definite article), 1 (Singular and plural issue). 'Anything' is incorrect here; use 'other things'. 'The park or a green space will help us add a lot of oxy oxygen.' has repetition and article issues. Use plural 'parks or green spaces' to match general statement and 'help us by adding a lot of oxygen.' Also add commas for clarity. Suggestion: use 'parks or green spaces help us by adding a lot of oxygen.'

× I want to visit New York because there's a there has a big park in the middle of the New York and I think it's very interested.

✓ I want to visit New York because there's a big park in the middle of New York, and I think it's very interesting.

Type IDs: 3 (There be issue), 26 (Sentence structure errors), 13 (Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs). The sentence contains duplicated 'there's a there has a' and an unnecessary article before 'New York'. Use 'there's a big park in the middle of New York'. 'Very interested' is wrong because 'interested' describes a person; the park is 'interesting'. Suggestion: use 'it's very interesting.'