Parks— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be consistent with tense and avoid fillers. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail and a brief reason. Keep it within 2–3 sentences and remove hesitation sounds.

Example: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. I often went there with my friends or sometimes with my family, and I enjoyed playing games on the grass because it felt free and fun.

Suggestion: Correct grammar (tense and articles) and be concise. Begin with a direct statement, then give one clear example of how parks help you, using linking words like "because" or "for example."

Example: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks. For example, after a stressful day I walk among the trees because the fresh air and quiet paths help me relax.

Suggestion: Fix possessive errors and repetition. Give a direct answer and one specific reason or location suggestion. Use linking words like "because" to explain why.

Example: Definitely. I would like to see more parks near residential areas because they would give people easy access to green space for exercise and relaxation.

Suggestion: Avoid repetition and improve verb forms. Provide a clear, complete sentence with a brief specific example of the type of park you want to visit and why.

Example: Yes, I would love to visit a large botanical garden in another city because I enjoy seeing different plants and learning about new species.

× When I was a child, I want to go in the park with my friends, uh, some sometimes with my family and classmates or whatever. That makes me happy.

✓ When I was a child, I wanted to go to the park with my friends, sometimes with my family and classmates. That made me happy.

The sentence refers to a past habitual action, so use past tense 'wanted' and 'made'. 'Go in the park' is incorrect preposition; use 'go to the park'. Remove filler words and duplicate words for clarity. Suggestion: Use simple past for past habits (wanted, played, visited). Use 'go to' with places.

× Though I'm not a child anymore but now I am really loved going to park because for example you have a stressful day. Park will definitely help you to change your mood every day.

✓ Though I'm not a child anymore, I really love going to the park because, for example, if you have a stressful day, the park will definitely help you change your mood.

Mixes tenses and incorrect verb form 'loved' used instead of present 'love'. 'Going to park' needs article 'the park'. Use conditional 'if' rather than 'because for example you have...'. Include 'the' before 'park' when speaking about parks in general context. Also remove redundant words. Suggestion: Keep present tense for current preferences and use articles correctly.

× Definitely, I would like to see more parks in their city actually nearby nearby my city.

✓ Definitely, I would like to see more parks in my city or nearby.

Use of 'their city' is wrong because speaker refers to their own city; use 'my city'. Duplicate 'nearby' repeated. Simplify phrase order: 'in my city or nearby.' Suggestion: Use correct possessive pronoun and avoid repetition.

× Yes, if there's any chance to go in another place with with the with the park, I grab the opportunity.

✓ Yes, if there's any chance to go to another place with a park, I will grab the opportunity.

Mixes conditional forms and verb tenses: 'if there's any chance' (present) requires future/modal 'I will grab' or 'I would grab' depending on meaning; use 'will grab' for a likely future action. 'Go in another place' requires 'go to another place'. Remove duplicate 'with the'. Use article 'a park'. Suggestion: Use consistent conditional structure: 'If + present, will + base verb.'