Parks— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Make your answer more grammatical, concise and coherent. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid hesitations and incorrect tense/forms, and give one or two specific supporting details connected with linking words. Keep to 2–4 sentences maximum.

Example: Yes. I loved going to parks when I was a child because my family often took me there on weekends. For example, I used to play on the swings and small musical instruments with my friends, which made those visits fun and memorable.

Suggestion: Answer directly and correct common errors (infinitive form, subject-verb agreement). Reduce filler words and repeat information only once. Use a linking word to add a reason or example and keep it within 2–4 sentences.

Example: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks. I no longer use the swings, but I like watching children play because it is cheerful and relaxing, and parks are always a pleasant place to unwind.

Suggestion: Be concise and organize your ideas: state your opinion, give a clear reason using linking words (because, therefore), and provide a specific detail or example. Avoid repeating the same point and reduce hesitations.

Example: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because it is very crowded and there are too few green spaces. For instance, our neighborhood has only one small park for thousands of residents, so adding more parks would improve recreation and air quality.

Suggestion: Make your response specific and grammatically correct. Mention one or two concrete parks or features you want to see, use correct verb forms, and link your reasons clearly. Keep it to two sentences if possible.

Example: Yes, I would like to visit national parks in the United States in the future because many of them have unique wildlife and scenic trails. For example, I hope to see Yellowstone for its geysers and diverse animals, and the Grand Canyon for its dramatic views.

× I used to like go to the park when I was a child, uh, because, uh, when I'll be there in the parks, there is a lot of, uh, playing instrument was there and with my friends, we, we are playing in the park and, uh, we then our family. So it was a very great moment.

✓ I used to like going to the park when I was a child because when I was there there were a lot of people playing musical instruments, and my friends and I would play in the park with our families. It was a very special time.

The phrase 'like go' requires the gerund form 'like going' (verb + -ing). 'I'll be there' is incorrect for past context; use 'I was there'. 'There is a lot of, playing instrument was there' is ungrammatical: use 'there were a lot of people playing musical instruments'. Use object pronoun order 'my friends and I' (subject) and past habitual 'would play' or 'used to play'. Combine fragmented clauses into clear past-tense sentences.

× Yes, I still like to going to the parks now, however, I don't use the slider swings anymore, uh, but I do like watching the kids playing with the slides and swing and they're playing with their friends and uh, this give me a pleasure and however, the park is always a good place for amusement, so.

✓ Yes, I still like going to the parks now; however, I don't use the swings anymore, but I do like watching the kids play on the slides and swings with their friends. This gives me pleasure; the park is always a good place for amusement.

'Like to going' mixes infinitive and gerund; use either 'like to go' or 'like going' — here 'like going' matches natural expression. 'Slider swings' is awkward; 'swings' suffices. Use base verb after 'watch' or 'watching' + object + bare infinitive: 'watching the kids play'. Subject-verb agreement: 'this give' -> 'this gives'. Use plural 'swings' and 'slides' consistently and correct punctuation for clarity.

× Uh, there are very few parks, Uh, uh, current, uh, rightly currently we have. So I think, uh, it is very important to have parts and we have a few parts. So, and we, I would like to see more parks in your city because the, our city is very crowded and there is a very, uh, less proportion of park according to the peoples living here. So it's very important to have more parks.

✓ There are very few parks in my city currently. I think it is important to have parks and we only have a few. I would like to see more parks because our city is very crowded and there is a low proportion of parkland compared to the number of people living here.

Pronoun and possessive errors: 'your city' is wrong when speaking about the speaker's city; use 'my city' or 'our city' consistently. 'Peoples' should be 'people'. 'Less proportion of park' is ungrammatical; use 'a low proportion of parkland' or 'too few parks compared to the population'. Remove filler words and reorder for clarity.

× Yes. I would like to visit uh, some parks in the future. So I have saw in the uh youtubes in the social media that in uh USA, they have really uh, some amazing parts and I would like to visit those uh parks because they have really special features very uh uh, various kind of animals We are.

✓ Yes. I would like to visit some parks in the future. I saw on YouTube and other social media that in the USA there are some really amazing parks, and I would like to visit those parks because they have special features and various kinds of animals.

'I have saw' is incorrect; the present perfect requires 'I have seen' or use simple past 'I saw' — simple past fits 'in the past I viewed videos'. Use 'on YouTube' not 'in the youtubes'. 'Parts' should be 'parks'. 'Various kind of animals' should be 'various kinds of animals' or 'various kinds of animals'. Remove stray 'We are' fragment and keep tense consistent.