Parks— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Improve grammar (past tense), reduce repetition, add a clear topic sentence and one or two specific details. Keep within 3–4 sentences and use linking words for coherence.

Example: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. I often went with my parents and played football there with my siblings, which was my favorite activity. Because the parks were spacious and safe, we could play for hours without worries.

Suggestion: Correct present tense and sentence structure, avoid repetition, use linking words, and give one specific reason or example (e.g., exercise, fresh air). Keep it concise (2–3 sentences).

Example: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks because walking there is good exercise and helps me relax. For example, I usually go for a 30-minute walk in the morning to get fresh air and clear my mind.

Suggestion: Avoid repetition and improve sentence flow. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give specific reasons using linking words (e.g., because, for example). Provide one concrete example of how parks help people.

Example: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they offer peaceful places for people to relax. For example, someone feeling stressed can sit by a pond, watch birds, or read a book to calm down.

Suggestion: Be specific about which parks and why. Use correct grammar and reduce fillers (yeah, so). Mention one or two facilities and a brief reason for visiting. Keep to 2–3 concise sentences.

Example: Yes, I would like to visit some well-known national parks in my country, especially the new botanical park near the capital. I want to go there with my family because it has good walking trails and playgrounds, so everyone can enjoy the day.

× Yes, I love to go to parks.

✓ Yes, I loved going to parks.

The question asks about past habit 'Did you like going to parks as a child?' so the student should use past tense. Use 'loved' and gerund 'going' to indicate enjoyment in the past.

× When I was a child, I usually go with my parents, go there and enjoy lot there.

✓ When I was a child, I usually went with my parents, went there and enjoyed a lot there.

The clause begins with 'When I was a child' so verbs should be in past tense. Change 'go' to 'went' and 'enjoy' to 'enjoyed'. Also add the article 'a' before 'lot' or better 'enjoyed it a lot' for natural phrasing.

× I usually play football there with my with my siblings.

✓ I usually played football there with my siblings.

Past context requires past tense 'played'. Remove duplicated phrase 'with my'. Keep 'my siblings' as correct object pronoun phrase.

× Yeah, I enjoy a lot there.

✓ Yeah, I enjoyed it a lot there.

Context is past; use past tense 'enjoyed' and include 'it' or 'my time there' for grammatical completeness and natural expression.

× Yes, I still going to parks because it's good for health to go to parks and and we should go there and stay there and observe the nature so we can find peace, peace there and.

✓ Yes, I still go to parks because they are good for our health; we should go and stay there to observe nature so we can find peace.

Use simple present 'still go' for current habit. Replace 'it's good for health' with 'they are good for our health' (agreement and article). Remove repetition and extra 'and'. Use 'observe nature' not 'observe the nature'. Finish sentence clearly.

× Yes, I love to see parks in my city because people when they feel low, they usually go to parks and find, find peace for peace for them.

✓ Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because when people feel low they usually go to parks and find peace.

Question asks 'Would you like to see more parks...' so 'would like' fits. Remove repeated words 'find, find' and 'for peace for them'. Keep clause order natural: 'when people feel low' and use 'find peace'.

× They usually observe the nature. They're watching birds, reading books, reading books.

✓ They usually observe nature. They watch birds and read books.

Use 'observe nature' (no definite article). Maintain consistent simple present for habitual actions: 'watch' and 'read'. Remove duplicate 'reading books' and use parallel verbs.

× Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?

✓ Are there any parks you would like to go to in the future?

The expected polite future/wish uses 'would like' rather than simple 'want' in responses about future preferences; question can be softened. Either is acceptable, but 'would like' matches typical exam register.

× Yeah, so many parks in our country, some of them are two luxury parks and yeah, I want to go to there with my parents or siblings.

✓ Yes, there are so many parks in our country; some of them are luxury parks and I want to go to them with my parents or siblings.

Original lacks subject-verb 'there are'. 'two luxury parks' unclear—likely 'some of them are luxury parks'. Use 'go to them' not 'go to there'. Remove filler 'yeah' and fix punctuation.

× So we enjoy a lot there and these types of parts parks have lot of facilities so we can enjoy.

✓ So we would enjoy it a lot there, and these types of parks have a lot of facilities so we can have fun.

Use correct plural 'parks' and singular 'a lot' with article. 'Parts' is incorrect; should be 'parks'. 'Enjoy' is vague; 'have fun' or 'enjoy it' is clearer. Match conditional 'would enjoy' if speaking about planned future visit.